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I think I’ve Improved somewhat. My style is a bit more defined and, I don’t know… Let me know what you think.

For context: This is an Original Character from a digital novel/game I was working on.  I’d like to reintroduce one of the main characters, Rue Atano. She’s an apprentice from a horrible institution that treats its apprentices like Guinea pigs. Rue is a self assured apprentice with a singular goal; Get a Day Off. Together with Elyas, another apprentice, they will do whatever it takes.

Rue and Elyas go through all sorts of shenanigans, from silly to sexy. Will they be able to accomplish the mundane and get a day off, or will it go horribly wrong? Expect adventure, ghosts, shapeshifters, spell-casting and more.  

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HentaiHetaira

I think you have improved. Though the original is pretty good too. ;) And sounds like a fun plot idea.