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Hiromi Mitsunashi

She startled awake as her agent alarm went off. Hiromi had a moment of inexplicable confusion, before she remembered.

Right. 

Late night with Motoko and the band, early morning for school.

Eugh.

She should just call in…

She groaned as she sat up and looked around her room. The neon lights, and old Tyger Claw stuff left the room streaming in different colors, enough she could see.

“Open window.” She croaked, and the shutters quietly opened letting in the Night City sunlight. 

Rubbing at her face she climbed out of her bed and staggered over to the bathroom. As she slipped under the fourteen sprayers, she tapped the wall panel for a real massage from the heads. Still half asleep she pulled up her agent's timeline. 

Tomorrow night was the big gig. Everything for that should be locked in, but she still needed to call the Club owner, and double check there weren't any issues. 

Hiromi had skipped a few clubs already for gigs when they tried to gotcha her with extra fees or other gonkshit. As if she was just a street brat, desperate for a chance at a real gig.

She smirked a little as she shifted, letting a sprayer get her right under the shoulder where her muscles felt a little locked up from sleeping on her arm funny.

Okay, she added that in for her lunch time, she could make the call while she ate. Next thing.

Section 9 was quiet, and most of the loot they’d gathered had been sold, but there were still a few bits and pieces that were sitting in storage. 

Some of that gonks security system hadn’t sold since anyone rich enough for a real security system wasn’t buying second hand from the people that had overcome the system.

No, Hiromi would need to reach out to gang contacts, they’d be more willing to pay at least partial price. Every mid range thug thought they needed security in case their many enemies came after them.

Unfortunately she hadn’t gotten any bites just yet.

She sent off a few more offers to the contacts she’d developed, and moved on.

SLS income had a discrepancy.

Her agent made the call as she groaned and shifted a bit in the water.

This is Richard.Steel.Ah, Boss. What do you want?Hiromi rolled her eyes, he was nervous, but he was still a brat. His words made him sound like he was demanding something from her, when it was, and always should be the opposite.

The last report had some income discrepancies.Yes Boss, I added it to the message last week. Harry lost a bag into the river while running from some street kids. We roughed them up after, but even if we wanted to, the water would have ruined it. We left the bag.

That’s right. She remembered getting the message now.

Fine, this is a one time allowance, tell Harry if he’s selling around bodies of water to avoid them from now on, or else.Yes Boss.Alright. Everything else looks good Richard, but I’m sending some marketing data I’ve been looking at, adjust the seller locations accordingly.You got it. He agreed although as always sounded less than willing. Marketing Data and research might as well be magic, he didn’t trust it, but Hiromi was firm on tracking where sales took place and when.

No point hanging outside a corpo building to sell some excitement to worker drones while they were all working. You had to show up when the job let off, or on their lunch or smoke breaks. If they got such a thing.

Just follow the information. Everything else has been quiet, correct?Yeah Boss, just the usual stuff, new gonks trying to make some territory, or scop suckers that don’t know that we got agreements. I’ve taken care of it.Good. The income has been tighter recently, but the new music BD’s have done well, excellent job pushing them.

It’s not the usual flavor, but it’s something new.It’s also important marketing for our most important VIP. Keep it up.Yeah, yeah I know. Ain’t about to start ship with the fucking Onryo.

Hiromi smiled and just hung up. Yes, fear my Motoko! Mwaahahaha!

She stretched a bit finishing the shower, and stepping out, drying off and makeup as she ran down the rest of her check list.

She scanned over the gigs on offer from some of the fixers, but nothing that was any good. A transport job was forwarded to Ichi though. He could send an acceptance or not on his own though.

As she added her customary flair to her eyelashes she sent out a text to Motoko just to get away from all the work.

Hiromi:Want to meet up for lunch?Motoko: Yes! Hiromi, save me! Alice wants to schedule practice every day until the gig! My fingers are chrome, and they’re still sore!

Hiromi twitched into a smile at Motoko’s whining.As she was responding, a beep on her agent, and she shifted focus. 

An offer for one of the security bots? Good. Those things were trash, and she was kinda glad Motoko had forgotten all about them since they were terrible offbrand versions, which made her want to strangle whoever bought them. Offloading them had been a chore. 

She swiftly messaged back, but adjusted the text to not sound desperate.

Even if she was. The cost to house the things was starting to inch closer to what she could pull from selling them. Dumping them was becoming more and more the optimal solution which made her want to grind her teeth.

With that she switched back to Motoko and rolled her eyes, a bit less willing to deal with Motoko complaining about work considering how much she dumped on Hiromi’s shoulders. 

Hiromi: Motoko…

Motoko: Noooo! Don’t give me disappointed Hiromi frown through text, that’s so mean! Okay fine, I’ll stop complaining. It’s only a couple days, and a little practice isn’t bad, I’m really trying to- Ah nevermind.Hiromi just shook her head at Motoko’s Rambling texts. Seriously usually she was quick with her texts, but sometimes when she was distracted she’d just ramble at her.

It was cute.

Hiromi: I’ll see you at lunch.Motoko: Great! Oh, I haven’t talked to David since we talked about bringing him in, you should bring him, so we can go over his training. Malcolm agreed to help out.Hiromi remembered, during Section 9’s last ‘training day’ that had mostly been Motoko trying to get everyone to work as hard as she did when it came to crazy soldier skills.

