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“Hmm.”“Don’t hum at me.” I grumbled at Wakako. “I got the gun out of the place while the police were actively raiding it.”“You were supposed to not be seen.”“I wasn’t.”“They know someone broke in.”“Yeah and the guys hidden safe beeped when it was open. Tell your client if he wants to install a safe make sure it’s a quiet model.”“Hmm.”I sent Wakako a glare and she puffed on her cigarette before nodding. “It was the best that could be done. I wasn’t expecting the police response so quickly.”“Yeah no kidding. They were inside the apartment. I thought you said I’d have some time.”“I did. There was information that was not given to me, that changed the protocol.”“Yeah?”“The woman that was killed had police connections. Likely an undercover agent. Hence the fast response.”“Shit. So your guy married a cop?”“Probably.” Wakako replied, exhaling some smoke which I leaned away from. Ew. “Baby.”“Hey! I plan on replacing my lungs eventually, but that doesn’t mean I want that shit near me. It smells.”“Humph!”“Humph!” I responded right back as I got up and made a face at Wakako as I walked out.

She sent me a flat look, as I backed out through her beaded door.

Jeeze. What a mess, but at the same time.

I felt myself grinning a bit. It had been really fun. 

Infiltration really was my favorite type of gig. As I walked through Jig-Jig street back out to the main road. Slipping into the Quadra that I had left parked, I pulled out into Night City traffic. 

I had another stupid band meeting tonight. Considering MSM wanted to start publishing Stand Alone Complex as soon as possible every night was taken up by time in the recording studio, or some sort of band thing. Modeling pictures, and whatever. There was even a conversation that had drifted past me that if our first single did well on the MSM production then we’d have a talk show segment.

Me.

On TV.

I was fairly confident I’d end up shooting someone at this rate. Probably on live TV. Considering I would need to blow off some steam, I turned back into Japantown towards the gun range I liked.

I sent a message out to my chooms if they wanted to join me for shooting, but only got negatives in response, which wasn’t a surprise.

Parking, I took out the Tactician Shotgun from the trunk and walked inside. I got some side eyes from the owner behind his bulletproof glass, but when I flashed him the eddies he waved me through and even sent some shells over for me. 

It’s like the guy knew me or something! 

Laughing as I set up and looked over the range. I needed this. Just some good old fashioned grinding of a stat. No chooms to get distracted by, just me, and repeating an action a thousand times to try and make myself just that little bit better.

Time to Grind Annihilation. It was only level 5 after all! Flicking a set of shells into my fingers I quickly loaded the shotgun working on the habit as frankly quick loading a shotgun was a bit different from other weapons, and I should practice it to make sure I wasn’t fumbling anything. 

Then I brought the shotgun to my shoulder and activated the range. 

I breathed in. And pulled the trigger, I rocked with the bang, pumped the shotgun recentered fired again. Then again. Eight rounds were shot, and eight targets blinked as they registered shots.

I pulled the shotgun away, swiped more shells in my other hand's fingers and slid round after round into the chamber. 

A quick pump and I started firing again. Again and again. I let myself fall into the rhythm. Just burning time and stress by following the motions. Each trigger pull sending buckshot into holographic targets. Each little number giving me just a little endorphin rush.

Or at least something like that. It was fun to just hit the targets and see the numbers go up.

But not nearly as much when I got a little alert noise. 100 Annihilation XP, just one more step towards level 6. 

I smiled and continued firing, still had half a box left after all!

Fire, pump, reload. Fire pump reload. 

Barrel flash after barrel flash.

—--

Flash 

“Thank you for the picture!” The photographer said bowing politely as she moved on. I actually smiled for that one, she had been much nicer than some of the others that just ran around snapping pictures without a word. 

It was lucky my Kiroshi didn’t get glare because I’d be blind at this point if not for them. 

“Come on Motoko, smile wider and wave. This is our party!” Klein called out, waving at the men and women that walked by.

MSM had decided to throw a party for us, although I had a feeling the party would have happened regardless, we were just an excuse. 

Up at the top of one of the skyscrapers in Night City where many of the rich and famous gathered to party.

I’m pretty sure that was the woman that played the titular Watson Whore. Seriously, that show kept coming up with the new season out. It’s like it was everywhere… It probably was. I know Jun said it was popular. 

I ignored Klein's words and just fell back into the table. 

Today was a launch party. MSM had decided which of the singles we’d drop first, and Pretender had been it. 

We were technically here just to party, but it was always more than that. We’d be up on stage before the night ended to play the song, and show off, to draw some hype among the rich. Investment strategy is what Alex had described it as. 

I just called it lame, but whatever. 

