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And with this, the chapter closes, and I must take some time to lay down the ground work to really hammer the last chapter of the book into place. I'm also gonna try and plan out page layouts in a big bulk since that's usually the stuff that takes up most of my time/brain power, so getting it out of the way means I might be able to potentially make more pages per week more reliably.

I'll also take this opportunity to clean up some stuff in book 2, specifically getting Oz to be a bit more on model in some places and make sure Al has the correct color palette, but that won't take long.

I hope you enjoy this little cliffhanger teehee

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Applestone

Dang it, they caught him again. I do enjoy this cliffhanger and I bet that most likely the next chapter will start with other people first. Oh well, Z is aware of the symptoms, they're actively looking for him, and they know that some cameras have been tampered with, so it's only a matter of time until they find him again. I wonder what his current mission is though, because the bad guy seemed confident that he can still do it.

Some Ed

I'm not sure "again" is the right word. They were prepared for this possibility. They would have to have been rather foolish to not think that something so simple could go awry. I like that BMBrice's villains aren't so easily thwarted. Also, as I'm thinking about it... I'm pretty sure the voice here wasn't concerned that Fallan might die from this. If Fallan dies, we can assume that the perp will be hunted to the ends of the planet and they know it. Well, ok, maybe Kraon isn't that good of a father, but Deset doesn't seem like the kind of person to take that chance. Still, that doesn't stop them from playing it up like that was a risk.