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“Just be polite Dorah, and if anything happens, you can just come home.” Mama whispered to me as she stopped me at the door, and tugged at my shirt and hair a bit.

“I’ll be home soon Mama. Nothing to worry about.” I said firmly, and she smiled a bit weakly, but nodded. 

Then I turned and there was a guard at the door, fancy armor, and a half sneer on his face. Although he simply walked away when I reached him, and so guided me back towards El’Tela’s home.

Time to find out what crazy nonsense was going on.

There were more guards around the tree home, and it was obvious something was going on. I was waved through and soon entered the same downstairs that I always reached, only El’Tela wasn’t in her breakfast nook drinking tea and a pastry like she always seemed to. Instead I was pointed up, and so I went.

There I found her, actually standing although for once she had a staff in her hands, something I didn’t even know she had, and the guard finally stopped moving me on and stopped at the door. Matching another on the other side.

“Finally. I grow weary of this test of my patience.” A Magistrix said, but not mine. She was younger than El’Tela obviously, but still had a maturity in her face that told me she was probably ancient. 

“Impatient as always Zan’Felanar.” El’Tela said criticizing but the woman sent her a harsh look. Then she looked at me, her face shifting to one of disbelief.

“You jest.”“I do not.” El’Tela responded as calm as a placid lake, seemingly unbothered by all the weirdness. I continued to approach taking a stop not quite at El’Tela’s side because frankly, I had no idea what the fuck was going on.

“I don’t believe it, what game are you playing? You’ve been retired long enough, you have most of us believing you actually are done with it all.”“I am.”

“Yet here I am.” Zan’Felanar seemed to mock. “One more prodigy, you know it won’t make a difference.”“I have long stopped caring, but I have a responsibility that even I won’t hand off with my retirement. Go on, I know you want to prove me wrong. Test her.”“Test me for what?”“Silence.” The hiss was instant, and I felt myself do just that.

A Silence spell? Interesting! 

“Be polite Zan’Felanar, she doesn’t know why you are here.”Yeah be more polite, and politely turn away so I can steal this spell, perfect. Thankfully the guards were on the outside of the room. As she turned away, I silently cast the Spell Steal and grabbed the stolen spell… I could throw it at her…

Ooh that was tempting. The idea of a Magistrix getting silenced by her own spell mid speech, ooh the desire was there.

Instead I looked it over.

Spell structure wasn’t familiar, but that actually made it almost easier to figure out.

The bubble of silence it placed on the user was small, but more than enough to keep any sound from escaping.

Perfect. 

[Spell Learned: Silence]

Yeah, keeping it and learning it was definitely the more valuable choice, even if I really wanted to just throw it back on this Magistrix who was still complaining.

“-I am honestly wondering what you are hoping to get out of this? Is there some boon at the end of your ancient life you still seek?”Wow, that was rude.

“I am fulfilling my duty. Knowledge of the Arcane Mind is still a priority for you… Is it not?”“I have enough examples. My Students are progressing well.”“Then one completely set apart from your own paradigm will be extremely useful.” El’Tela responded calmly, and the Magistrix glared.

“Fine. I’ve spent enough time in this backwater, let me test your student, and see what tricks you have come up with… Well girl, step forward, do not make me wait another moment!”“Okay.” I said without even thinking about it and walked over, and it seemed to take the Magistrix a moment as she did a double take.

She sent a glare at El’Tela who just calmly watched on, unconcerned.

Right you’re silenced Dorah, don’t make a peep.

The Magistrix sighed angrily, and reached out grabbing my arm, and to my surprise tugging me into the Glyph. 

She looked me over as I looked back at her just waiting for her to get on with it.

She looked at me for a while before sending a look at El’Tela.

“A paltry trick.”“She is quite used to it. She trains inside my Glyph every day, Zan’Felanar.”There was no noise, but I could almost hear the ‘tsk!’ just from the way the woman sneered for a moment.

Then she looked at me, deeper. 

“So, she has Arcane Meditation after all. Did you finally create an actual method to learn it, or do you still expect your students to spend a decade just learning how to gather mana?”“The latter.” El’Tela said flatly, sending a look at Zan’Felanar, that spoke volumes. “Some of course learn it faster than others.”“I am sure the skill of the teacher has no factor.” Zan'Felanar sniped back, but she was starting to frown.

“What is this? Did you discover some ritual to implant the-No… This is wrong. This is completely wrong!” I was suddenly grabbed by my face and pulled very close, close enough I could smell what Zan'Felanar had eaten for breakfast. 

The woman's eyes, glowing blue with the Arcane as she used some spell, were so close I was worried her eyes were going to touch mine.

It was gross.

Then she ripped herself away, stomped across the room. In El’Tela’s chair there was a bag… Oh is that why she was standing, that was super rude.

