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Thanks for your patience

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Azaria

I can't get over how good your storytelling is. Thanks for continuing to write, despite the busier schedule. It's amazingly good, and well worth the wait.

James Bell

Phenomenal as always, excited to read what happens next from the cliffhanger

J.D.

Thanks for finding the time to create and post another fun and exciting chapter which is impressive considering the time restraint you must be under. This chapter seemed to have something interesting and unusual at every turn. Aside from another cliffhanger, having one or two comments being dropped by characters has increased my interest in new directions which I didn’t think was even a possibility but you manage to keep throwing those curveballs no matter what your personal situation currently is. I appreciate your demand for excellence in everything you write since in the long run, it benefits all of us.

Mr. T

Such a good chapter. I can't wait for the next one. I hope you are enjoying your new job and still have time to write, we appreciate you!!

Dustin Harlan

Damn you and your cliffhangers!! Great chapter as always!

OkieDokeDude

Holy cow! What an ending! I hate cliff hangers, but can see this going several different ways. I think this is going to turn into a headache before it’s over. Great chapter - as always.

J H

Ooooh, only three on one? I can imagine Caleb’s anger – I hope he can control himself and not permanently cripple the assault team – save it for something really amazing to do to Walter!

Keith Crandall

Given Caleb's temper me thinks someone is going to wonder what happened to them. Im going to predict that John takes a hand in the downfall of Trevor's dad....not looking pretty for someone.

Jayden

It’s really cool seeing these places that I’m so familiar with being in a story that I enjoy so much. Oakridge is a small town with some of the best mountain bike trails, close to a great mountain for skiiing, and other fun outdoor activities. Seems like maybe they got some backup from Eugene/Springfield to help with their police response this time :P