Page 3 redraft (Patreon)

Made a bit more progress on cleaning up those first few pages to spruce things up a tad. I think I already mentioned this, but while I'm not planning on redoing a substantial chunk of the first book, I do want the first several pages to at least make more of an interesting impact on first read than what my inexperienced self was able to make at the time.

I will probably redraw a lot of faces throughout though XD