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The link to the pictures:- https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/waifu-catalog-nightmare-mode-asoiaf-start.21238/page-85#post-6674143 

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Kasikan

I hope he kills Jaime during the duel. Cersei might be pissed, but his uncle would laugh his ass off at it. Would be a good way to start thinning the herd of Lannisters. Also might give him a good opportunity to kill off Tywin if he's stupid enough to try to pick a fight over his idiot sons death.

Ahtu Nyarlathotep

You need to replace a lot of "knew" with "know" m8. Knew is past tense, it's a statement that something was already known at a previous date. While "know" is present tense, something that's stated to be known in the now. When you say for example "I knew it!" It speaks about having known that fact previously, and having eventually been proven right. It does not preclude knowing it in the now, but it speaks of the fact that you "knew it" at a previous point in time. Hence most of the time, you'll find that "know" is the correct terminology. As it speaks of something a person/character "knows" in the now. While something they "knew", might in fact not even be something they still "know" right now. Like saying "I once knew how to do that." One of those things I have had to say unfortunately often. Or at least had reason to say, it's not like one really wants to openly acknowledge it to yourself. You just push on and hope to remember it as you go along, it works most of the time.

Boyo

He almost died fighting Cannibal because he hasn't used his skill points. At this point, you are holding onto them to use as a deus ex machina. Are you waiting for him to start losing to the Night King, only to give him a shounen power-up? The MC not using them for training purposes doesn't track. His stats are high enough that he can't really get any gains from hard work. In fact, with higher stats he will be able to level faster; Higher stats means he can go further into his dungeon. Fighting higher-level enemies will make him grow faster. It's dumb, but holding those points is bugging me.

Ofunu

Damn. I guess it was too much to ask that there was bad weather that made him be late to save Joffrey

Ahtu Nyarlathotep

On the one positive note he could have fiddled with his brain while he did that. He could also have left a kill-switch, or he could just be keeping him alive to kill him at a later date.

Wanous

Hey just wondering if you had any timeline on the next updats?