Zan’Felanar, reached inside and rummaged around and came out with a scroll? No, she tore it open and walked back.

“Hold still. This scroll is worth more than your life.” She informed me through nearly gritted teeth as she pressed the scroll to my face…

What the fuck?

Sure just call me fucking scroll face or something. Yeah totally fun staring at the back-Wait. I could see lines spreading across the scroll on the other side. Cool! What was that? What did it do?Then after a few moments it was torn away and I caught just a glance, it wasn’t my face thankfully, but something else just as intimate, the flow of Mana through my head. And there was the Glyph and Swirl, the internalized manifestation of what I had done to gain the Arcane Mind Skill.

It was impossible to not recognize I had made it after all

“This… This isn’t how you form the structure, it’s all wrong!”“As I said. A completely different paradigm, and yet, achieving the same result.”“This… I will have this examined El’Tela Arkhana’Shola! If there is even a hint, a faint whisper on the wind that this is some trick!”“I do not, and never have cared about your project Zan’Felanar, I believe simply improving your available mana is the wrong course… But then, I also believed that the two manifestations were incompatible. So we both have had our understandings shifted. Isn’t the Arcane grand?”“Miserable old washed up-” The rant ended with a hissed click of her teeth as she forcefully shut her mouth. Then she looked at me, and then back at El’Tela. “I will speak with you again, when I have studied the results.”“And I will be here.” El’Tela said continuing to be as placid as ever. Zan’Felanar, grabbed her bag and rose and then stalked out without any further word, her guards following her…

“So?”“Come, my breakfast was interrupted, and I believe yours was as well. Some children are simply too impatient.” El’Tela spoke, turned and tottering slowly out of the room staff holding her up.

“You okay?”“Fine.” She remarked but just the fact she responded and didn’t just ignore me told me a lot.

“Want me to heal you?” I offered, and she slowed sending me a look but finally with a sigh she nodded. 

“Please. My back is displeased with me today, and standing did it no favors.”

I cast Holy Light, and a Strong one since I was going to eat after, and she breathed out a deep sigh of relief.

“Thank you. Now come, I wish to eat, and I believe you are wondering what just happened.”“It ran through my mind, about the time she slapped a scroll across my face.” I said a bit dryly, and she huffed out a laugh.

“Then be satisfied that Zan'Felanar will be existing in a world of suffering of her own creation. The woman doesn’t like to travel, and she hates being shown she is wrong. The fact I am partially responsible means she is quite upset at the moment.”“That does make me feel better… What’s her deal? With everything?”She ignored me as we walked back down. She took her carpet lift and we returned to her breakfast nook, letting me see wings as the dragonhawks were already leaving. 

Guess Zan’Felanar, didn’t want to stick around. 

Not long after to my surprise food came out on a tray like always, but there was one for me.

“Eat.” I was ordered and so I did. The food was conjured, but was tasty. The pastry she always had in the morning was crispy and sweet, with a cinnamon crust. 

Very nice.

Do want.

I ate much faster than El’Tela so I decided to talk.

“I was really tempted to throw her Silence back in her face.”“That would have been foolish.”“I know… But I was still really tempted. Can you imagine her mid rant just going silent.”El’Tela didn’t respond to my impish grin, but she did hide her face behind her teacup a moment later.

“Zan’Felanar continues to be difficult, but she is competent in her focus.”

“Arcane Mind?” I said, only sort of guessing. The context clues were fairly strong.“Indeed. She gave up on Arcane Meditation as a student, deciding to forge her own path. She was moderately successful, and yet…” El’Tela looked at me. 

“Her Arcane Mind is different from mine?”“Slightly. You had different starting points, and yet came to a similar conclusion, such knowledge is invaluable for someone studying the Arcane Talent, and so I informed her of your success.”“A heads up would have been nice.” I said, not hiding my own critique.

She said nothing, and I could tell she wasn’t disagreeing with me, but wasn’t going to admit it.

Grumpy old woman.

“I should get back.”“Oh?”“Yeah, having a Magistrix show up out of the blue and then send a guard to demand my presence freaked out Mama. Something that could have been avoided if we knew this was going to happen!” I chirped saying it as cheerfully as I could.

She again ignored my words, but nodded. 

“Then I will see you tomorrow.”“Tomorrow.”

—--

Mage Armor, and Arcane Meditation.

I breathed in the heavy mana, which didn’t feel heavy at all anymore.

Mage Armor hitting ten had increased the amount of Mana I could continue to regenerate even while casting, but my Arcane Meditation was still just on the cusp of leveling to ten as well.

I was honestly really curious to see what would happen when I reached that level. Would it max out, and give me stat points, or a new skill? Or would it just keep going until I completely countered the mana repulsion?