“You should just get something to drink and loosen up.” Alice offered, and I scoffed. 

“I don’t drink.” 

“You can get some food then.” She offered, annoyed at me, and I blinked.

Food actually did sound kinda good.

Was there a menu?

No. There was not a menu. But waiters were everywhere, and I waved at one of them that hurried over. 

“What food do you guys serve?”“I’ll send you the Menu, but the house special tonight is a Beef Wellington. Real cloned beef!”

I blinked because… That actually sounded fucking amazing. I’d never really had fancy Beef Wellington before, but just real meat sounded good.

I got the blip of the menu offering, and after checking it out, and removing some adware from the program I pulled it open.

Oh… It all looked good. Then I remembered that the tab was on MSM tonight. 

“I’ll take that, and this sushi platter, and let me get the real baked Potato as well.”“Of course!” The waiter agreed and disappeared.

Real food! Hey there was a benefit to all this after all!

With that distraction over I focused once more on what was going on around the club. People sitting in different booths, most of them seemingly enjoying more than just drinks. It was a den of debauchery and while we were a bit of a showpiece today, it was a nearly lusterless one. Barely anyone outside of the media people going around with cameras even seemed to care. 

We were just a minor spectacle among the debauchery. Not that Klein, Alice, and Jared seemed to understand that. The three of them were partying like this was the big time.

We hadn’t even technically had our big time debut.

I was about to fall into another pit of bitter irritation at this still being rather un fun all things told when something was placed in front of me, and the scent hit me.

“Oh.” I whispered looking over the steaming pile of pasty, real pasty, and beef that was already cut and steaming.

A real potato was put next to it.

Real. Food.

My hand instantly grabbed the knife and fork, twirling the knife around for a moment before bringing it down and cutting a piece free, and that went right into my face.

Heaven!

Aaaaah! So good! Yummy yummy meat! None of the preservative taste of Scop. This was real food that could actually go bad.

As I was chewing, Alex walked over and slid into the booth, his slicked back hair and manufactured smile put me off guard.

“It’s almost time, the release of the single on the radio stations is in five minutes. We’re going to have you play a surprise run at the same time. This is it, while it might not seem like it if you can impress the people in this room, you are guaranteed stardom.

I chewed my beef. 

I didn’t want to walk away from the beef.

Oh! Oh! The Sushi platter! It was dropped off in front of Alex, and he reached out to take one when suddenly my knife was embedded into the table in front of him.

I chewed slowly, staring at him with absolute murder.

My sushi.

He seemed to actually have two brain cells and he slowly withdrew his hand. “My Apologies, I thought that was for the table.”“Mine.” I mumbled around the beef I was chewing and then went back to eating.

“Well all of you are needed backstage, to get this show on the road.

I frowned as I stared at hot real food.

Fine. Whatever. I’d come back.

I reached over and klepped the other plates on the table and put them over the food to try and keep them hot.

“Yeah let’s go.” I said then dunked four sushi rolls into my mouth.

Show time.

—--

“Keep you in the dark, you know they all pretend.” I crooned, the lights in the club shifting to focus on us, just as an announcer finished introducing us. There was mostly disinterest among the rich. That was fine.

I, unlike everyone else, didn't care if they liked it.

No, I only had one interest, an interest that made the heat in my voice all the harsher as I put my all into the song.

YOU WERE THE REASON I WASN’T EATING GOOD FOOD!

“You’re the Pretender! What if I say I will never surrender!?” I roared, before flipping to the guitar and making the guitar they had set up for the gig to sing chrome fingers making every string scream and sigh as the song progressed.

“Yeah, who are you? Yeah, who are yoooou!?” I yelled, letting my voice vibrate just right to get the tone to carry through the entire hall, with the vocal fry.

I whipped off the guitar, and walked away as if I didn’t care about them. Because I didn’t.

But why was there actual clapping? They did realize the song was literally about people like them right?

I let it go, even as the rest of the band roared and paraded around. Alice called out that they were Stand Alone Complex. She cheered and played up the crowd.

I made a bit of a commotion by just jumping the stage, and flopping back into the booth to finish my meal.

Sigh. It wasn’t quite as good as it had cooled a little.

I still ate that shit though. 

—--

“Hey, like that was a nova song.” I was chowing down on a second course. Real vegetables. My body craved it! When the voice called out over the table.

“Holy shit.” Klein whispered looking up at the beautiful blonde woman that was at our table. She looked a little tipsy, but…

I narrowed my eyes. 

An act? Ninjutsu gave me knowledge of poisons and stuff, and she only seemed inebriated.

“Like I was totally into it! What if I say I’ll never surrender! Yeah!” She did a terrible rendition, but it was… I narrowed my eyes, she knew how to sing, that was purposefully bad. 