Seriously, Motoko could just pull out a pistol, stare at a target, and practice her movements for hours, utterly silent and focused as if the idea of boredom was for lesser people.

Hiromi smiled. It was one of Motoko’s cool points.

But… EUGH. What is with Motoko’s interest in the gonk?

Hiromi: Fine.

Motoko: Thanks Hiromi!

She rolled her eyes. Whatever. She rose up. Makeup done. Hair styled. She’d been growing it out since the mohawk days. Back before Motoko had changed. 

Now? She was growing her hair out, the natural way as she waited for inspiration to strike how she wanted to style it

She ran a hand through the growing thickness on the sides of her head. The former Mohawk being super long, while she had the rest of her hair still short thankfully gave her an acceptable look for now, but she needed to figure out what to do eventually.

Maybe she’d ask Motoko what she thought?She smiled knowing what her friend would say.

Anything is good? Or maybe “You’re cute no matter what you do?” She said aloud and smiled at herself, knowing that Motoko was great like that.

Well, the new Motoko. Her friend used to be such a bitch… Hiromi grinned. God, she’d been so…

She shook it off. Old Hiromi was gone, just like old Motoko. Only who they were now mattered, and Hiromi liked the new her, and the new Motoko.

They were still the same in some ways, but better.

Nodding she left her bathroom, and grabbed her Academy Uniform, slipping into the perfectly fitted uniform, she nodded as she adjusted the tie and skirt. Alright. Morning classes, a test she hadn’t prepared for, and a Financial Analysis report, she needed to start right now if she was going to have it ready in time for class.

But this was just a normal day for Hiromi Mitsunashi, Corpo, Section 9 manager, and probably the most powerful Teenager in Night City. She grinned as she reminded herself once again that Motoko was her personal assassin if needed. 

It made classes much less stressful when she knew in the back of her mind that their gruesome murder was only a phone call away.

It made her feel warm, that Motoko was there for her.

—--

The screams hit me as I played the last chord of Faint.

A week of preparation. Of playing over and over, and in the end, we just did the same set list as the Electric Orgasm. 

Alice had gotten cold feet about another new song, but that was fine. 

I watched as the crowd roared and bounced. 7th Hell, was a much fancier place than any other gig we’d done. Bigger place, more expensive, more packed.

I glanced over the bar where I could see corpo suits watching. Three of them. Music producers, here for us.

I even recognized the same guy from Dino’s place. 

“We’re  Stand Alone Complex! Thank you and good night!” I roared out, fist raised and got a good response right back.

The music was good. 

The response, excellent.

And… As I turned and walked off the stage, into the back rooms. I could only think of one thing.

Had it worked?

“Yes!” Jared suddenly roared and I actually jolted at the sudden noise. He reached over, grabbed a bottle of something expensive from a table next to our gear, and just poured it into his mouth. “Yeagh! Did you hear that!? That response! Those cheers! We blew this house down tonight!” He roared out after his drink.

“Pass that shit.” Klein demanded and the two men instantly swapped the bottle taking a swig. “Eugh. That goes down harsh. Damn right. We fucking rocked tonight. Alice!” He ordered and she wandered over and took the bottle, swigging it down.

“Oh that is strong fuck! That’s right! Tonight! Whether it all works out, or comes crashing down we party like we’re famous!” She called out laughing and then they all looked at me.

“Absolutely not. I don’t drink.” I said walking over a bottle of water in my hand that I’d grabbed to help cool off, and instead I tinked it against the bottle and slugged back a drink. “But I think you all did great tonight.”“Oh c’mon!” Klein said, thrusting the bottle at me, but oh no, I wasn’t making that mistake again. I ignored him as I finished my water and chucked it into a trash can as I moved to put my Orphean away.

“Leave it Klein, Motoko’s a kid.”“Fuck you.” I responded to Alice’s words with a middle finger, and she shrugged. That had definitely been an attempt at peer pressure.

The bitch.

“Well we aren’t done yet.” Jared offered, as he adjusted his open holo jacket, and smiled brightly. “The best part of tonight? Time to meet the groupies!” He laughed and Klein and him fist bumped as they put some of their stuff away and then headed out, and up the stairs to the VIP area…

“That means you too Motoko.”

“What?”“Groupies Motoko. Girls and boys that want to throw themselves at the Rockerboys that just filled up every inch of their body with adrenaline and need. C’mon, you gotta come to this too.”“Not really my thing?” I offered, and Alice rolled her eyes.“It’s part of the gig. While it might look like just fun for us, a lot of those people on the dance floor pay extra to come up and hang with us. This is an important part of being a Rockerboy. We get paid by the club for the music, the spectacle, but also the extra VIP room purchases for all of them to come hang with us. Hiromi mentioned we need to do more than just the show, we’ve got to earn the club eddies, so come on front girl, you come too.”“Hiromi said that? We never did this before.” I tried to argue, and Alice snorted. 

“You didn’t, besides we’ve never played at a place like 7th Hell, this isn’t small time. Just come up, hang out, you don’t have to actually do anything. Best not in fact. You’re a bit young.”

“Okay fuck you again, and duh. I’m not… Interested.” I said a bit flatly, and Alice smirked at me smugly. 

