SM 6: Hollow Sorrows - Deleted script/scenes pt3 (Patreon)

HI HIH IHI!!! Late fella here!!! Last time I showed you scripts and doodles about the first script that were changed or not used to make the episode more impactful!!You might know the drill but I will explain it again: I will show you the first script and explain why I did not used them and I will show ya some doodles for fun! sorry for any "language error" in the script.After Patty gets possessed everything is the same, except for some of the circles. Initially, Gregor was strict with the kids, but then I changed it to be more judgemental towards others, in this case, the father listens to the kids about how the Happy Fella will kill them and he defends them, but most people think "lust" is only ... ehmm... "THE DESIRE OF FLESH AND FLUIDS", it can also mean to have pleasure on doing something, in this case killing. I changed it because it sounds bad (ahahha funny right?) and made the father trust the Happy Fella, since he knows the kids are mischievious. (also, this script has different tittles for the scenes~)

The next one was changed to make it short, and also getting rid off the "good kid" arc, it was too soon for the kids (and they don't deserve it). Gregor gets to talk more here and takes the focus out of the kids, while he understands the situation with the "giant guy in the van" the kids trust Frank, so they needed to talk more. While I would like to have this conversation between Frank and Gregor, I think he doesn't need to have much to say to a criminal.

 The last one is a particular one because IS ABOUT IGNACIO!!! His threat as changed to make it more aggresive and personal! In the script it sounded angry but funny, like he was mocking the kids, BUT THE CATCH HERE IS GREGOR!!! in the original idea Gregor scolded the kids and Ignacio acted all nice and fake, but THAT'S NOT IGNACIO! In this script Gregor will have a "close conversation" with Ignacio but that shouldn't happen, SOME OF YOU ALREADY KNOW WHY, and for that same reason I can't show the text in this script.

 And that's it for the momment! Like I said before, sorry I took some time, the power supplay of my pc died and I needed to wait a week to even work on my personal stuff!!! I hope you like the little doodles and I hope I can talk more about this episode!! k byebyebeybeyeby!!!