Panther Gets Tamed (Reflection) (Patreon)

Hi!

Let me tell you that I've been looking forward to this reflection for a WHILE! I've said multiple times that I think this is the hottest chapter I've ever written, and I think that this is still true even to this day, tho lmk if you think differently! :)

Anyways, when thinking of the inspiration of this story, I knew I had to go kinda big. I had so much fun writing Makoto's fall with Sonya's subtle manipulation and then writing Makoto's betrayal of Haru, and having the two become Sonya's loving slaves. But after writing Haru's chapter and having her being betrayed be a big part of that chapter, I knew that I had to have something even bigger than that. While thinking about how I would have a scenario with all three characters and how I could write that, umm...well let's just say I got inspiration from a certain...film I was watching. With this film, I got the fun inspiration to make the main scenario of the fic where Ann gets tied up and played with by Makoto and Haru.

With a scenario this naughty, I knew I had to make a good intro for it that was a little different from the last chapter. I didn't just want Makoto and Haru to lead Ann into a Palace, so I thought that it would make a lot of sense that they would lull Ann in with a promise of a fun day out.

Writing the dialogue in that scene was a lot of fun, as it was the first opportunity I had to write the characters just having fun and talking like friends (unbeknownst to Ann Makoto and Haru's true motives). Little things like Makoto trying not to comment too much on Ann's many purchases and Ann offering her more shy friends help in picking out some cute outfits in the future was something I really liked nailing down. Especially in non-smut situations, I always try to get the characters' voices down as best I can. One of the biggest pet peeves that I and I'm sure many of you have is when the characters do not sound like themselves, so I always do my best to get that stuff down right. One detail I also enjoyed including was, knowing that Haru and Makoto would wear their new sexy Phantom Thief outfits in this chapter (and especially Makoto), having Makoto say that she couldn't pull off outfits like Ann and then to eventually have her erotic outfit be revealed later with Makoto FULLY reveling in it.

Having Ann wake up naked seemed like a strong visual choice and just a shocking image to start the scene off to really set the tone. I absolutely LOVED the beginning confrontation between Sonya and Ann. As anyone who has played P5, Ann is a very strong-willed and independent individual, much like Sailor Mars from Sailor Moon, and Sonya is portrayed as a someone who is very in control of the room at all times, and who 100% believes that she is doing the right thing. As she says, even tying up Ann in this way is to make it easier to help her. Thus, seeing the contrast between these two was something that I knew I wanted to write. Once again, the little part I always love reading during this scene is the quick swipe up Ann's spine that Sonya does, which sends a shiver up Ann's spine. That part always gets me lol

Something I also wanted to do was have Ann point out some of Sonya's contradictions and how she just wants to fulfill her own needs and is just justifying her own actions through that cause, which is 100% what we've seen from other Palace rulers. I felt like if anyone were to throw that accusation at Sonya, it would be Ann. Also, that was something I wanted to put a bit more focus on on the re-edit.

Next, the introduction of Makoto and Haru and their new outfits was definitely something I was looking forward to a lot. The focus of their footsteps, Ann having bated breath as they enter, and then having the description of their outfits, I REALLY wanted to have that be a big moment, and I hope I succeeded in that.

I had looked up several photos of sexy versions of their outfits for inspiration to help out with exactly I wanted, and I remember finding some good pics to reference. With Makoto's leather biker outfit, my immediate thought went to a type of leather BDSM-type looking outfit. A lot of focus on the leather, just a lot more revealing and changing from the biker motif to a BDSM motif. That seemed like a natural transition, at least in my head. With this idea in mind, I thought the riding crop was a nice touch ;)

Haru's outfit was probably the toughest of the three, as hers is easily the least sexy of the three haha, so it was kind of tough thinking of a way to make it sexy. That was when I had run into a piece of artwork that had essentially just changed her pants/stocking into small shorts and had the open shirt to show more of her cleavage. That was when I thought about having Haru's vest/bustier be tighter and enhance the cleavage any more. I didn't want to radically change Haru's outfit so I thought this was a decent way to make Haru's outfit sexier while keeping the base design.

