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Technical Criticism Poll

  • 01.) Lighting (KG, your scenes are too dark or too saturated!) 7
  • 02.) Dialogue/Story (Who writes your script? The writers of GoT Season 8!?) 32
  • 03.) Sound (Slosh, slish, slosh, slosh? I could make better sounds w/ petroleum jelly!) 21
  • 04.) Locations (Nothing says Aliens like a random office room at daytime!) 15
  • 05.) Facial Animation (Eyebrows are moving way too much, or way too little!) 15
  • 06.) Positions (You know there's more than missionary and doggystyle, right KG?) 55
  • 07.) Physics (Boob bouncing is way too fast or way too stiff!) 11
  • 08.) Liquids (Facehuggers are sticky. I want more sticky liquid!) 40
  • 09.) Bipedal Movement (Not enough hand or feet movement!) 8
  • 10.) Monster Variety (Really? Huggers all day everyday? Take some risks!) 37
  • 2023-04-17
  • —2023-04-30
  • 241 votes
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Content

Hey all!I wanted to start up a poll this week to get your feedback on what technical aspects of my scenes are lacking/need serious work.  When watching one of my recent scenes (Harley, Aunt Cass, DVa, and/or Chun-Li), what jumps out that you wish was done better on a technical standpoint?As I start working on Elizabeth's big scene, I want to know which aspects need more love.  I really appreciated your feedback with last week's storyline synopsis, and I look forward to hearing your feedback regarding this topic.  If you don't see a choice that best describes a flaw with my content, please make a comment on this post.Please review the poll below and choose the technical aspect(s) you desire to see more improvement on.  The only way I'll improve as an animator is to know what to improve on from an audience who has no reason to hold back criticism.  Fire away, folks!

Comments

Pyroson

Not sure of what this would fall under but I noticed on the Quinn animation, her hair was moving in and, even, through her shoulders. That was very unnatural looking.

Sub-Zero

More boob penetration

Kar1Ma7x

I don't get the joke in the second one. Does GoT season 8 have bad writing or something? And how is that related to your stuff, KG?

Patrick McCaffrey

The only thing that jumps out to me is that when the women orgasm there is not much change in expression or actions.

Subply

more body movement not just boobs but when they orgasm they could have more interaction i guess is what im going for

Bill Westwood

Firstly,thanks to the endless commitment that goes into kg facehuggers.most appreciated and enjoying the work.

Bill Westwood

Lighting.my opinion is bright is good but maybe try to work the Lighting from a glowing hugger that gets brighter the closer it reaches its goal in the hole.then track the glowing/bright eggs through the body.making the skin glow or produces warmth in her belly while in a dark hive/cave

Bill Westwood

Dialog.story.loved the hieroglyphics story while exploring maybe a part 2.a 3rd and a 4th to add on to "oh no.not again."while reusing some of or all of the original voices.