“I’ll keep an eye on you for your brother, but we do have to go and drum up some extra attention… Play a song.”“What?”“If you don’t want to be a flirtation attraction, for the groupies, then figure something else out, but be the story… Everyone here tonight wants to have a story to tell their friends tomorrow. That’s what makes Rockerboys so special. I know at least one girl is going to be up there specifically for you.” Alice offered and I blinked, honestly confused…

“Who?”“The girl you tossed that shotgun of yours to.” Alice reminded, and I felt my face get a little warm.

I’d done Heathens the same way, tossing out the shotgun shells, and picking a specific person right at the front to be the Heathen for the song.

She’d absolutely screamed as I dropped the shotgun, and holy shit she’d been top heavy clutching that Carnage to her chest hadn’t done anything to hide the way she’-

“Right. Her… I have to go?” I asked, but Alice sent me a look. “Yeah alright, fine… I guess I’ll… Try?”“If you really can’t figure out what to do, just be the mysterious one, or just play a song, like I said.” She said, jerking her head at my guitar, and I nodded slowly. That wasn’t a terrible idea.

I could just play a song. I had songs. I had all the songs.

I followed Alice when I realized I really couldn’t just hide down in the band room, and up the stairs I was met by a Bouncer that quickly moved aside and opened up the upper VIP area to my eyes.

The band was already swarmed, Alice just flopping into a couch and looking every inch the Rockerboy she was, as she wide armed the couch and looked utterly confident. 

Klein and Jared already had booze in one hand, and a girl each in the other.

And as I walked up onto the floor, my guitar in one hand cause honestly I was planning on using it as a shield I realized that probably wasn’t going to work.

There was a noise, awareness of the groupies gasping at my appearance, pointing or calling. Although thankfully not all of them. 

Instinctively I knew if I hesitated I’d get swarmed. So instead let myself go cool, confident, swagger, I stepped forward ignoring it all as I found a chair just far enough away no one had claimed it, and…

I grabbed the back of the seat, as everyone watched. That’s fine, Alice said I should be part of the story they’d tell.

Okay fine. If this was part of being a Rockerboy, then I don’t think I could be the amorous Rockerboy like the others, but that was okay.

I’d just make my own persona.

The scraping of the chair had grabbed everyone's attention, but Jared, Klein, and Alice were all wondering what was going on.

So I brought the chair into a quiet area along the back wall, and flipped it around so my back was to the wall.

And then I settled in, and before anyone could ask.

My fingers started strumming.

The bass of the club still flowed through, but the live show was over, and the VIP area seemed a bit more insulated from the speakers, so I ran my hands over my guitar. It was no acoustic, but the noise hardly mattered.

I finally looked up, and half bent over, my face half covered by my hair I caught the gaze of the woman that Alice had warned me about, Carnage still clutched to her chest, kinda surprised they let her bring that up here, but anyways.

“Hell-o, I’ve waited here for you, Everlong.” I crooned, just loud enough to cut through the ambient song playing in the club. Instincts, on how to shift, how to move, when to slow the song, when to sing it all the louder flowed through me, and I used every ounce of them.

I’d rather be known as the mysterious Rockerboy with an aftershow, than the Rockerboy that gets swarmed by crazed groupies.

This was a brilliant plan, Motoko. You are so smart.

—--

Hiromi Mistunashi

The discussion had been cut throat. Hiromi though ignored any of the implied threats, instead just smirking confidently through them.

She had the best situation she could have asked for. 

The three Producers were all interested. She had them on the hook, and by the glares they sent at each other they knew it.

Now of course, that didn’t mean the deal was locked, and she’d pressed a little too hard a few times. 

They were just as willing to refuse Motoko entirely, and just blacklist her, Hiromi had learned, so she’d softened her approach, and had played up the potential instead.

“The real question isn't if Stand Along Complex has good music. It’s if anyone wants to hear it.” Charles asked, once again trying to muddy the waters, and lower Hiromi’s demands.

“It’s not a bad point. Anyone with a bit of talent can play a club, but do they really make eddies? Do they have star power?” Ian Carver from MSM of all places asked, the man had a rumpled business suit, and smelled of the liquor he’d been drinking at the bar, but his eyes were clear, and… It was MSM. Practically the biggest label in the city. Some of the big names. Us Cracks, Motoko had mentioned Kerry Eurodyne once or twice.

Hiromi just smirked. She’d set up for this. A Rockerboy had to do more than just play music, they had to draw the eye, and then draw some eddies. 

“Why don’t we have a look at our VIP area outside, and you can decide for yourself if you think Stand Alone Complex, has star power?” She asked, waving her hand outside the door. 

The private room was good, letting them talk in peace, but Hiromi had faith that Alice had listened. 

Draw a crowd to the VIP session. Be loud, be a Rockerboy, party, get the groupies working.

But Hiromi wasn’t sure how well it had worked. Motoko… It was a flip of a coin whether she’d listen or not.

The third producer, Otonoshi Kawa from Eye-Land Records, the smallest of the fish, rose up and the door popped open, and instantly the noise of outside hit them. 

But it wasn’t just normal club noises. 

There was a sort of hush, and yet noise through it all, and as Hiromi got up and followed she realized that once again the Motoko coin flip hadn’t just hit heads or tails. But landed on its side and awed everyone.

The Vip area was packed. With half the crowd from downstairs it felt like, seated literally on the ground as Motoko sat against a wall in a chair, the dim lights of the VIP area putting her in stark relief, her guitar in her hand, and she was just playing.