“You’re Maggy Electric!”“Well I play Maggy on Watson Whore, but I’m Kitty Thunder in real life!” She broke into a giggle, and I just had to wince at the terrible naming sense. 

Yikes. 

“Holy shit, I love that show.” Klein said, sounding star struck, and she sent him a flashing smirk and a wink.

The tough rockerboy nearly swooned.

“Can I get an autograph?” Jared asked, and Kitty giggled as she nodded, but he literally just pulled open his jacket to show his chest. 

Without skipping a beat, Kitty pulled out a marker from in between her chest, her top which I was pretty sure only stayed on because of an incredibly strong boob job, barely wobbled as she pulled the pen out. She yanked the cap and signed Jared’s chest even planting a kiss of all things on his peck at the end.

And Jared looked like he melted at that. Before anything more crazy could happen as Klein looked like he was about to lose his pants of all things a voice called out.

“Ah, Stand Alone Complex! I see you’ve met the illustrious and beautiful Kitty!” Alex called out as he walked over and Kitty made a laugh and waved at him as if he was kidding.

“Kitty’s newest season is nearly finished. I hear she’s always looking for new music though.” Alex offered, slyly and I just hummed, as I figured out what was going on. 

My music on a show called Watson Whore… Kill me.

I tore into my food ignoring it all.

“Wow you like, really put it away don’t you? Don’t you worry about like getting super fat? I would worry about that.” She suddenly rattled off, and I looked up and finished my bite of real spinach with actual cheese over it.

MSM was going to be paying a pretty penny for it.

“Nah.” I patted my stomach which was all rock hard muscle.

“Heh! Even if you get all sculpted out, you can still ruin yourself with fat you know? It looks terrible, the fat all goes to certain spots and you get all blegh!” She laughed loudly almost like a donkey and I just shrugged. 

“Not a problem, this is real.”“No shit!” She said, and I noticed her eyes were checking me over, before seeming to realize I was being honest. 

High end optics, those. 

“Real meat huh?  You ever think about an acting career?” She asked, her smile more real than it had been before.“I’m fourteen.”“Like that doesn’t matter-” She started but was cut off. “Kitty isn’t wrong. You definitely have that star power we look for. MSM does more than just music you know? We have-” This time I interrupted. “Not interested. Plus that’s something for Hiromi to talk with, since you know. She’s my manager.” I said looking at Alex pointedly, his smile went a little brittle and Kitty just drunk laughed again. 

“Oh she got you on that one. Not Manager.”

“Of course, but Kitty is the star of a hit show. With a word she could get you on as a guest perhaps?” Alex offered, and I could hear the greed in his voice.

“I don’t watch it.”“Huh?”“Her show. I’ve never seen it. I don’t like most TV.”“Oh, my hearts!” Kitty cried out faking an injury and Alex winced. 

“But you’ve heard of it of course, I’m sure you’re just busy-”“I don’t have any interest in it. No, even if I could watch it I wouldn’t. Sorry.” I offered to the woman, but it wasn’t very earnest.

She seemed more amused, but Alex was panicking a bit.

“Haha! Well maybe we’ll do a fun group project where we watch it, anyways. Kitty-” He was trying to lead her away so I sighed and bit the bullet.

“Hold on. Hey, uh.. My brother likes you show, Jun is into it. You mind if I get an autograph or a picture or something. He’d think that’s preem.”“Aww. Sure kiddo! Come in and let big sis Kitty leave something for your brother!” She cheered, dodging Alex’s arm to lead her away.

She was clingy, but did give a real autograph and a picture of the two of us in a nearby mirror that I snapped.

“Be careful around him.” She whispered into my ear, as we were snapping the photo, her entire body melting into mine to make the picture look a little risque, but I guess that was just kinda her theme.

It was just a whisper, quiet, and sharp.

“Oh I know.” I whispered back, as I snapped the picture.“You don’t.”  She whispered, again patting me on the shoulder, and then she was back to drunk actress and the life of the party.

That woman was a very good actress. I still wasn’t going to watch the show she was in. It was fucking weird.

—--

“The numbers are looking very good.” Alex informed all of us as we were driving back from the party. MSM wanted all of us traveling together to and from, apparently it built band unity, according to Alex when he described it. 

Hiromi had told me the truth though. It meant MSM didn’t have to worry about a no show during one of their events. 

The fact Hiromi wasn’t here beside me was unfortunate. She hadn’t gotten an invite so to speak. She had told me it was an expected snub. As only MSM agents had been invited, people like Alex.

Or my new team of stylists and makeup artists.