It was today's focus. Using Mage Armor as the spell cast, to level it even more, and then just focusing on trying to alter the flow of Mana.

I glanced over, as usual El’Tela was watching. Today’s focus I’ll admit was partially to see how she’d react.

Arcane Mind, Arcane Meditation, it was a strange feeling to know that something more was going on and I just didn’t understand.

Of course I was also working on my Arcane Mind but that was less a spell, and more a mindset at this point. Syncing myself into the Arcane was an odd process.

But she was as tight-lipped as ever, so I think the only way to get real answers was to either make them for myself, or succeed.

I relaxed as the Mage Armor I’d cast faded, using a refined version that only last about ten seconds was all I needed, and it was light on the Mana needed which was nice.

I cast it again, letting magic flow through me, forming the structure, activating and the ethereal armor formed over me, before mostly fading from sight, and once again the feel of the mana shifted.

And then it clicked.

[Arcane Meditation Lv 10 Skill Mastered] [Mastery Benefit Evocation Unlocked]

I took in the surge of understanding. I breathed out, but not air, I spread out, touching the Mana in the air, and all of it could be pulled in. It would only take a moment, and… Well the Spell.

Evocation. The spell structure was there in my head, but with mastered Arcane Meditation it wasn’t even like my system was teaching me that much.

It was… The pinnacle of what I had been working towards. The ability to grasp all the mana around you and suck it in rapidly. 

Massive and nearly instant mana regeneration, all from a spell.

It was obvious. The swirl in my own Mana, was like a blueprint. I could just copy it down now, as it had reached the point of no longer just being an internal manifestation but the blueprints towards something more.

I rose up, El'Tela was still watching and rummaging around on her desk for paper and a quill, something that I was welcome to do, and then I just… Wrote it down.

“Evocation.” I whispered looking at the spell. It was rough. Even with all the work into Arcane Meditation to sort of build the blueprints slowly the spell still could be refined, altered, and changed. 

Still… It was a new spell that would need a whole lot more grinding…

“Heeheeehehehe!” “Do you know your ears wiggle when you laugh like that?”“Ack-!” I was so startled I inhaled some spit as I coughed to clear it and turned to see El’Tela standing beside me. “You startled me!”“You were quite distracted. What has taken your attention this ti-”

She went silent as she looked at the paper I’d written the spell down on, and then she took it, taking it in both hands as she read through the lines of the spell, the swirls and dips, and the mathematical precision that created magical phenomena. 

“What is this?”“A spell.” I decided and to my surprise I didn’t get a glare for my half flippant answer, which was actually more concerning than if she had. “It’s… Arcane Meditation, I didn’t notice, but the more I worked on it, the more I honed it, the closer it became to a spell… It’s Arcane Meditation, but as a spell.”“I see that.” She whispered quietly looking it over.

I waited a while longer just watching her look over the spell, but the more I waited the more uncomfortable the silence stretched. 

“Is it okay?”My words startled her a bit, El’Tela the put together ancient Magistrix flinched lightly seemingly realizing how distracted she herself had been.

“I need… You should cast it. I wish to see it.”“Oookay.” I agreed slowly, and then just took a breath. I already knew how to cast it, so… I stepped back, gathered my hands into the correct positions, let mana flow into Arcane and then I felt it, my Mana Pool wasn’t full, I had been casting just before, but nearly instantly in a haze of Arcane, Mana rushed into me, Mana Lightning, flashing in my hands.

Mana gathered so quickly it was causing actual friction in the air and creating static electricity. 

“Aagh!” I cried out a bit startled waving my hands around, breaking the spell but also stopping the lighting… Only it hadn't hurt, more tingly than anything.

Waving my hands around a bit to get the tingling to stop I looked up at El’Tela and her face was stoic, but her eyes never left me.

“Sorry, I wasn’t expecting the static. It didn’t hurt though.”“No, it doesn’t.” She agreed and then looked back at the paper. “Evocation is a rare art. A talent few Mages ever manifest. The discipline needed to properly train yourself to the art is painstaking, as you know.”“Yeah it takes a long time.” I agreed, which earned me an almost baleful look.

Oh right… I’d done it in like months… Shutting up now.

“I’ve long argued that Evocation can grow from an internal art, into a full spell structure. I spent… A very long time working towards this goal. It is the duty of all Magisters to expand the knowledge of magic, Arcane or not. When we first came to this land, when we first formed our government, and the title of Magister was created… It was argued that in order to earn the title one must expand our knowledge of Magic.”

I listened, quietly taking in what she said, because I’d never heard her talk like this, and all the while she stroked a thumb across the paper she kept looking at. 