Quiet songs, yet her voice coming through clearly, enthralling and gentle, and yet teasingly husky as always.

Sexy Motoko voice was really powerful.

But Hiromi pushed that need to go sit with the others away and instead sent the smuggest energy she could at the producers. 

“Well it looks like we’ve got half the club into the VIP room for the afterparty.” She said, playing up her confidence in seeing what had happened. All three men now were on their feet and checking it out, and she could practically see their eyes rove over the crowd.

Each person up here was eddies in the club managers hands. And with how enthralled they all were, it was more eddies in the future for anyone that could snatch up this Rockerboy.

“What’s that song she’s playing?” Ian Carver asked, the first to speak as all three men were taking in what was going on, and Hiromi didn’t know, not one she’d ever heard before.

“Oh Motoko writes new songs all the time. I haven’t heard this one yet. Shame.” She said, honest with the last part. Stupid Motoko, she grumbled, you were supposed to serenade your best choom with all your new songs!

“Alright Ms. Mitsunashi, MSM wants Stand Alone Complex. Let’s solidify the deal.” Ian said simply, and Hiromi could feel the eddies start flowing in, as the other two men turned to glare at their rival. 

“Hey, don’t think just beac-”“Ignore them. I’m taking the band. Sorry Charles, CCT had their chance, you hesitated, when you should have leapt.” The rumpled suited man mocked, then he turned his glowing eyes, green and pink of all things swirling around and locked them onto Hiromi. “I’ll agree to most of your conditions, let’s get the contract done.”Hiromi smirked like a shark. Most? Well let’s see if she couldn’t play him off on the others for a bit more than most of her conditions.

Hiromi realized that with this, everything would change.

Eugh, she still had so much homework to do tonight!

Comments

CMA27

Finallllllllly

runedead56

Goooood morning Night City!

Michael Lynch

Right!?! I found this series a couple months ago and all I can remember is just reading this everyday feeling like it was never going to end. I loved it. Then it ended and now I have to wait like the rest of you for my fix.

Cyrus McEnnis

Straight into my veins, please and thank you.

A_Jaffa_Boyo

We're so back. I hope that the writers block youve been suffering with GitC loosens up, because this chapter was brilliant, even if it was a fighter like you said in the discord.

Jeff

HIROMI POV LESGO

rizen

I'm glad to see the crew back. I'm really excited to see the Japanese dinner party and motoko being publicly recognized as a kensei.

Homeless One

Hell Yah, time for the big leagues! Also, gonna go listen to an acoustic version of Everlong now, thanks

Andrew Bazhaw

Poor Hiromi having to do all that work in the background and now she's singing to other people with her new songs

Nisiris

Yaaay! And even Hiromi poverty?! Such treat!!!

noëlle

tyftc!! hiromiiii herding motokos 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️

Isaiah Walker

I love Hiromi! I love all the characters from the various works but Hiromi is definitely my favorite.

Garrett Cannon

wow great job seras really sweet filler chapter makes the whole series feel alive. I would love more BDs and more interaction with the gangs good and bad. U have written the tigers really well and the mox and mealstrum could use some more touching up.

Vexdt

Thanks for the chapter, especially since I started a new Cyberpunk 2077 run, with the new patch. :)

Shura

Gitc chappy? Is it my birthday?

Garrett Cannon

Wraiths, 6th street, and valentinos have almost nothing coming from memory but ive been reading this series for about 2 years now so im sure ive forgotten some stuff

Bosparan

Awesome chapter!!! Hiromi-Perspective worked out _really_ well here

Just Sloth

Thanks for the chapter!

GrimV

This story is Crack

Matt

This was worth the wait. I think this might be one of the most well written chapters so far. The Hiromi POV was perfect, there were multiple characters that got fleshed out, and the Motoko just aura farming like crazy. Very well done.

TuscanKB

We back baby!

Perf

What are you talking about Hiromi, Motoko is the most powerful teenager in Night City! Not you! 🤭

Salih Mustafa

Nice to see this again I love your interludes please add more

That Warden

Just what I needed after a long day of work, fun chapter. And it was cool to see hiromi's POV.

heh

Love a Hiromi POV

FrostyDaHomeboy

Whether intentional or not, I think it was a great way to recap what has been going on recently and in the background by starting with Morning Routine Hiromi. A great way to dive back in through an easy vibe. I liked it a lot. Thank you for the chapter!

Reece Grimshaw

Thanks for the chapter, I was really missing Ghost. It was good getting a Hiromi POV

White Neko Knight

Hiromi has waded out if the shallows to swim with the sharks. Let's see which fool tries to take a bite first.

Freya

Tyftc always love seeing a gitc notification

FrostyDaHomeboy

I started playing it in the background as I read the rest of the chapter once Motoko started it. Gotta say it added to the reading experience

Cliff246

This is genuinely probably the best chapter you have ever written... besides the first and second, the one with her fighting the borg in the ring and lost her arms, a few other ones... i genuinely cannot remember what else is better. This feels like the type of shift... subtle but the type to change how we will see the story.

Amerdism

Ain’t about to start ship with the fucking Onryo Grammer mistake (I think, assuming ship isn't cyberpunk slang)

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter! So they're real proper musicians now, very nice. Really enjoyed the Hiromi POV as well, she certainly keeps herself busy :D

asdo

Happy birthday, what it's not your birthday today? It is now!

