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J.D.

How could you end it there?!? ARGH! That was one of the most entertaining chapters from a certain point of view. Thanks.

Josh

Nice twist at the end. Wonder what implications that will have

Loqi

Nice to see I'm not the only one who can't help spawning new threads. They just kind of happen, and when they do, you can't just *not* follow them. Fortunately for us, it just means more Caleb.

Loqi

Spawning new threads in the "following an idea down a rabbit hole" sense. If I spawn too many threads in my day job a server crashes.

Joe Topp

Loved the story and again thank you for your time

Xariyl Ucal

Great chapter again, as always!

Ryan salter

What! Why end it there it makes me feel icky does he have compulsion or just telepathy I mean is he controlling his parents just what!!!

James Haslam

I LOLed for real.when Caleb said that Ness hogs the bed!

James Haslam

How old is Edgar? 6 or so. He must be a wild power user.

Science695

Caleb didn't detect any compulsions in the previous interractions. Wouldn't he have smelled the "coppery" scent of another compulsion user? Also, its a little unclear if Edgar sent the thought to Caleb, or if Caleb just picked up the surface thought of Edgar wanting to say that to Caleb.