“It was eventually discarded, politics of course, and some acceptable reasoning. They argued eventually we would discover it all, there would be no more expanding done… Fools. But it was chosen. Magisters could be gained through other service. I was the first Mage of Quel’Thalas to discover Arcane Meditation. Mage Armor was just the idea, Arcane Meditation was the key. You have never fought before child, so understand well, running out of Mana is death. If you have Mana, you can escape, you can survive, but running out? It doesn’t matter how skilled a mage you are.”

I nodded slowly. Holy crap, she was the one that made Arcane Meditiation… Discovered it? Or would I say codified it?

“Evocation came later… Much later, almost an accident the first time I pushed it further, but it was an art, a skill that took far too long to master. I dedicated so long… A spell… You turned it into a spell, a functional spell. Rough. Very rough, and yet any mage that can read a spell structure can cast this now.”

“S-Sorry?”“Fool. I am praising you. Attempting to get you to understand just how large an achievement you just made… I am proud of you.”

“Oh…. Heh?” I rubbed the back of my head looking away, this had suddenly went to extremely awkward, how do you even respond to that.

“Sign it.” She said then thrusting the paper at me, and I just blinked.

“Sign it?”“If one does not understand something, repeating the question is not how one asks.” She said her strict voice in full effect.

“Umm… Why would I sign it?”“Because we will be sending it to the capital. It will be added to the Halls of Theory.” She whispered almost lovingly as she placed the paper down and then looked at me. “Now sign it.”“What does that mean?”She gave me a look then breathed in and out. Surprising me by then actually answering.

“It means you have done something that has pushed our understanding of magic forward. It will be sent to the Hall of Theory and tested, and then accepted. Where you will receive a commendation from the Grand Magister for your work… You have nothing to fear Alah’Dorah, this is a moment you should be taking pride in your work. Not fearing the repercussions.”“Okay… Okay, sure. Why not… I’m not going to like get kidnapped or something right?”“No, that will not happen.” She said, sounding almost amused at my question.

So I shrugged and signed my name, my full name.

“Alah’Dorah Dawnspear.” I signed, and there was a definite ‘tsk’ noise as El’Tela heard what I said. “What?”“Nothing. Circumstance and politics has robbed me of many things over my life, this is simply another. Now… Go home, rest for the rest of the day, tell your parents what you have done, you father will understand if your mother perhaps will not.”“Okay… Okay Umm. Bye! See you tomorrow.”“Tomorrow.” She whispered slowly curling up the paper as I headed out.

Comments

Jazz

excellent more of my newest hyperfixation

heh

Ooh that’ll definitely get some attention on her. Drama incoming

Seadrake

Dear God, Dorah just crushed granny. She finalized her life's work and the side benifit of having her family name immortalized is robbed because since dumb bastard of her progeny disowned a genius who produced a savant.

Teatime42

Papa: (What Papa thinks) "I never have to plot revenge, having my beloved wife and adorable child is revenge enough. And now they know it too." Papa: (What Papa says) "E N C H A N T M E N T" (Begins slaughtering Dark spawn)

SAVAGE KITTY

@Seras can you give us more chapters pretty please (level ten kitten eyes)

Cyrus McEnnis

So, there are two routes here as I see it. First - Alah’Dorah's extended families suddenly realise that they have a budding Magistrix being raised outside the family structure and start jockeying for influence and authority over her. Given the asshat nature of most High Elves, this could _easily_ involve taking Dorah away from her parents and trying to embed her in the main family. Hijinx would ensue. Could be fun to play each side off against each other if that happens. Secondly, they could see her as a threat to the primacy of their branch of the family and try and suppress her, hard. This could be easily handled by sword and board to the face of the Young Misstrix trying to push her down. Fortunately, being banished from the family should cut both ways - while the Family has no responsibility for her, as a direct result they also have no authority. Everything she's gotten has been paid for clean and clear except, maybe her mage training with El'Tela - the implication has been that her father paid for that somehow, but it's possible a favor was owed which could complicate things a little.

10moorem

Dorah’s extended family are going to be shook.

RandySalacious

Better warm up the mage hand dorah, you gonna be backhanding some fools in the coming weeks

Tommy Tsunami

Huh. Not knowing Warcraft stuff has lead to several moments of "I had no idea this was a thing nor that this was leading to that", so moments like these feel like they're coming out of nowhere to a degree, but at the same time it all really is neat!

David Zimmerle

Her dad really gives me Sandal Feddic vibes.

Silver flare

Ah Grandma's mad some political bs robbed her of boasting it was HER grandkid that solved a millennia long problem. That's sweet in powerbroker kinda way. Gotta help build that rep for the genius grandbaby.