DePriest

Love the other point of views! Thanks for the chapter!!

Duke of Coffee

Too long the night has been indeed to finally wake up to smell a new Ghost in the City coffee brand. 😆

Meaning Yellow

That does it! Hiromi's on strike unless she gets Motoko cuddles! Now who has the power? Also Hayato's probably got some power too.

David Hoyt

Corpo fun and games util someone makes a grab for your assets. Time to stop the schoolgirl shit and bring down some real on some gonk's ass.

Duke of Coffee

Fleshing Hiromi out really good there, is this a death flag? 😜 Anyway so the chances of Motoko meeting Adam is going to be... fun if he shows up in her Concerts. I wonder if her Rockerboy level is able to go past level 10 with grinding success. 😉 Shotgun girl is going to be interesting is she planning to stalk Motoko? 🤣

Meaning Yellow

Y'hear that, Motoko? Frosty here just called your work 'Us Cracks' level. Might need to set an example here for that kinda libel. :P

MrMarauder

Thanks for the Chapter Seras. Appreciate it 🙏 💯

Seras's Writing Corner

Lol Not a death flag, but Hiromi has been getting a lot of heat for pushing the Rockerboy path, so I wanted to show just how much stuff is going on in the background that Hiromi is managing that Motoko is completely ignoring.

M0och

Gosh, Hiromi is such a badass!

Duke of Coffee

Oh good, 👍 must be me seeing too many signs of death flag waving around. 😜

Cg's ai art

Oh man, gotta listen to the motoko Playlist again, so much hype!

outlaw

Jam session with Keri as she plays samari! Inspires him to write again or do a special duo during a concert would be awesome!

Haise

In that case a lot of corpo heir could be considered most powerful, but if you only count their own earned asests as their power, then you would be hard pressed to find anyone else.

Duke of Coffee

Won't be surprised, the English language tends to drift in cities. 😜

Aiko S.

Yes GitC! Nice Pov change!

Mark James Reyes

Niiiiceeee! Been a long wait but niiiice! Would be kinda cool if far along the way she gets to play with original samurai though. With how its referenced here and there, it'll be nice to have her own "A Like Supreme" moment. Even better if the members approve of a song or two from motoko that they play on stage bruh!

Miguel Garcia

I bet most of those conditions are stuff Motoko would insist on for her sanity too

N0ct3m

Love hiromi perspective!

artisticVulpes

Typo unless this is just slang idk: Ain’t about to start ship with the fucking Onryo. Ain’t about to start shit with the fucking Onryo. Hiromi:Want to meet up for lunch? Hiromi: Want to meet up for lunch? As she was responding, a beep on her agent, and she shifted focus.  As she was responding a beep sounded on her agent and she shifted focus.  Seriously usually she was quick with her texts, but sometimes when she was distracted she’d just ramble at her. Seriously, usually she was quick with her texts, but sometimes when she was distracted she’d just ramble at her. 7th Hell, was a much fancier place than any other gig we’d done. 7th Hell was a much fancier place than any other gig we’d done. “We’re  Stand Alone Complex! “We’re Stand Alone Complex! (There was an extra space) Okay fuck you again, and duh. I’m not… Interested.” Okay, fuck you again, and duh. I’m not… Interested.”

G JP

This story continues to be, as always, pure joy. Motoko playing and singing in the VIP lounge is great. I have no idea if that's a normal thing with bands (I haven't exactly been to many concerts). Private encores, song previews, covers of her personal favorites, or really any other song that wouldn't otherwise fit into a normal gig. What a fantastic VIP draw. I feel like now is a good time to tell you that this story introduced me to Nirvana and Foo Fighters. Not in the literal sense; I've been casually listening to music for a few decades now (emphasis on the 'casual'), so I'm sure I've heard their stuff before. But in the *meaningful* sense. I was only vaguely aware they existed, I didn't know who Dave Grohl was, and I couldn't have even told you that Kurt Cobain and Nirvana had any relation. What I have been, however, is an avid reader for decades. Having them featured in a medium, setting, and story that I love gave them entirely new meaning to me. Especially that first concert in the Red Dirt, because the Samurai redux there is one of my favorite parts of the game. Part of me is sad that I've more or less missed out on them for thirty years, but...sometimes it's only about the right time and circumstance. So thank you very much for that. I fully understand now why they're so legendary.

Kuro_Neko

Always happy to see more of this. PTV fans have been eating really well lately, hopefully it's our turn now. But if it's just a one off I'll take it. The muse does as the muse wants after all.

Joyeus

So Hiromi’s a complete masacist 🤣 if Im reading her reaction to the “old Mitoko” right.

Scarletmenace

Yummy serotonin for the brain. Thank you.

Herman Hoffman

Thank you for the chapter hope to see many more.

Amerdism

The English language drifts by the godamn metre mate, no joke, here in Belfast I know that some people can guess which street you live on just by slight changes in accent. Aaah, our language is a real mess (literally given its made up of several different languages at this point).

SkyFan

Thanks so much for the chappy Seras! Can I recommend some of my favourite 'quiet' songs to you? Maybe one of them would strike your fancy for Motoko. 'Arsonists lullaby' by Hozier, 'Far Away' by Jose Gonzalez, and 'Wish you were here' by Pink Floyd. If you decide to listen to them, please reply and let me know what you think!