“Perfect.” The woman that was looking over my face apparently, said as she finished fixing my lipstick.

I just sighed, the party was over. Why were they still all over us?

“That’s good right? The numbers being good?”“So far.” Alex said to Alice the only one that had responded to his statement. “Right now the song is going over the airwaves, we track listening and interest levels through standard ads, and song requests. The media sites are talking, and we are tracking that. We test the waters a little to see what the fan response is, but that’ll take a bit longer.”“Test the waters?”“We put out some posts on and comments on a few City Net sites, if consumers respond then we know there is interest.”Literal bot posting? Greaaaat.

“And if they aren’t good?” I asked pointedly. “Then the support that Stand Alone Complex has been receiving gets dropped to a lower level until you bring up the interest again.” He said sternly, a dire warning. “But we believe in SAC! You have the entire media arm of MSM working to build you into the next big band. So just do your best, and ride the wave to stardom.” He offered with a wink, and I just rolled my eyes.

I’d talk to Hiromi about it. Maybe she’d have some idea on how to build our rep some more. 

I wasn’t sure I honestly trusted MSM to handle it correctly, especially since they were constantly trying to mess with the music. 

But we moved through Night City, the lights flashing into the limousine they had stuffed us into as I looked out. It felt weird to be on this side of it all. Dining with the rich and famous. I was so used to being out there on the streets. 

It made me antsy. Either way I shook it off. I had done this, and I would use the benefits, but I wouldn’t forget who I was. 

And as I side eyed Alex in the reflection of the window. And it might be a good idea to start planning an assassination. I’d had my dislike of the man, but a real warning from someone like that?

I’d have to take that seriously.

Comments

runedead56

GOOOOOOD morning night City!

MightyMouse

It’s 2am bro bro, thank you, but why

Derek Palm

Hell yea I'm glad I'm awake still at like 1:00am and after I said something just yesterday about wanting more GitC

Cyrus McEnnis

Yes. Kill the Not-A-Manager. It's the only way to be sure.

Seen

I thought not sleeping till 4am would only have negatives.....I was wrong

Jordisk

Last night's kill count rounded out at a solid and sturdy THIRTY!

Wargen

Thank for chapter 1am brain very happy

acerousTabellary

Peak fiction once again. Can't wait for this whole thing to go up in flames.

jonaak

Just finished rereading and I get rewarded with a new chapter, life is good

Crimson Grave

Ah. The assassination of Alex before he tries the same with Hiromi? That is a sweet dream to go to sleep to.

Mark James Reyes

"Off with the head" is really coming apparently. 🤣 Thanks seras!

Thomas Hendrix

I am not gonna question it. As graveyarder ill take what i get and say ty

Crimson Grave

I shouldn't be surprised that Kitty Thunder was more than 'just' an actress. You can't survive in Night City otherwise. Yet it still surprised me. Pleasantly.

runedead56

normal people: Who reads a story at 4:00 A.M.? Me: Oh boy 4:00 A.M. chapter!

Viabea

ooo~ cant wait for when she kills him!

Anthonology

We all knew someone would give Motoko her reason to murder, and not-manager seems like the perfect man for the job

Zlimest

the titular Watson Whore is a guy, love the chap otherwise

Caerold

Heck, it’s 18:30 here in Jpn , and the update hit during my break. ❤️

highlord

So they gonna try to take controll of her and she is going to flip on them and go full on murder hobo mod ain't she?

Miguel Garcia

I don’t know. I kinda got more of a Harvey Weinstein vibe from that. But it could be more straightforward, like he gets his stars in a blackmail worthy situation and then he can manipulate them as he wants for his own career.

Caerold

Also gotta love the idea of singing that song directly to that crowd

Jordisk

Eh, alt universe, alt Watson Whore.

Massgamer

Alex in a box is becoming more and more likely.

Chet K

I'm so happy right now. And kill that gonk lol. I seriously wonder what kinda shady shit he will try to pull he wants to be manager so bad I'm worried about Hiromi

Velleity

Preem choom fucking preem

Melonpanrockz

why do i think when kitty and jun would meet she would be the next in his almost harem

Kayden High

Yes I definitely agree with the assassination

Mr Mouse

He is in 2077, but given the original concept art for it was a girl, and the warning she gives in this chapter, who knows what could have to Kitty in the OTL

runedead56

There are a few decent options such as Bodies by Drowning Pool Monster by Skillet Or Ain’t No Rest for the Wicked by Cage The Elephant

runedead56

And staying on brand with The kusanagi siblings he would be completely unaware of it. Just another Jun sweep

Mr Mouse

Jefferson Airplane's White Rabbit, set up like a slowly escalating infiltration and Flawless Hitman kill, spliced wih camera footage showing he's got no idea what's coming That, or seconded for Ain't No Rest

Cormac

37 comments after 43 minutes. Wow.