Zurgthegreat

Can’t wait for her blood family to act up after they realize they cast out the greatest prodigy of the high elves in the last millennia. I wonder if maybe El’tala will try to change that. She seems pretty sad that Dorah doesn’t have the family name.

Dopplerdee

Oof, i feel like Granny is gonna tear into someone over how this should have been in their name but they kicked Dorah's dad out.

Miguel Garcia

Mom’s family may try to wrest control of Dorah with father’s family’s support on condition that Mama’s family marries Dorah back into the Dad’s family via a cousin?

outlaw

Gotta add a small scene of Grunkle and aunty learning and their reaction!

Helen of Boy

What good timing. Just after all the extended families barring El'Tela showed they wanted nothing to do with her. Well, "just" by Elf standards, at least. If they'd been nice, they maybe could have tried to make peace. Now? Why would she bother, when they made it clear they didn't want her or her parents?

Nick Finn

Oh my doG! The sheer amount of Seething from the extended family, is going to be hilarious. Papa's family gave him the boot and essentially exiled him. His own Great Grandmother can't acknowledge him or his family and now, this clueless, socially inept, adorably innocent gremlin turns out to be one of the greatest magical prodigies in the history of the Elves, who validated centuries of her work, and has to use the wrong family name because her Great Great Grandson wanted to play stupid political games. Her letter to the family is going to be EPIC in how scathing it is.

That Warden

And so begins the legend of Dora, correct me if im wrong but paladins weren't a thing till later in the future? And if so, will dora be the one to create paladins in this story? im expecting the time dragons to start popping up later in the story

Massgamer

Ha! Is Dora gonna accidental herself into a Magister? Give the baby a political position!

Abby

If I read that right, you can become a magister other ways now. But the original , and still valid way you earn the title by expanding the knowledge of magic, aka making a new spell...

Allan Tam

I'm curious now. Is that up and down wiggle or in and out? One is cute and the other is like dumbo ears. 🤭

abdd

I know this is kinda a big deal for Dora in a political sense, but isn't having this spell spread among the elves going to have a massive impact on how threatening their mages are? Suddenly the Troll Wars are a lot more manageable

Christian Biondo

I think the whole; Time Dragons try to stop the SI trope is a bit of a misunderstanding of the lore. The Bronze dragons will only interfere if someone tries to change the past, there isn't even a sacred timeline, since the Bronze are aware of the multiverse.

TheAngryJerk

Dorah just out pizza'd the hut. It will be so funny if 'i forgot her name already' is forced to turn straight back around without getting to study her limited edition touched by Alah'Dorah scroll to verify this new absolutely busted new discovery. Then get roped into fight off the troll swarm that will interrupt. She will be so frustrated Seras please I beg 'make what's her face' get the order to u-turn.

Endymion2314

I know you probably meant shocked, but now I'm imagining the Grand Magister getting the copy sent in and just literally shaking for hours, and as more and more people come and get handed the scroll each just stands there shaking until the entire building is vibrating.

dicloniuslord

Should’ve given a hyphenated last name for it to be recorded (and but it in) that it was the daughter of her mom and dad Also, considering how it was just defined, wouldnt she be a Magister now?

Dopplerdee

Nah, they disowned the dad so he has no last name, which is a big part of the issue really.

That Warden

Ah ok, the only other good Wow story that I've found has them popping up, story is called lost lion in case you want to read it.

10moorem

No, I said what I said. It’s slang.

Dopplerdee

Most people take a lot longer to learn a spell I think, so it might be a case of too little too late. Plus a big issue with the trolls was them healing through any damage the elves could do, which isn't really fixed by more regeneration.

Dopplerdee

It gets weird because theres an implication that they exist out of time... but if they do past and present and future should mean nothing, but they also have future selves, so like... its kinda fucky.

That Warden

Sounds like comic book multiverse stuff.

Bishop7053

Granny may or may not bitch slap half the family so hard they'll wind up in the future. Here she is with an adorable gremlin of a grandkid and she cant acknowledge her properly as such due to political bs. Some bitchs got all the fireballs coming their way soon.

Dwayne Parker

Dora will finally have enough magic to master her most difficult spells, Food and Drink!

Joseph

I'd be pretty pissed about the lady who slapped a scroll on my face stealing my arcane mind discovery

Zero Wrath

Gosh this is so good I had to sub to the Patreon to get more sooner. Thanks for the chapter! Loving it!

Skarbleface

Great Chapter once again, this story's just a lot of fun looking forwards to more of it

PlasmaticPi

She is definitely gonna get kidnapped to an Academy or something.

Talerax De Avon

I get the same vibe as Motoko's Kensei moment. Will Dorah get involve with a Yakuza Elf princess next?

Slayer Anderson

Dorah doesn't yet grok the fact that the long speech she was just given all but named her as a Majestrix in her own right. She probably won't until the formal title comes in the mail.

