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I'm in the final stretch of all this. Deadline is still the 22nd. I'm done with all the page updates at this point but I still have all the exporting and processing to do, so that'll take the last few days here.

The first couple of pages here are considerably different from their original versions. Mainly that Kheil doesn't throw rocks at Oz because I realized that throwing rocks at the person who's supposed to be your BFF is... well, not the kind of relationship I want them to have. I just put that in there years ago because my tiny little baby writer brain hadn't developed the discerning skills to avoid that. But I also think it's funnier now!

Secondly, Oz's dialog with Minkilis. The original version had him being all flustered, which I later realized didn't quite match up with the rest of his vibe. He's a successful socialite who clearly knows how to give people what they want, so having him lean into it more confidently just makes more sense in my mind. Plus I wanted to give her slightly more personality than "chick Oz flirts with once as a narrative tool" lol.


Anyway, enjoy!

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