Phyr

Ugh.... homework....

Michael Olson

I'm always so sad when you take a break from GitS but it's so consistently solid and electrifying. Completely worth the wait, and every cent. You're definitely undercharging.

meatybyte

"They were still the same in some ways, but better." - Gasp! They are growing up "It made classes much less stressful when she knew in the back of her mind that their gruesome murder was only a phone call away." That makes a lot of sense, hard to take someone or their insults seriously when you know that only live because you haven't decided otherwise. The Hiromi POV is amazing by the way, and it's rarity just makes things hit so much better. This feels like an amazing capstone chapter.

Jørgen

More Ghost please, oh please, I love this story and wait between new chapters are pure agony of waiting. Thank you for creating this and remember, please more <3 :D

Rake1810

Fantastic chapter! Did the 2.3 update get you back into the cyberpunk mood?

Zachary Brown

I suppose if Hiromi fumbles and lands Mikoto in a bad deal she can always break it the hard way… knifing all the contract holders!

Even_Odds

I wonder if these women getting the shotguns will be among the first to start a copy cat gang of Motoko with how she's accumulating fame. Or are they called poser gangs? I forget, but I remember lore of gangs copying the style of famous solos or rockerboys.

Serina Tsukaya

Holy crap Seras, you've outdone yourself. Hiromi's character growth (how she is now vs before) rockerboy stuff progressing happily. The vibe was just purrfect. 12/10

RandySalacious

Yep! Notable posergangs are the Kennedys and the Prime-Time Players, soon to be joined by the Heathens! (although unlike Fallout's Kings, posergangs did not all pretend to be the exact same person, so i don't know who else the Heathens would emulate, maybe SAC?)

Whale A

Noooo. PTV is gone, but as a consolation GITC is back

RandySalacious

Woo! Great chap! idk if you've ever heard it but Tupelo by Nick Cave and the bad seeds would be an amazing song for an "onryo" style BD, and would also be VERY engaging in a live performance.

Will Iam

Thanks for the chapter. Quick correctiin, hiromk heard everlong in full, motoko made a digital copy before and also singed live in chapter 210

Bat

Love the rockerboy stuff! Happy to see the muse gave you another chapter!

Overclocked

So what's the plan for this story? Don't get me wrong, writing is always good. But is there a direction? I mean, we need a plot direction here. If not, then start the edgerunner and 2077 with V going so we can se how things change

Crimson Grave

'Okay fine. If this was part of being a Rockerboy, then I don’t think I could be the amorous Rockerboy like the others, but that was okay. I’d just make my own persona.' Then she proceeds to sing Everlong and probably several other Romantic adjacent Songs... Damnit Motoko!

faite kellander

You know what did not see this story going this way but I'm here for it

CalamityFerret

I like the current direction tbh. We've seen a lot of motoko excelling on the violence side of things so getting into the rockerboy biz can interact with the other areas of her life in fun ways and generate different types of conflict. I definitely get what you mean, though, the story is definitely meandering a bit since Motoko doesn't really have a big, pressing goal to work towards. I like this odd merc-/rockerboy-slice-of-life feel the story has but it might not be for everyone.

Bynx

Ahhh yes so many happy chemicals in my brain when I see a GitC notification. Thank you so much!

Heidao

Day in the life of Hiromi, the Captain trying to manage the crazy vessel that is Motoko's many business ventures.

Happy

Nice!

Gilgamesh Archer

Thanks for the chapter! I love this story so much! So you do encores!?

Robert Apgar

Oh no Motoko is gonna have a Cult of Carnage girls.....

Pi

My brain went to Elise Trouw's cover of Everlong for some reason.

E. Anderson

didn't know about that update yet, thx for the heads up

Austin Thomas Burney

good job. This chapter made me think about everything motoko has been through to get to this point, she honestly has a pretty crazy story even for night city.

Rake1810

came out 10 days ago or something like that. A lot of car stuff.

Seras's Writing Corner

Correct! Motoko was on to other songs by then. She played a few acoustic songs for the 'after' party which is why there was so many people showing up.

Seras's Writing Corner

While I don't usually write with a plan exactly, this is one of the times that's not correct. Motoko is moving into a new position in life, fame, fortune, and all the trouble that sort of thing brings along with it. We're going to see a lot more forces at work in Motoko's life, and her struggle to balance it and find her own way. Should be fun!

Mistress Araenidae

Come on. No Fixer in Night City would be stupid enough to issue a kill contact for Hiromi. They enjoy living too much.

Straven

Love the run, love the crowds and love another chapter to delight in! Thank you for another banging read!!!

Zilvera

Thank you for chapter. I am excited to see the Tiger Claw Christmas Party with Mokoto having to dress up for once

carebear90

Tyger Claw bigshot party should be soon too, and the beginning of Edgerunner plot shouldn't be far away.

STORRM

love the alt pov.

Axel Wate

Wait what? What changed?!? Hopefully mods still work...wait @Seras you can use photo mode with Rita!

Luker number 5

Hiromi is such a trooper, she's gotta look into getting her own personal assistant at this rate.

Fortunis

Hahaha! The power of Motoko Sexy Voice! That dude knows she's a sure bet to go to the top because she doesn't do stupid rockerboy shit like get wasted. Instead of being in the back room partying she had the entire place enthralled with music. Fucking pro move.