N K

Serious question: does her band or MSM even know that she is a merc? Idk if I forgot

N K

nanana nana nana na, Alex’s in a box, in a box, Alex’s in a box

N K

Unironically: Dancing in the Moonlight by Toploader lol

Christian Biondo

Honestly hoping she becomes a recurring character.

Cleaa

I “think” they know but not in the witnessing her rain down death and destruction. Knowing she’s a merc vs being a sword wielding shinigami might be the difference!

Thereader

Man I miss this your other stuff is good but this is my favorite

Seras's Writing Corner

Huh! I actually didn't know it was a guy in the official version. I always saw the female pics and references. Good catch. I guess Kitty is the side main character instead of the main MAIN character or something.

Meaning Yellow

Does resisting narcotics or radiation fall under the body stat? I'm kinda surprised a perk to cover damage types hasn't been brought up; there was that stuff about using guns properly to avoid self damage from Motoko being, well, a foirteen year old girl with a hand cannon, but what about basic '77 stuff like fire/shock/chemical damage? There's semi-standard poison resist mechanics in the ttrpg system, but doea Motoko have access to those? Flat blunt damage resist perks based on borg body armor?

TheAngryJerk

Oho flavor of the day Motoko has not one but two of her own gigs in the oven now? Things have been getting hype lately on top of the steady diet of slice of life.

GrimV

I like that this seems to go into the direction of the rockerboy stuff going all kinds of wrong and needs to be resolved with violence. Cuz honestly seeing motoko just getting appointment after appointment for something she really dislikes because Hiromi thinks it's good for her or smth is really annoying. Motoko isn't a rockerboy at heart. She's a musician. And that's a real difference. I hope Hiromi realizes it. Speaking of. I miss her.

Alexander Jonsson

Lot of you believe the warning cause Alex is skeavy... But what if she is a REALLY good actor? What if the warning is actually cause she wants Alex gone, maybe he's hampering her career, maybe he failed to bag her a role. Maybe she just wants to sow chaos in the company. Maybe she wants Motoko to damage her rep with aggressive or defensive behaviour, weed out the competition. It could be an honest warning, but my first instinct was to find Kitty's profit motive for warning Motoko... Well, it's Night City, so... Maybe she jusy wants a better manager and the only way to do it is to sic known merc Motoko on him. Or, or it's real.

Axel Wate

Why assassination? She is a high lever net runner, send him some spam that will rm -rf his whole everything and connected devices

Happy

Nice. I wonder if Alex is the ‘create some blackmail material by putting talent into a bad position’ or the ‘do as I say or die’ type?

Garrett Cannon

If Jun saw Kitty im sure he wouldve said "Kawaii"

Yellowmuster

Kill kill kill a new BD CALLED DONT FUCK WITH MY MANAGER

Slayer Anderson

I'm thinking this is going to end up with Alex finally snapping and ordering a hit on Hiromi to remove her from Motoko's support network. And then he finds out that Motoko is Hiromi's bodyguard and things go sideways from there.

Thomas Laptain

Alternatively "Only I fuck with my Manager", with the double entendre going entirely over Mokoto's head.

Matt

"...his slicked back hair and manufactured smile put me off guard." Should be "on guard" I think. Or "threw me off guard" but that doesn't fit.

Joseph Schultz

Always a pleasure to see Wakako - I adore that she's basically Motoko's grumpy Grandma. Given how horrible and exploitative the real life entertainment industry is, Night City being 10 times worse would not surprise me. I have a feeling Motoko is going to have plenty of targets to take her irritation out on. I know Motoko will probably go nin-nin for the assassination, but Alex is such a sleazeball I kinda hope she decides to get some use out of her Annihilation levels instead.

ParaParadox

So we have the militech showroom coming up, but now also the manager might need a visit from Comrade Burya. I love this series.

Atlas Dwarf

Technically the Cat-like perk from the Athletics skill covers fall damage type. There could be a blunt resistance perk for Street Brawler, but we know Motoko is eying Parkour 2 for Athletics (she has Parkour 1) and that the rest of the Annilation perks specializes in shotguns only.

The GrandMage

I am honestly expecting Motoko to just straight up murder Alex during a performance of Heathens and for the response to be so good MSM just rolls with it.

FrostyDaHomeboy

"Head in a box. *clap - clap* Head in a box!" Thanks for the chapter! Interesting to see the skeevy side of fame. Like Kitty though, chapter she is trying to warn a new star what is up.