Ghostaur

i m literally addicted to this story. Great job as usual Seras.

michael stitcher

I have a feeling that from here on out things get wild, at least for elvish understanding of the arcane. By the power of the grind, she will blaze a new path! (Those snotty elves won't know what hit them, heeeheeheehee... wait, are my ears wiggling?)

Seras's Writing Corner

I didn't really originally intend that, but yeah. XD I guess I just had similar thoughts. It'll go way different though, so at least it'll be sort of fresh.

Seras's Writing Corner

Technically his last name is just "Nothing." But yes that is exactly what that is meant to indicate. Poor El'Tela was SUPER bummed it wasn't the Arkhana’Shola name written on the spell though, That's going to burn for the rest of her life.

Seras's Writing Corner

Correct, this isn't a Turning point in the war kind of thing, but some elves might find themselves running out of Mana casting Evocation and being able to escape instead of dying. So we'll see.

Dopplerdee

That is true, if one thing is important enough to have Dorah's name on it then the other should too.

Dopplerdee

I don't foresee her ever letting whoever kicked Dorah's dad out of the family forget what they cost the family(once Dorah is far enough away that their political shit can't get to her at least.)

David Zimmerle

Oh definitely not, I just meant that they're both kind of in their own world when they get into it.

Alex

Also, you know. Both *really* like ENCHANTMENT. But he reminds me more of Arthur Weasley. Good dad, just passionately awkward and slightly bumbling.

DeerHeart

Dorah, at the moment the circle of Magisters recieves the missive, oblivious to the six nervous breakdowns, seven cases of ptsd and a stroke she just caused, as she plays with her friend Kimmi:Do the impossible, touch the untiuchable, row row fight the power... Hmm why would I start singing that for no reason.

A Bellator

Trolls come into town while Mama is away she comes back to a crater with Dorah and all the other kids giggling Honey are you alright? Huh? Yes dear... did you know that trolls parts make enchantments go BOOM?

Arawn

I get that her Mama’s family didn’t disinherit her, but they really don’t deserve to have their family name in that fancy Hall either.

meatybyte

And while they take a good half century to come up with this decision, Dora will be half way across the continent happily oblivious. Probably playing with a friendly fairy dragon she 'found'.

Neferyti

Further along in the story, I can already imagine a message put out by troll headquarters: "If you see this girl exploring dungeons in our territory, no you didn't. Seriously, you saw NOTHING!"

BurnNote

Previously I said Dora was at an undergraduate level, verging on Phd. Now she pretty much completed her PhD with significant original research. Which is some right crazy stuff, especially since it's Big Deal research.

meatybyte

A few months is a long time granny, it's like 3.5% of Dora's entire life... Excluding sleep time, fun time and hug time, but still. Also, is Dora a magistrix now? Well after a council looks over her spell of course, but after that? Does she need to do an interview and confrontation like for a PhD? But more importantly, granny has a bad back!... I thought elves were immune/very resistant to aging. Or is it due to her lifestyle and the lack of a dedicated order of healers? Because of course magical healing wouldn't be a priority to a stupidly long lived race, it's not like injury and bodily comfort is important when you have to live with it for thousands of years. Whinge, grumble... Anyway, I need to give my apologies to Carl it wasn't his fault after all. I still firmly believe that this 'whats her name' is still a grumpy teen, because who else can be that rude, impatient and unaware, seriously bad breath, when you have magic! Next you'll tell me one of the best mages, still has BO and manually wipes. Literally wave your bloody hand, be clean, fresh, smell of roses and cinnamon for the rest of the day.

Perf

Dorah doesn't want to go to the capital, but it looks like the capital is going to be coming to her now. I really can't wait for Zolty to get an aneurism after hearing that Dorah might become a magistra at 5.

meatybyte

Ha, yes as lecturer, not a student. Goodness, can you imagine it a class of 600+ year olds being taught by this tiny lady of 12, mimicking grumpy granny's style. "Because it worked for me."

meatybyte

Good tasting food and drink is important! She already has healing, so next is perfecting mage hands for a massage spell, modify the drink spell and mix a few others for an instant mineral/herbal hot tub. Ooh and let's not forget some type of mental library so she can read and write notes in her mind, she needs her eyes for exploring. Plus some long range communication, like maybe paired mirrors so she can get long distance compliments from mama and papa. Very Important!

Cyrus McEnnis

"Oh I'm sorry, did I say I was teaching my son the 'Arcane Mind' spell? No, no, this is my 'Fireball Mind' spell."

