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A Flawless Legacy (Naruto SI with WC) (Patreon)

Published:
2024-01-16 01:35:09
Imported:
2026-06

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Content

Chapter 23 - 30

Comments

Kalia

Very nice. But just want to let you know that during the Onoki pov you refer to the Tsuchikage as the Mizukage.

TallCam

You were calling the tsuchikage mizukage in ch30

LuluViBritania

ngl I was totally expecting Mito to ask him if Tsunade was part of his Harem plan and for him to just say "of course!"

fireball77

You're mistaking the Mizukage for the Tsuchikage chapter 30

David Hedges

Be careful about giving making too many unprompted changes to Mito or other characters, it really waters down the character and strains suspension of disbelief. The fact she isn't super old and already dead is one change. Another change is her having hirashin. Now she was super assassin stealth better than anyone else in the world as well. None of these things are particularly unreasonable or illogical, but it tarnishes the worldbuilding in general and that character in general when making explicit "anti-canon" changes like this when the world is supposed to be mostly canon instead of extremely AU. Now I have to expect Mito to randomly pull whatever is convenient out of her ass through author fiat which makes all these what are supposed to be super impressive feats that make her look competent look hollow and worthless.

kiddeath1998

Hey Arthur it says that they're Jutsu and stuff was not burned to Ash. Or did you mean it was burned to Ash their jutsus and important information and stuff