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Extra Stuff - Being Fiona - Phase 2 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-11-19 05:36:20
Edited:
2024-11-19 05:40:11
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2026-06
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I've created a few slides discussing where the story might go beyond the outline I created in this post: https://www.patreon.com/posts/112641255

Jess and Felix are in for an interesting summer depending on how the story goes!

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Spam_Happy

If Felix gets a job that requires a neurolink implant maybe the implant could be a perk of the job? Then Jess could end up doing the job as Felix (as per slide 5)? I really like the idea of body swapping however it comes about.

Lonjil

However the story ends up going, seems like it will be very interesting.

Samantha Louise

This is all very fascinating and can’t wait to see what direction you take the story! Whichever one you choose it will be great

solo

To me, it seems plausible that even if Jess is moving away from body rentals, she might be tempted to do one last grand, seemingly unique, gesture (and lots of money) to do the elderly couple's request, and that would get Felix his implant.

Disbet

I think the most sensible way for Felix getting an implant is one paid for by some kind of company or organization. A public research lab, a tech startup, maybe the manufacturers of the Dreamband or the implant. As for the reason, it may be a research program that Felix applies to as a bright student, or maybe the startup or manufacturer have noticed some patterns in Felix game / mind data that they are interested in studying. I'm not fond at all about putting mermaids in the "real" world. They were fine in a Dreamband simulation, I prefer they stay there. Same for space research, unless maybe it sticks to low-Earth orbit or the Moon; still I would prefer if "real" characters stay around Seattle rather than disperse around the world. I find that I can project myself more in the Fiona universe when it is closer to our own (as it is up to now) rather than a very different future with space travel and mermaids. I'm also not fond of Jess paying for the implant (too costly, and for what extraordinary reason?) or the wealthy couple idea (way too close to grooming to my taste, and may come with long-term pressure for Felix).

falconfal

could go a higher drama route: Felix gets hit by a car and gets the implant to help recover motor function, thus paid for by medical insurance

Ampws

Definitely a good idea for Felix to end up with a neural implant.