Sneakers 3 P 23 (Patreon)

How do i minimize my shading while making things look more dynamic. 

Smaller shade with more contrast? 

How do i made my dialogue better. 

How do i make this conversation feel more real. Are these things important?

 Maybe i should just draw sex? 

She's worried bout how embarrassing this is, maybe i can insert a little game idea.  It can mentally deflect the embarrassment maybe... oh i think this could be fun

I need to be better at backgrounds...

I really likee this hair

how do i develop ritsu and holland better?

maybe a timelapse beginning chapter 4 with examples of poorly performed date activities

These were some things i was thinking about lol