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Guys if you have better dialouges or story relating dialouges, please write down below or message me.

And also you can correct if you feel some words cringe or bad. I won't mad about it.

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Kevin

Love the dialog

Kasin

Awesome. Just on the first one it’d make more sense to say “start cleaning my cheese filled dick,bitch” and “your tongue under that foreskin” on the second page

DareDemon Den

Dialogue corrections/suggestions; Page 1. " Oh my... How did you even get this big? " " The smell is starting to hit my brain. " " my dick that's full of cheese " Page 2. " I hate doing disgusting things like this... " " tongue " Page 3. (no corrections needed) Page 4. " A...And I've never done anything like this before... not even for my husband. " Page 6. " Wait. You thought it would be that easy to adopt me? " Page 7. " just keep looking into my eyes " Page 8. "the smells keeps hitting my brain... I'm going to lose my mind. " Page 11. " Open your mouth and let me check if you drank it all up or not. " Page 12. " Wow. I'll suggest you freshen up before you talk to your husband with that stinky breath, ma'am. "

lumystical

dude the dialogue makes this so much hotter 😫😫