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How's everyone enjoying DPS? Sorry, no polls lately. I'm working through the standard power set :)

Comment below with any requests for interactions or scenes!

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Revan84

Loving it so far!! I think the way she also follows a story and polls is a very fun addition. And you've got a nice mix going of her using physical and mental powers.

Koopz

Love the beautydom in this story. You really went crazy with hot descriptions and sex in this particular story. Personally, i would love to read how Dana could crack the “writing” by which she gains new powers. Would be fun that she could write herself or “direct” the author into writing her very own “ascension agenda”. Pretty sure she would go into the fantasies that you hinted in the first chapter of getting true comics book-inspired powers (super strength, telekinesis, laser beam, flight, absorbing powers etc.)

Bob Bobson

I second power-absorption / transfer because it highlights the essential relational aspect of power.

Finyet

Visit the Home of a rich/ celebrity guy she has a crush on. Toy with him, hunt him down. Let him think he's safe in his panic room for a moment, then tear it apart before doing what she wants to him...

Vwolfy19

Piggybacking from this, she should use a slew of powers on him. Invading his dreams at some point. Killing him and bringing back to life while trying different powers.

Thriolkos

I've given this feedback before but I'm still hoping the " evil" girl aspect goes up a notch, which is what this story was polled on, no? Still doesn't feel truly villainous to me and more of an antihero. Renata/Superior's buildup was similar but at least the moral compass fell dark much quicker in those stories.