With Ann's, I knew that I wanted to do something similar to Makoto's but not completely the same. I remember someone made a comment that after seeing Makoto and Haru's new outfits that they were wondering how Ann's would be since it is already pretty sexy, and after looking for some ideas, it was pretty simple that not much actually needed to be done for Ann's haha. Essentially, I kept the higher jacket area, got rid of the entire midriff area, gave her some sexy underwear with the zippers to keep that aspect of the design as well, kept the sexy boots (which I love) but just kind of shortened them a bit to include the red latex tights that were similar to Makoto as well as making them tighter in appearance.

While I had done it a bit in Haru's chapter with Makoto, I wanted to point out how much Makoto and Haru have changed under Sonya's influence with them throwing insults at Ann. For example, with Haru calling Ann a dumb blonde, that's not true as Ann is actually very smart and not something either of them would ever think or say, but due to Sonya hypnotizing them, they themselves have changed and distorted. This is def something I will be portraying in future chapters the more we see of them, but I def wanted to get that across here.

The little thing I liked the most during this part was Sonya talking about how after her run-in with both of them, that they have become such wonderful slaves, while Sonya slips her hand inside Makoto's thong and rubs her pussy, which causes Ann to yell out and tell her to get her hands off of her friend. I just think it's super hot whenever I read it.

And then we get to the "meat" of the chapter, where Makoto and Haru have their fun with Ann, and man, this was such a blast to write. From the ball gag to Makoto using the riding crop to Makoto and Haru pleasuring Ann's pussy together, I had so much fun writing this. Though, it was also a bit tough, as I had to find different ways to keep it interesting and fresh throughout. It def flexed my smut-writing muscles a bit haha.

A fun aspect other than having Makoto and Haru play with Ann was writing just how much fun Haru and Makoto are having, with the two throwing out comments to Ann throughout this. Their attitude towards their uncorrupted and sexy friend who is foolishly fighting against their Mistress, knowing that they are leading her towards accepting their Mistress as well, but deciding to fully revel and have fun in that process. Their friend is resistant to their Mistress, and Makoto and Haru know full well that that is a silly thing to do, causing them to have a sense of superiority to Ann was some of the most fun I've had writing smut.

Tied to this was the fact that Ann feels more pleasure, which leads to her mind breaking and allowing Sonya to break through Ann's strong will. I knew Ann's strong will was something that would probably be tougher than Makoto and Haru, at least considering how stubborn Ann can be, again similar to Sailor Mars. Therefore, I didn't think that the usual would be enough, on top of the fact that I wanted to go a bit bigger. I had emphasized before that Sonya's pheromones brought about pleasure from its victims, but again I wanted things to be a bit bigger.

While thinking of what to do, this ummm "particular" comic came to mind that I had read years ago where a similar thing had happened and their body had been stimulated in some way for a long time while they were unconscious, and that had caused them to be a lot more sensitive, and I thought I could do the same thing but with the pheromones. Thus, came the idea of having Ann be unconscious in a room filled with the pheromones for a prolonged period, which would in turn make her body a lot more sensitive to Makoto and Haru's "attack".

I did my absolutely best in having this all build and build in a hot and satisfying way, eventually leading to Ann's break, which would leave her mind open and willing to Sonya's influence. Something I do want to mention here that I forgot earlier is I thought having Sonya try to use her power on her in the beginning only to have Ann resist and try to attack her was a really good indicator of Ann's strong will, which only emphasizes the contrast even more when Sonya does the same thing here at the end, and Ann is unable to resist. The image here of Ann hanging limply, her mind and body exhausted, her dull eyes peering into Sonya's with Sonya lightly lifting up her chin and easily instilling Ann's new commands onto her mind is one of, if not my favorite part of the chapter, tho it is so hard to choose. A final note is I thought the final, soft kiss that Sonya gives to Ann once she finally gives in was a nice touch that I liked.

After this, is the final scene where Makoto, Haru, and Ann (in her new outfit), are now all pleasuring Sonya together. The most fun part was writing the now corrupted Ann in her new outfit and describing how Ann is now under Sonya's influence, which I'm sure Sonya LOVES. Again, Ann is a character with such a spark and a fire in her, so for Sonya to break through that will and that fire and to corrupt that essentially, I thought that of course this has to reflect in a very prominent and clear change, and so getting to write that was great. And a little thing I'm glad I included was having the part where post-Sonya's orgasm, she looks and sees that Haru, