SM5: Tender Treats - The Story (Patreon)

HELLO!!! sorry for the late update! been focusing on the new episode!! So, before I start doing the script I like to have a visual Idea of what could happen,  in the episode the is Halloween so I wanted the kids to be hyper and go walk the entire town!

The idea was kinda simple, show the villian, how "evil" it can be, and then  follow the kids to their houses! This episode had a bunch of changes because I am never happy with the 1st idea for the ending , and this episode had a bunch of dark/edgy/heavy jokes and more corruption around the town. One of the joke ideas was to add 2 cocky and corrupt policemen to "challenge" Jack and John, whoever captures Bob stays with the job, at one point they tackle a kid dressed as Bob/Demon (this kid is now the Costume Guy/ Fake Bob in the episode), I even wanted to have some kind of rivalry between John and one of them, but the episode shouldn't be about the police, so those 2 ended up as a cameo/easter egg/joke in the episode.

heere's the joke ideas I had first with the epsiode, plus the 4 new characters in it

I remember there was a fight between the police and Bob, but one of my friends said " It's better if the kids cause his demise rather than other characters causing it" which I agreed!!! Bob was gonna be killed by bullets not by the car, and, in the old script, after the Police shoots him the first time, I wanted Bob to attack John's leg, but that was a lot of shooting and killing Bob!!  Edit: oops! I forgot! Streber was supoused to be Lila's neighbour, and the kids will know him and all of that... but yeaaah naaaaah, I didn't like that so I moved him preeeetttyy far away from her hosue and that's pretty much it!! now  I need to update the episode sm6 over here!!ehmm idk, I will talk about the cedits on wednesday! k bye!!!