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Caleb 65 (Patreon)

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2023-07-28 13:23:03
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I got  that friday feeling.

Comments

Rachee64

These cliffhangers will be the death of me... I am loving it! Thanks PM!

J.D.

You keep building suspense and something is liable to pop, most likely my skull. The way everyone works so flawlessly as a group or separate units to accomplish whatever goal they need to achieve is awesome to read. There was a bit of a surprise when Maggie basically gave her blessing.

Robert A. Lane

I agree with Rachee64 reminds me of the short cliffhangers in old movies theaters before the main movie

Rhys

Any bets on who it is? My guess one of the 3 Babe Ruth wannabes or Trevor.

Rhys

Um can anyone tell me if its OK to offer feedback on the chapters here?

Joe Topp

Argh talk about cliff hangers .love your work PM

RA93CC

Oh,the suspense, so good. Love the detail and again can’t wait until next Friday.

Rhys
>>115026049

As I read the story, gradually each character started to have a voice and tone in my head. In this chapter though, Dianne and Maggie, (Maggie in particular) don't sound like...... how........ they have before, Maggie certainly didn't sound like a senior person with long experience, she sounded, well, like a hot head, ( a severely immature one at that, the don't get caught made sense, her tone afterwards just felt off ) this is different from when Caleb went over to Spain and and supposedly wrecked everything with speaking with the head of the Gonzales family. Anyways, just my two cent's worth (Disclaimer, my thoughts are rarely, if ever, worth that much, lol). Awesome chapter, thanks for writing!

Tim Derr

Keep up the great work!

Ray Karnes

I hate cliffhangers!!!!

J H

Great that you are still giving us an new chapter weekly in spite of your more demanding work life! As for two ‘cliffhangers’ in a row, this one in Caleb 65 is an entirely fair who done it – the previous one with the fire blazing was much more of a worry.

OkieDokeDude

Absolutely brilliant the way you cleverly eliminated most of the ‘usual suspects’ from suspicion. My interest in the story is seemingly unquenchable. I cannot wait to see where Caleb’s story goes next.

bonz3407

Just to throw a curve ball into the mix...we haven't heard anything from Caleb's newly minted power user brother. He could be implicated by the football team and the need for extra money. Kind of a stretch but....

Mark

Anybody want to speculate on the disposition of his grandfather's ring?