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So, here's the thing - I kinda want to write some darker stories? Things that may or may not include intelligence loss, identity death, permanently-trapped-in-a-sexy-situation - bad ends, basically. I like writing sweet things, but sometimes I just crave a really dark tale. Mixing the two is even better, as a rule. But the problem is that I've had a bit of a creative block on the matter? I've been kink shamed a few times, and it hit hard enough that I'm struggling to turn my mind toward such stories... I'm hoping that if I can get outside suggestions, it'll give me "You're not alone in liking these things" validation? And maybe break through my block.So. If anyone has any dark story suggestions, now's the time to give them? Messaging me directly is fine if you don't want to post here. Credit for the idea can be given - or not - according to the suggester's comfort/preferences. The story will likely be posted at the $5 tier, first, but the suggester will of course get access as well, regardless of tier. (It won't be a commission, or anything - I'll ultimately be writing it according to my own tastes and ideas, so it may not exactly match what the suggester originally intended. Still, I hope I'll produce something they enjoy~)

ETA: I should mention that one key component of me writing sexy dark stories is that the characters should be happy at the end of them? Or rather, it should be an ending that would have made their original selves miserable - maybe they've been frozen into a statue, maybe they're trapped in a cycle of eternal lust, maybe they've been transformed and their personality altered in ways they would have hated - but at the end of it, they're... if not happy, then at least not actively unhappy? Whether because their completely-new personality is fine with it, because they're too dumb to know any better, or because they're just incapable of thinking (as a statue) at this point, they should be happy with their new situation. Or at least not miserable?Otherwise, I just feel bad about it, and it ruins the sexy appeal for me.

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Sylent-M

Man lost in the woods/out on a hunting trip/documenting an unexplored wilderness, encounters a cave to take shelter in for the night. He enters, only to find it inhabited by an apparently pregnant naga. She swiftly bites him, her venom being a heavy aphrodisiac and mutagenic that leaves him in a lust fueled haze as he shifts into a woman. The newly turned woman finds out first hand that nagas do not carry their clutches themselves, as the naga transfers her eggs via ovipositor. She then acts as a living incubator, kept pliant by repeated injections. Bad end would be the young hatch inside her and claw their way out, killing her. Pseudo-good end would see her suffering a combination of Stockholm syndrome, and addiction to the aphrodisiac and sensations of being full of eggs, leading her to remain in the naga’s clutches to bear further broods.

PrincessKay

This seems to have been cut off, part way through? Was there more to the idea?

Sylent-M

There was, I’ve edited it. Formatting on this site is a hassle on mobile.

PrincessKay

Ah, I see! No guarantees, but I *do* find it a bit hot. The psuedo-good (though still bad) end is more my style, personally, so if I end up doing yours that'll be the direction I take it. (Even if I don't get to this immediately, I might keep it on my list for the future~)

Sylent-M

Had another idea from the mention of intelligence loss, albeit in the opposite direction. MC starts as a dumb, sexist, jock. One day the captain of the debate team catches him bullying her junior members. As the latest in a long line of witches, she casts a spell on him to change his behavior. Over the rest of the school day he finds himself shifting from his tall, burly self to a small, dorky looking girl. Not ugly, but not conventionally attractive. She also gets an increase in intelligence. As, despite her fear over what’s happening, she finds subjects she used to struggle with growing easier and easier. The spell does contain a reality altering component, meaning that no one notices the change other than her and the caster. Her friends all see her as one of them, her parents think she’s always been that way. The only other major change is that her wardrobe is adjusted to fit the new her. Unable to draw anyone’s attention to what’s occurred, she tries to continue as normal. Only to find it practically impossible. The sports she enjoyed are beyond her current physicality (maybe she’s asthmatic, adding further difficulty). The FPSs she played are no longer stimulating. Her friends are morons who can’t keep up with her, and their denigrating remarks towards people she now resembles hurt even though they’re not directed at her. After several increasingly miserable days trying to reclaim her old life, she storms off from her old friends after a particularly awful comment. Weepily wandering the halls, she encounters the debate captain. She invites her to the clubroom, and - after apologizing to the members she bullied before all this started - finds herself enjoying the discussions and back-and-forths. The story ends with her being bullied in a manner similar to what she did at the start, only for the captain to swoop to her defense, the two now dating.

Sylent-M

Rrgh, editing.

PrincessKay

Does seem like an interesting story - but not very dark? Maybe if she was an arrogant overconfident member of the debate team that bullied people with words, and was slowly shifting into a bimbo, with everyone having memories of her as a slut - and she can't seem to control her reactions to all the naked girls who just keep assuming she's going to have sex with them - but. Well. That's a very different story. .....A very tempting one, too, if I'm being honest. >,> Though I'd feel a bit bad about twisting around your idea so much.

Sylent-M

I accidentally posted early again, I’ve finished it now.

PrincessKay

I do like the idea! But I'm probably going to take the basic idea and go in a completely different direction? DX Sorry. Since I'm more in the mood for dark than sweet, what my brain did with that is "We start with a sharp-tongued pretty boy, who's verbally abusing the junior members of the debate team. The team captain, not liking the sight of her fellow students being abused, casts a spell on him. Onethat starts to feminize him, while slowly making him dumber - and more submissive. Everyone's memories of him insist that he's a slut - and at first, he's almost okay with all the girls calling on his services, but they all expect him to one sided serve them, and what's more he can't help... doing it... and enjoying it... and the more he gives in, the more the changes progress, the more his wardrobe changes, the more his mind is altered - until, at last, one of the girls (probably the captain herself) brings up the fact that our protag is always the one giving, and maybe it's time she was on the receiving end. The orgasm, the breast play - the transformation completing, juuust in time for fingers to slip inside. And then giving in, becoming a perfect bimbo slut inside and out~

Sylent-M

That’s not a bad story idea. I’ve just encountered a lot of bimbofication/sluttification stories recently and am in the mood for something a bit more novel. Still would read it though.

PrincessKay

I get that. I might be open to writing intelligence gain at some point? Just not what I'm after right now. Besides, while there's plenty of bimoification/slutification stories out there - in my experience most of them are *extremely* het.

Sylent-M

True. Lesbian slut is incredibly rare.

PrincessKay

I'd honestly rather read it than write it - one of the few subjects I can say that on - but it's so rare that I find myself with little choice but to create it myself. DX

Chode

I really like super hero(ine) stories, from the perspective of the hero, where the villain wins. If you’re into mind control stories, I follow a writer here on Patreon by the name of Madam Kistulot who is a master of that exact genre.

PrincessKay

I might have to check out that Patreon, come the first. Did you have any particular story concepts within the genre you'd like to see me write?

mutatiio

I enjoy dark tales myself as long as they aren't death or gore.