Wargen

Yasss so goood!! Honestly I am waiting for Maelstrom or some other gonkass gangoons to start some shit and for Motoko to go full Onryō on them

Grand Odyssey

A wonderful new chapter as always, Seras. Motoko with no idea what she's just done to herself (or the crowd), Hiromi caught between corpo and groupie mindset and a world totally unprepared for either. Who could ask for more? :D

key

Glad new chapter hopefully the rockerboy stuff is done it's ghost in the city not rockerboy in the city. :D

Robbie Mathieson

Thanks for the chapter. I was wondering how you were going to fill the gap between gigs. Skipping it entirely was a good call. Couldn't think of anything else that wouldn't come off as just filler.

Slayer Anderson

Heh, if Hiromi’s smart she’ll tease them with a clause to ensure MSM can counter-bid on any assassination jobs Motoko gets offered on their executives or personnel. That’d be a fun way to get extra concessions.

matt

Unfortunately not. It's just getting started.

matt

Yeah it's great. Finally, something to read.

Just A Dude

Given some of the commentary on this arc by Seras, I'm wondering which of them is going to fuck up, cross the line, and get got.

NM

That's what David is for.

NM

And her getting a Tameshigiri challenge, and leaving the few who understood what they saw silently terrified.

NM

I don't get where you're coming from tbh. The rockerboy chapters are some of my favorites! If anything it's the net running chapters that feel just a little... bland? in comparison.

NM

Silverhand was a double legend. Music and blood. Motoko is the new model, and will be even more dangerous!

Cg's ai art

I think motoko should get an acoustic guitar at this point if she's going to keep doing the VIP private shows

Sup3r J4k3

A thought popped into my head while reading the comments, and here it is: When V has Silverhand piggy-backing in their brain, and he decides to be his usual 'prick-ly' self: Sh: Who tf is this kid? V: She's- M: Shut your washed-up, has-been, ghostly mouth Johnny! I'm triple the Merc and ten times the musician that you were at your peak! Sh (shocked she can see him): Tf did you just say pipsqueak? V: (shows the special highlight reel M made just for this situation) Sh: oh... M: (smug gremlin noises)

matt

lmao, Hiromi is obviously the love interest. When they turn 18.

key

I think it's more of a personal taste thing. I like the net running it basicly shows a different world.

I AM POTATO

*“The real question isn't if Stand Along Complex has good music. It’s if anyone wants to hear it.”* This is such a loaded, weenie argument. It's like saying, "Yes, curry is tasty. But will anyone eat it?" Such a pile of boilerplate corpo bullshit... (P.S. No shade against you Seras, you depicted them well. Thx for the chapter. )

Dale

But landed on its side and awed everyone. wouldn't ( But landed on its Edge and awed everyone. ) flow better than the Above Seras?

W Maxwell Cassity-Guilliom

Probably not MSM but a competitor might try to take down Stand Alone Complex before it gets going, maybe with escalating threats or blackmail. Not everything in NC is guns out right away, there's always good old trashing your place and breaking your kneecaps.

Just A Dude

Oh, yeah, but you know Motoko "Onryo" Kusanagi would 100% escalate in true "They put one of yours in the hospital you put one of theirs in the morgue" style.

wanderer117

I keep waiting for Maelstrom groupies to show up in the audience and Motoko being embarrassed/annoyed/angry about it while the audience freaks out

wanderer117

Poor David. You get to keep your mom and join an elite merc company but Hiromi is your boss, you have to build up your body the hard way and you'll never get an afterlife drink named after you.

lizard King

All things considered you're most likely going to live long enough to become a living legend. David you have high cybernetic tolerance. With a brutal in hellish treat regimen couple that with a lot of mental exercises. And yours high tolerance for cyberware. You may not get a drink from the afterlife. But you will become a living legend someone who is feared and respected while still being alive having a mother who loves you and if things goes well you get your girl Lucy. All that comes with a boss like hiromi in a chaos gremlin like motoko. Small price in comparison and die young and truly not experience the full extent of what life have to offer. Small price you really think about it. Hella training a crazy corpo boss a crazy battle flesh training leader and a group of friends who are not interested for the most part in dying Young also being loot Gremlins.

Mituindal

That Maelstrom girl she rescued, Natalie Desanto (?), would be a nice callback.

Kara Nina

That is the reality though. There are a lot of good musicians, but whether their style catches on big time during the time they're active is a very different question. Aviici changed an entire genre but never had a number one hit.

Kara Nina

I doubt the thing with the ex guitarist is entirely over, not a good look if your ex band is better without you so he might do sth stupid.

Ben Luber

Just heard the song Afterlife by Evanescence, from the Netflix DMC series. And could totally see Motoko performing that

Jack

Pfft! I need to see that happen! I can even imagine an onryo popping up next to Johnny jump scaring him constantly.

Jack

I can see that being a constant thing.

Just A Dude

Speaking of DMC: I could also see her doing "Devil Trigger." The lyrics perfectly fit her rampage against Maelstrom, and the title would almost certainly be taken as a metaphor for a brush with cyberpsychosis.

Robert Apgar

I can only hope they show up in force with loaded carnages randomly. Just one time Motoko is idk getting arrested or kicked out of a studio. 100 Carnage girls just step out humming/singing Heathens.