M0och

Either way, good riddance

Abrissgurke

I am still hoping for her singing "CITY OF NIGHT" from MIracle Of Sound, it even has the "I'm a ghost in the city, I'm a ghost in the City Of Night" in the refrein...

Trasen56

If Jun heard her advice on fat maybe he'd cut back on the Burritos smh

Aclys

While a fun idea, that'd basically put her freedom in their hands to take it to the police or not. So that's a hard pass

Aclys

Hmmmmm... what about a little hacking to set up a "ED209 demonstration" scenario? "You have 30 seconds to comply. . . 5, 4, 3, 2, 1" *Blam blam blam*

CMA27

That ominous. I wonder what Alex did to deserve that

SunyLaw1

"A 14 year old Merc? How good can she be, it's just a little teenage thing." It's probably what they think, though who knows they may have reviewed some of her known jobs and had an intern somewhere scour through her BD works. It can truly go either way because some agencies are too snobby to care and some are hardcore corpo enough to research her bloodline back 10 generations to spot weaknesses.

Just A Dude

Not Monster. That's too much self-loathing.

SunyLaw1

We NEED a tiny section of a chapter to hear what goes on through Alex's head as he is herding Mokoto, maybe right before Ultra Shinobi Motoko magically appears behind him with her Kensei Sword and plays out the 'a omae wa mou shindeiru' meme =D

Duke of Coffee

Those four sushi rolls down the hole is a reference to the KPop Demon Hunters animation? 😜 Anyway the warning might be fake... but this is Night City so expect a backstabbing of some form from MSM manager or higher. At least Motoko remember to get a souvenir/autograph for her brother. 😆

Garm88

>I pulled the shotgun away, swiped more shells in my other hand's fingers and slid round after round into the *chamber.* Chamber should be magazine. The chamber is where the round sits in the barrel before it's shot.

Jaksterzoo

“It’s a pump shotgun. They don’t have mag-“ *googles* wait. They do have magazines?! Wow, okay, good catch.

Atlas Dwarf

Hey now, these are soulless Corpos we are talking about here. For all we know there could be two Watson Whore shows using the same name or even plot where the only difference is the main character is a man or a woman. They could even shoot the shows at the same time for more profit.

Jaksterzoo

Arguable, Motoko is a rockerboy at heart, due to the system. She also just rolls with it, she just isn’t with the corpo rockerboy stuff I think.

GrimV

Rockerboys love the spotlight, they actively want to swim against the stream, they party and they're loud. Motoko isn't/doesn't do any of that. Motoko just likes music. She hates everything that isn't related to playing the music. The only part about having a gig on stage that she likes is the pure playing. She doesn't care for other people hearing her music, actively dislikes it, even and tries to not be seen as soon as she leaves the stage. She doesnt write songs to annoy corps. That's how I read it at least.

matt

Watch Motoko run into Kitty at Afterlife. She's a Face. Superb actress, all the contacts, etc.

Pierre laplant

Do it, let the hate flow through you

outlaw

Thanks for the chapter!

Mistress Araenidae

Alex has to be a fucking idiot or he has no idea that Toko's a merc with a rep. I hope she boxes that head and has it couriered it to MSM.

Mistress Araenidae

MSM? What ever happened to the company? Oh, don't you know? The executive assistant came in one day and the place was covered in blood. On the reception desk was the heads of all the board members and managers.

Helen of Boy

If you're sneaky enough you can probably use a shotgun without anyone noticing. Make a whole other level of statement.

minimized

>I’m pretty sure that was the woman that played the titular Watson Whore. The titular Watson Whore is a man, though

vaizard27

Thank you for the chapter. I'm half sure Wakako was just staring at her and hemming around cause she didn't know what to say. the little gremlin just stole shit that was basically already in police hands without getting seen and is only bitching about it a little bit. That's the absolute best outcome of that gig and every other person on her payroll would have probably just walked away seeing all that NCPD.

EnderScroll

I agree, Mokoto should take the warning seriously and investigate both of them. She already noted this girls acting abilities in person. This person has been part of the game for a while and there is no such thing as a Good Samaritan in the corpo or showbiz. What is her angle?

carebear90

I've got the feeling 'Alex' has absolutely no idea who he's fucking with. I thought corpos do background-checks on everyone they're working with? Even if they didn't catch on who Motoko is, shouldn't they at least be wary to cross Alice? Or is a Tiger Claw boss relative simply not relevant to them? Anyway... I like the rising tension. Still hope there's a pressure valve somewhere in the near future. :D

EnderScroll

Miracle of sound fans unite. Him and the stupendium are my favorites GMV YouTubers. Severely underrated.

