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A new chapter of Third Eye Book 2 is available for early access reading!

It did not occur to me until I wrote this that there is WAY more food talk in this book than the first, or even, any other book in the first five book volume. I actually cut out a scene of eating street corn and loudly talking with a mouth full of corn and Mexican cheese sauce because I was afraid the amount of food description in one non-food based book would be too much.

On that note, what do you guys think of the Fieri-level descriptions of food in this series? Is it a good thing, or has it become too overwhelming? Or is it like looking at animated food where it makes even the most mundane or inedible thing seem delicious? I'm legitimately curious about what you think about it.

Anyway there's a wizard in this one.

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Book 2, Chapter 10

More humans than had ever been crammed into one place assembled into the parking lot of a shopping mall that Friday afternoon. Some staged themselves behind booths where they mongered plants, eggs, jars, and meat to the rest, who mulled over familiar and foreign produce while saying 'oh that look...

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