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Necrosis

I love you for the updates

Sksk4128

Now I wouldn't be surprised if Anko tried to mark her territory

TheTerminus

Itachi is doing too much into little time. His politics are done because effectively the situation is kinda shitty —they are losing— but it will make the population not love him and maybe even detest him. And not many people would want to have children in a situation like this one, I wouldn’t be surprised if the population has gone dramatically down in response at the stress in these last years. I kinda hope Anko and the MC are the only couple of the story — this ship is already strange since the MC is 13 or something and Anko is 24… yikes, cradled robbers— If he put Kenjutsu in the slot, would his Wind Blade get better anyway? Since it is originally a technique for the blade? The decision of Spirit enchantment is good, with the Body one his chakra will growth more. Would chakra control change something? With Fuinjutsu and Hirashin slot, I kinda hope he can learn to build up a platform for teleportation for all shinobi if possible. It would be godsend for mobility between villages and more —like evacuations of civilians—, if he could make one for the single shinobi, like it activate if one shinobi is too injured… it would help to save more of them and stop the decline of the population too. There are many ways in which seals related to space are busted, this story made us see how they used it for barriers too —letting monsters cores and shinobi chakra charge them— and puppets, even if we didn’t see them in action. This crossover apart of some things is kinda well done and innovative. The first Naruto with the portals too for what I understand. Thanks for the update!

DancingMonkey65

The way Itachi is going, He is going to need that Hiraishin soon. Idk I think I like MC with Temari more. He doesn’t even know Anko that much. Plus the whole age difference thing.

rockus4

I wonder since he is increasing both his physical and spiritual side will his chakra increase also .