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Chapter 31-40

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Boyo

Thanks for the chapters!

Cerber

Couldnt Steph just do a westeros trip and give all the corrupt, assholes and his enemies a delayed heart attack or something? Spreading the word that thise individuals were punished by the gods? It would have been so easy. Spread some rumors

Darkanlan

Best way to deal with the faith is to heal people and get everyone to say he's gods chosen and then tell everyone about how the sept's people are all corrupt and have lost the faith of the gods. Better than catering to their stupidity.

Ahtu Nyarlathotep

A somewhat unrealistic political turn of events, but not completely unbelievable. I'll buy it, salvaged the previous ending as well as it pretty much possibly could. Some of the math is way off tho, like him gaining 3 int points at 102 int, and only reaching 103 int from it. It should be at least 105, and if I understood it correctly, he should only have been at 101 before, resulting in it being 104. Because I recall no mentions of any int gain in between there, and when you previously pegged it at 101, just a bit further up. There were a couple of other misses before that, but this one I think was too blatant to skip. On an unrelated note, it'll be interesting to see how he handles the Sept in Old Town...

Zerak

You are contradicting yourself by having him say he is forgetting stuff from his old life yet remembering a lot of song lyrics.

Zerak

Theory of evolution of a controversial topic in our world, and that is without hard proof of a god or gods existing. For a person who has a Waifu Catalog he should be much more open minded since he will go to worlds where humans where in fact created by their local gods or what have you. So while it would be a good idea to explain genetics or evolution theory to her in how animals will adapt over time to the change in environment, I really don’t think he should be telling her that is where humans come from. It comes off more of you as an author believing in something and deciding it is true rather than someone with an INT stat in the 3 digits realising that the multiverse is a big place and each world should be treated differently. With how magic works for all we know the Starks could have actually been wolfs that changed to werwolfs then humans over thousands of years. Also another thing you need to keep an eye out for is that the MC can’t just introduce info and tell people this is the truth. He needs proof of how he reach such a conclusion, at least if you want to raise the education level of people in that world. Critical thinking and the scientific method are much more important than just giving them info and telling them it’s the truth.

Happyftw

Hey, not a comment regarding this fic, but as a new patreon i am reading your older fictions and cant access the last chapters as they are behind gold tier. Could you change them to silver (this is true for all the earlier fictions)

Ahtu Nyarlathotep

I thought this before, but think I really need to mention it on this rewrite: You've repeatedly used the past tense of "won" instead of "win" erroneously on several occasions. You might want to fix that before posting it elsewhere, it's liable to make for a confusing read otherwise. Noteable enough to perhaps make someone reread it, to see if they misunderstood.

Ankit

I... don't know how to do that. If you want to read my earlier fictions then send me your email and I'll send you the txt files.