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Chapters 1- 20 of this story.

+10 chapters since I'll be uploading Chapter 10 soon enough in Questionable Questing site. Hope you guys enjoy reading these chapters :)

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K. W.

Good stuff so far. Butterflies are certainly spreading.

Lord Sturm

Any ETA for chapters 20+? Making MC so OP is not very good. Furthermore giving manablades and such shit is not good for story. Better to make him just on strength level og Gregor Cligane + better reflexes and speed and instead of horrible manabldes make use of Melisandre (sacrifice few spies to temporary enchant good steel blade ) this way people will understand why he keeps Melisandre and see him as heroic figure instead of magical-heretical abomination...

Cerber

I feel like things are going too fast and that he might leave this world too fast. Could you at least make him remain in GoT, so he may train himself properly and make him explore the world? Making him consolidate himself more and leave GoT a more secured place for his family and allies? He could also uplift and better the infrastructure in that world as well before he leaves. Leaving right away after clearing that world seems a bit rushed Edit. Except for that, love the things that are going on

Wanous

He's still got the period of unrest after king Bobby b dies and War against the others roughly a decade I believe

Boyo

Really good stuff! I actually think the pacing has been decent. The only scene I feel like you skipped was the reunion between Stannis and the MC in Kings Landing. It was a bit jarring jumping from right after the battle to him returning home already. He has a decent window now to continue digging in and building his influence before the War of the Five. On one hand, this period could drag on; I don't think it should be rushed either though. Anyway, that's just my two cents. Thanks for the chapters! I hope you are feeling better :)