Kickstarter Video - Feedback requested (Patreon)

This is the final brick in my Kickstarter plan.

Those of you who missed Bernard will be glad to hear that she's back and doing the Kickstarter voiceover. The video is slightly less than 90 seconds long and aims to:

1) Highlight the product (obviously)

2) Introduce the setting, in order to garner interest in future projects and signpost people towards the games

3) Articulate that the Precinct Omega project is about more than just miniatures and that it is a business with an agenda beyond "sell moar stuff"

I'd welcome your feedback on whether I achieve these objectives with this video, whether I do so in a way that effectively solicits your interest, and whether there are any technical issues I should fix (I know there's at least one I've spotted already).