That Warden

Hes a krennic, bro thinks he's a shark in the ocean but in reality he's a small fish in a pond that just got the attention of a real shark.

carebear90

'Don't stop me now' by Queen.

Jaksterzoo

So, we all agree that the Not Manager sent Kitty to try and steal SAC, or at least get them off balance, right? “She was clingy, but did give a real autograph and a picture of the two of us in a nearby mirror that I snapped.” Also I’m not paranoid, but is there a non-zero chance they tagged her with a tracker? The warning at the end was a bit ‘hmm’.

WirelessGrapes

Gives me the idea of an omake with a guy who Alex absolutely fucked over getting tasked with background checking Motoko, finding The Only Thing They Fear and promptly giving her a glowing approval

WirelessGrapes

Nah they’ve given her enough things (clothes, music stuff, etc) to plant trackers on that stuff, no?

Caleb

The tension is palpable

wanderer117

They might typically focus on digital trackers, everything Motoko has been given has been laced with malware. It's not like they're trying to track a target back home or until they can be jumped. They want 24/7 location info on their money I mean talent.

wanderer117

Companies aren't monoliths, they have factions, conflicting personalities etc. Factor in cyberpunk craziness and things get weird. This might not be a setup for Motoko. This could be a test for Alex, or an attempt to pick up a free assassination. Watson Whore has been coming up a lot lately, maybe someone on that show doesn't like Alex and wants him gone. He seems experienced, and evil maybe he pissed one of them off in the before times.

wanderer117

Right, but Motoko doesn't watch the show. She's just wrong about what role Kitty plays on the show

Neferyti

Anyone think that Alex is thinking that they are playing by corpo rules, while Motoko is playing by her rules? Her rules have explosions, screams, and mental trauma. Oh and swords. He does know she is a kenshi right? ...right?

Jaksterzoo

Well, they’re corpo’s so they prob don’t care as much about TC connections, as for background checks, Motoko is relatively unknown outside of circles. And let’s be honest, who’s going to do a deep back ground check on a 14 year old? Or believe that they’re actually a merc?

Morog T Tiny

I agree, they would think she has a great imagination and just a poseur. ROFL

Morog T Tiny

Or gone loud. Causing all sorts of problems. She went in, got the material and got out. Wakako probably doesn't have anyone else that could have done that job with no collateral.

Jared Obermeyer

She might just need a distraction to plant a few things in the system for later use. No better distraction then a loud one.

Morog T Tiny

Hiromi should gift Alex one of Motokos brain dances, the one where noone gets hurt but Motoko just jumps into space should do. ;-)

White Neko Knight

What? Motoko loves playing on stage. She also has stage fright and grows flustered at the thought of people listening to her music. The juxtaposition is part of her charm. She enjoys being a rockerboy, she She also dislikes/hates all the needles corpo crap. If there was a YouTube site or ability to self publish through Hiromi She would. Be this is cyberpunk, she has to go through the corps to really get her music out there.

runedead56

I'm sure they did a background check request and then it was handed off to an intern who was overworked who did the minimal amount of required checks and moved on to the next report they had to fill out.

Morog T Tiny

tubes, drums, or mags. depends on the shotgun. although I would think in cyberpunk you would have something like the aa12, which would work for annihilation. ie recoilless automatic shotgun with the ability to fire grenades as well.

Morog T Tiny

She might be impressed that Motoko is real...

Garm88

Anything that holds rounds ready to be fed into a firearms chamber through either manual or automatic actions is a magazine. These can be tubes, boxes, cylinders or any other shape, really.

David Hoyt

Brilliant. The splat one (I can't remember the name at the moment). The car theft one would be good too. Nothing like taking down borgs to get the message across.

David Hoyt

I've changed my mind. They'd turn it into a vid series. I'm still for blasting the song into his chrome. There's no way he doesn't have chrome that records everything he sees and hears. No sleep, visions of blood, killing wankers harvesting organs. Make sure he can't record it, but hit a brain-dance in a meeting with his boss. I'm sure there's opportunities.

Teatime42

Yesssssss, assassinate him, mayhem, murder! Still waiting for the inevitable second arc with Maelstrom, gonna get that spider ripper someday! >:D

Dopplerdee

Not a huge fan of this subplot to be honest, never liked people doing things they hate to make others happy.

Sloth

I hope we get a pov from Alex before his sudden and untimely demise

Bable Zmith

The AA12 would be easy to make into a belt fed with how its designed.

Seras's Writing Corner

Correct! While she denies it, she definitely gets a rush going up on stage and when she is up there it's all good. It's the lead up to it that makes her anxious.

matt

I mean, anyone searching for ghost in the shell should find their BD website.