Ben Luber

Very true too. Good song and definitely would fit.

imnotarobot

Good stuff! I think a lot of Ozzy Osbourne and Black Sabbath songs (RIP) would fit really well in a cyberpunk setting.

Jack

Hahaha I could see that! Have a small cult gang that works with the SLS as a offshoot security for motoko's band with all carnage girls! Hahaha! Gang expansion at its finest!

Nadrojian

Becca needs to be one of said carnage girls!!!!

Nadrojian

Becca needs to show up at one of the shows and get given a carnage it would be hilarious!

Jack

We've got a few things lined up so far. Finishing the music contract sectiona and the aftermath, the TC party and aftermath, the possibility of a militech convoy heist and/or supply warehouse raid (could include recon on the apoogee sandy and who has it), set up for training the crew, gotta get some chrome for cool, then the beginning of edgerunners in like 1 or 2 months or so if I remember correctly. So like Sera said, gotta balance it because Motoko is going to be swamped very soon and have time for nothing especially if she still doing BDs of gigs and scav raids for extra income.

Z H

I think so too, and it even plays on "Edge Runner" as a pun

Z H

And sends a very definite message that Motoko's band is not to be fucked with.

carebear90

"Alice had gotten cold feet about another new song, but that was fine." Stuff like this makes this story feel so relatable. :D 'This will be our THING. A new song every gig.' ... 'Meh, too difficult. Let's not, after all.' Motoko: 'Sigh... I'll just do it myself.'

D C

Took me a week to read. this story is great!

Thrent

Just had a thought : Sound of silence would make a lot of sense in that kind of post-concert after party setting. "And the people bowed and prayed To the neon god they made And the sign flashed out its warning In the words that it was forming And the sign said, "The words of the prophets are written on the subway walls In tenement halls" And whispered in the sounds of silence"

carebear90

The original by Simon and Garfunkel is from the 60s... Shouldn't that mean it already exists in Cyberpunk world? I'm not really familiar with the lore.

Thrent

Me neither but luckily the wiki is here to help https://cyberpunk.fandom.com/wiki/Timeline Mostly diverges from around 1990 but the Arasaka Corp is founded in 1916, with a security division as early as 1960. But even if we take 1990 as a point of divergence Nirvana would've probably been able to release Smells like teen spirit in 91 as nothing major seemingly happens in the US at that time. So that's up to debate I guess ?

Sanguinati

Never thought to do this before but heres my suggestions for songs. Main show, Sixx a.m: life is beautiful. Rob zombie: feel so numb. Welshly arms: legendary. Highly suspect: my name is human. David kushner: daylight. After party, jorgen Dahl moe's cover of dancing in the dark. Passenger: let her go. One republic: i lived.

EmmericH.

New here ! Great job on this fanfic, been looking for cyberpunk ones recently and I'm glad to have found this one, Motoko is a bit of a Mary Sue but it's non issue, the plot is great, the characters are fun, when shit get serious it grips your guts, there's everything that you would like in a good story, I may have a bit of an issue with the pacing where it seems fast but a the same time not even a year has past and I'm really confused about the romance between characters where it's more anime like, where it doesn't seems to go anywhere. One thing I'm glad for is to not having explicit sexual stuff despite being a cyberpunk story, it always feel off-putting when put on paper with words for me, so thanks for that. And also I love the inclusion of canon characters without making them too relevant for the story and more like side characters having their own thing, just found it weird when Motoko texted V but we got no follow up on that since then, maybe it will be relevant later, but it's been bugging me🤣

carebear90

The romance doesn't go anywhere because the characters are underage, and the website this story was first released on (spacebattles) is very strict about 'sexualisation of minors'. Welcome to the club! I can only recommend looking into Seras' other stories if you liked GitC. The main character is almost always the same personality-wise. Just inserted into different worlds/scenarios with different 'powers'. Makes for lighthearted fun power fantasies that don't take themselves too seriously. :)

EmmericH.

Thanks, sounds dumb to me though, a romantic relationship isn't only about sex, but I get it, and I'm not asking for smut later, I hate reading that kind of shit

Orchamus

Dunno about Valentino's at the moment, but Tygers, Mox, and Maelstrom sound about right if we wanted some povs on her music music gigs. Maybe if she was still recording BDs of the shows be interesting to get a Hayato or Fujimura pov

Orchamus

Anyone who loves Arsonist's Lullaby is a person of taste and culture🥂

carebear90

The main problem, as I understood it, is that Motoko is a reincarnation/body snatcher and by the rules of that website (and quite a few others too, btw) 'an adult inside the body of a child'. So any relationship she would have with a person her own physical age would be 'grooming' or worse. And any relationship she would have with another adult would have her still being in a child's body, so... the same thing reversed, basically. There really is no winning in this. So Seras settled for making Motoko comically dense, because she only sees her friends as kids and can't even imagine them as anything else. Turning them into child soldiers and killers is somehow ok, though... *shrugs*

EmmericH.

Too bad... I just thought that at least recognising each other feelings or something would be great, I did not even consider everything else around it, it doesn't help that despite being slightly immature, both Motoko and Hiromi are working harder that most adults would...

Beau Bryant

Can you share which songs? Also the next chapter should have Hiromi or the the band mates ask Mokoto about the new songs. That or a POV of Mokoto playing them and naming the songs and then Hiromi comes in.