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Published:
2023-09-22 13:32:24
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Uh, guys? Are you not liking the new fic? If not, then why so that I could improve it...

Comments

Kurozake

An mc who just has an extreme lightning affinity doesn't sound overly interesting to me. In my head I kind of picture a Sasuke without Sharingan but with the Raikage's Cloak of Lightning.

Kurozake
>>118163132

In Kumo I would personally prefer a story that builds on Mabui's Heavenly Transfer Technique with something like "Light Release".

TheRavenbrand

It's too early to tell you are still establishing the characters.