Saundarya Sanjeevani issue 2 pg 11-12 outline (Patreon)

Rewrote some cringy and some outright creepy dialogues from page 11, Kishore is still kinda a horny dude but less creepy. Kamla, aka Karamchand is losing more of himself, as his patience has been run thin from the nightmare. The Apsara is using every trick in the book to bring Karamchand down to his knees, literally and figuratively. More pages coming soon!