Thrent

Paladins as we know them in WoW come from the Warcraft RTS in the kingdom of Lordaeron just south of the High Elves. But it won't exist for a few millennia. (The humans will unite during the troll wars and form the Arathis Empire, which will later fragment into kingdoms) That said paladins followed the legend of Tyr, the light wielding titan keeper that fell tens of thousands of years ago. So there were proto paladins in the past but they were made of rock & stones.

Flintstone

Ok, while I'm sure Evocation will have a huge effect on Dora's life and probably a meaningful impact on the High elves in general. I am really interested in what this chapter maybe tells us about El’Tela. Specifically her politics "Zan’Felanar seemed to mock. “One more prodigy, you know it won’t make a difference.”" "Magisters could be gained through other service." I may be reading a bit much into these lines, but what I get from them is that 1. El'Tela did not retire because she was done and her side of politics was ascendant/her goals where achieved. It seems she retired after a long career and with whatever she fought for still in contention. 2.With the High elves, teaching prodigies helping them discover something new is a genuine road to power.You can end up shaping and (hopefully) having a good relationship with a whole bunch of new Magisters. Furthermore I think the first quote implies that this is something El'Tela did. So um having read a lot from not too many lines just thought I'd put that out there. Also I do not know a lot about WOW Lore, looked through the wiki a bit but nothing outside of that and this story. I would be really interested in any theories from those who know more of what an old (like founding father old elf) like El'Tela would have tried to push politically something that the High elf Nation might have somewhat moved away from over time. Something magicey or scholarship related perhaps ?

Zenkai543

They're definitely going to try, and then the arrows in their asses that have been enchanted to burn them alive starting from their bones and working outward from there will teach them why that was wrong.

wanderer117

Hum, if everyone can pull as much magic as they want out of the air whenever they want. Are we looking at an environmental mana depletion? A rise in mana addiction? Clearly the old political elves will point out, this spell should not be shared. Only those with the insight and decades of effort deserve as much mana as they want whenever they want.

Zeroingdark

I think it has to do with how old she is… remember, she worships elune. And she’s a high elf, not an night elf. High elves were severed from the world tree. So they age but some are still thousands of years old for a rare few. Like granny!

Meaning Yellow

Not telling Jun you're a sword master energy in 3...

Vancouver

Didn't Dora's mom also invent a spell though? Why wasn't that treated as a big deal?

Jessy

Yes, but that less fun than the magisters causing an earthquake

wanderer117

Magistrix are mages not rangers. Her mom made a proto power shot. Not very useful for mages. Dora made a spell for a talent that only archmages develop. Very useful for mages. And the mages are the judges of who counts as a Magistrix.

N K

Oh I wanna see her parents reaction

Axel Wate

How lovely, the elite get to be energy vampires and separate from the common chaf, I am sure nothing will go wrong with it

Jake V

Bet Grandma's regretting not listening to the Uncle and press-ganging them back into the family... Also lmao at the whole "I spent a large portion of my long life working towards this fruitlessly and you solved it in a month" thing she caught herself from blurting out.

Axel Wate

It appears that her gramps from her mother side will be quite vindicated though. Also her spell breaker uncle maybe

highlord

I'm curious how you will tackle her growing up and actually going out to explore the world. Azeroth is a death world, no matter how much the current Blizzard wants you to believe otherwise.

Skjadir

Evocation is the spell she would normally give to her students that were close to graduation to finish and they all failed ? (mentioned in the thread) And now Dora completes it on her own without promiting because she saw how it was becoming more spell like and then did finish the last step.

wanderer117

Earth was a death world, until it wasn't. Lots of places are going to be fairly safe but inhospitable for an elf that can make her own food / water and craft a tent/house. She might already be at the point where humans aren't a real threat until they vastly outnumber her. It depends on when Dora starts expolora-ing. I foresee low ambient mana being a problem, her apparent young age being a problem, plus the secret bronze dragons and their timeline shenanigans. Other stuff too

Kollish

Amazing chapter! Time to watch Chaos commence.

Seras's Writing Corner

That's literally what the Sunwell is for. To keep that from happening. The High elves using evocation won't be enough to really affect the mana levels in the air, for comparison nearly all the buildings in Silvermoon are held together with magic from the sunwell, and the sunwell powers a massive super barrier, AND the elves all use it, AND AND AND...

Seras's Writing Corner

Yeah El'Tela is by this point in time at LEAST 4+ Thousand years old. She was one of the original exiles. She REMEMBERS the Night Elves. (I imagine she was born post cataclysm, but before the exile. There was about 2k years or so in there. So she basically grew up being told to hide her magic but still learning it until her people were exiled. So yeah She's OLD she LOOKS old. Which is weird for an elf. Etc.

Endymion2314

The spell in game refined thousands of years is literally just 3sec of mana Regen at 1500%. So enough to get you back in the fight or run as she said. It's not an I win button it's a I don't die today button.

