My Oni Love - Chapter 3, Revised (Patreon)

Got some advice from a friend on how to better write the chapter, and thought they made a good enough point to rewrite a little.The rewrites start with the Haruka scenes. Basically, I just edited how they both reacted to the harem stuff.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/f2snkht39hfuryl/My%20Oni%20Love%20-%20Chapter%203%20-%20revised.pdf?dl=0

PS: Whoops, wrong link. Fixed now.PPS: Actually fixed now. Google had it hyperlinked to the wrong spot.