G JP

It's not about trackers or getting them off balance per se. It's about milking all of the money out of Motoko they can get. It's a sure bet that Alex gets paid commissions if Motoko does things like make an appearance on Watson Whore.

G JP

Background checks would typically cover official records, and Motoko's associations with Wakako, Hayato, Rogue, and the XBDs aren't on any official records. So they'd have to pay a fixer for an unofficial background check. But why would they bother with that for a random 14 year old street kid whose most prominent apparent association is only with a student of Arasaka Academy?

G JP

How could they possibly know? There's the Section 9 Net site, but it's not like that will have any record of their missions or list her XBDs. That way lies malicious prosecution, and Hiromi knows it. It would be brushed off as kids being kids. And neither Wakako, Hayato, or Rogue are going to call up MSM and tell them what they've had Motoko do for them, lol.

Doggos Are Puppers

Can't believe Alex has eyes but failed to see Mt. Tai. A frog in a well if there ever was one

Apollo Above

Don't be stupid Alex. Don't put a hit on Hiromi

gedas

Wow ppl in this comment section are rly murdery, we don't know if the guy has even done anything yet 😀. Some also say that Alex doesn't know who he's messing with, but honestly neither does Motoko as she hasn't done any snooping action on him. MB he's Morgan Blackhand in disguise, anything is possible seaing how Reed is a random bouncer . She is a netrunner who specialises in infiltration, she should start investigating who he is and what he's up to. Should be prety easy for her.

matt

Yeah but people get weird when you ACTUALLY palpate their tension. Like, why even mention it then?

E. Anderson

I must admit, I have also long been awaiting the maelstrom payback. Motoko promised death. Thus, death must be dealt.

Thomas Laptain

To me it doesn't seem like Mokoto hates the entire rockerboy side of things, just the corpo shit she has to deal with.

Thomas Laptain

Alternatively, do put a (failed) hit on Hiromi and let us revel in the aftermath.

Morog T Tiny

Seras, I think you wanted pec vs peck in the following sentence, "She yanked the cap and signed Jared’s chest even planting a kiss of all things on his peck at the end." Hmm kinda funny that the spell checker doesn't have the abbreviation for pectoral in it's library but pec is the correct one vs peck, although you could re-write the sentence to "she yanked the cap off and signed his chest giving it a peck on the period, her lipstick red against his skin." although, is she even wearing lipstick or does she have permanent lip color?

John

wooo~ finally caught up! Liked the story so far other than the author being a fan of Dubs(vs subs, re 'sexy motoko voice') and being really confused about which Rise song they were referring to ... i had been asuming the GiTS one by origa until it was disclosed to be some pop song). Thank you for the chapters!

Seras's Writing Corner

No no. I only really listen to subs. Dubs are generally awful. There are just like two exceptions to that. Cowboy Bebop, and Ghost in the Shell. I like both in english.

WhatAFungi

Whoa! Great chapter. Glad I finally got the scratch together to pay for the Patreon. That flash transition was super nova. Alex is so dead. I can’t wait for him to try and feel her up or something weird, and then just lose a head or hand. These chunks of exp really do think that contracts, fame, and money make them invincible. It’s quite funny. Can’t wait for more!

RandySalacious

Just finished a full series reread!!!! crazy i read 850000~ words in 4 days but gahdamn GitC is good 0.o crazy pitch - with the showroom heist on the brain (and maybe some covert beheading too) any chance Motoko might get a bit of a persona 5 bug? i think life will change Motoko's version would go crazy, considering she hasn't really done much in that vein since Tank!, and she seems to be getting a bit fed up with the rock band i could totally see her taking a break to make some music for the love of the game (the game being PERSONA ha) and idk i just think life will change would be a good pick.

White Neko Knight

Naw. He's a Shark. A small shark but still a shark. He just ran into an Orca.

Fortunis

Alex is a fucking dead man and has no idea lol.

Jørgen

Pease oh please write more Ghost in the City.

Dylan S

If alex hurts or has hiromi hurt, there will be no where in nightcity that will hide him.

0utk@st

Nice setup for "they fear is you" to become a SAC official track. Just saying...

Jørgen

No Assassining, instead put a fun weird item as a message on his bed without any trace og how. To a vip that would be more worrying than most other more final events.

Jørgen

Very good point, a rockergirl at 14, would in a less weird world be just a rockergirl. A basic background check might find family links and the tiger link is clear. The merc stuff is more abfuscated so it might not be noticed at all. The ghost persona link is obfuscated to so a check might miss it. It opens all sort of fun little chaos options. Only more chapters will tell...

Haise

Finnaly finished my 3rd reread, and I've got to say, this is prob my favourite fanfic these days, and also one of the my most favourite pieces of media in general.