Seras's Writing Corner

Yeah. If anything Dorah has achieved one of the requirements for gaining the title, and would actually be fairly difficult to refuse the position with her work soon spreading, but thats not the same thing as getting the title.

Slayer Anderson

It seems like it's a question of what Dorah's teacher believes VS what's established protocol in the upper ranks of the kingdom/empire/whatever. IE: El’Tela is an advocate that the only requirement for the position should be meritocratic, whereas there are other elves who put various 'qualifications' into the system in order to make sure only the 'right people' ascended to the office.

Cyrus McEnnis

OK. So, basically, we're looking at power structures here. The following is reckless speculation, otherwise known as a wild ass guess based off the story so far and half-remembered Warcraft lore. In High Elf society, political power seems to grow from the shaft of a wand. The political leadership, outside of the royal family, appear to be all mages. So I would suggest we're looking at a constitutional magocracy. Non-mages might not be quite second-class citizens, but appears to be closer than it should given the extremely "recent for elves" shenanigans of Azshara and her merry band of Highborne. She knows what she did. And she does not give a single solitary fornication. So, the obvious political stances that would lose El'Tela political power and place her in Bumfuck, Nowhere would likely be ones around the role of arcane magic in society. Potentially, about sharing political power with non-mages. Maybe even something as simple as suggesting that the Rangers or Spell-Breakers might have insights valuable to have in the councils of the high & mighty.

Cyrus McEnnis

Honestly, I'm a little surprised Dorah isn't focused like a frikking laser beam on some sort of temporal protection variant of Mage Armor. Something that makes her more "real" than other versions of herself, for want of a better way to put it. Because that's the thing I'd worry about most, right now - not stuff in thousands of years, the possibility of the Bronze Lounge Lizards snapping their talons & preventing Dorah from being born.

Apeljohn

Yeah, we're firmly into "hook it up to a vein" territory here. I'm legitimately worried that people will start showing withdrawal symptoms if the chapter drop rate slows.

SunyLaw1

Reads more like, she trains students in Arcane Meditation to a certain level but the actual spell of Evocation which does what Arcane Meditation does has so far been more like a talent rather than an actual spell and Dora just created said spell right then which is why she is going to go to what is basically the Hall of Fame for elf mages or whatever.

Garm88

She's quickly deviating from the Paladin life path to the Arcane Warrior Mage (that can heal) life path, and I'm fucking here for it.

Dwayne Parker

Dora comes back after half a year. D: I’m finished. Mom: Finished? D: Yep. I learned everything. Mom: Everything? D: *ominously* Everything.

Heidao

And so both Houses can only cope and seethe for having lost a prodigy, and having her achievement added to their Name. So far, only dad's side wasn't outright hostile

Straven

Hell with one path! Hell yes to all paths!

Straven

Oh this is going to creat pure chaos in the capital without a doubt! And god old 'family' members are going to be frothing! Thank you for the great and fun read seras!!!

Straven

Wait.....will this likely be an absolute game changer when the hoards start attacking in massive waves?....! Anything that could allow deadly powerful mages to go all out over and over and over again in far shorter periods has to be badass in regards to fighting off hoards!?

Scholar of Endless Knowledge

It’s honestly seems very cringe for the mc to be sharing basically everything with people. I get she is from our modern world and all but nobody is dumb enough to be this open in a totally new world like this! Especially when you have mages and shit running around and everybody telling on her when she does anything. Still liking the story a ton. It’s just the mc’s lack of common sense makes her feel dumb asf.

Straven

Just wait till all the new followers discover all her other stories...withdrawal symptoms will be insane!

Perf

Her species is going to be fighting against genociding conquerors ALOT in the near and distant future. Seems absolutely retarded to not share.

Scholar of Endless Knowledge

I know, and with mc powers will avoid issues of being so open. But in any other situation it would get her captured and thrown into some magical examination room forever. It just makes her feel far to immature and naive for a reincarnated individual

Seras's Writing Corner

Correct! Evocation was originally a talent you had to buy. Eventually they turned it into a spell that every talent spec could get, thus El'tela was teh old Talent specced Evocation user, and Dorah just created the spell thus allowing mages to all learn it.

VestedStream283

I mean, the elves are arrogant enough to believe she's just a really talented elf.

Robert Apgar

I always find the "captured and examined" thing a weird excuse for bad things to happen. If the tone of the world supports it then go ahead and hide your powers fam, but around these parts you have super lazy and arrogant elves and close family members. She isn't yelling at the top of her lungs that she has to kill all the old gods or anything super prophetic, she is just some sort of ultra prodigy. Which feeds the elves egos even if they envy her talent.

0utk@st

“If one does not understand something, repeating the question is not how one asks.” Best Response EVAR!