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Chapter 53 - 60

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Xisaro

Great chapters! Saw a mistake. Onii-san is for older brother. Onee-san is older sister. Also, wasn't Kaguya also sealed in the moon? I'm really fuzzy on everything that happened after Nagato died.

VladWrites

Quality took a hit in 59 and 60 the dialog felt kinda stilted and awkward and there were a good number of grammatical errors especially in 60s Tsunade scene, alright chapters but they need work.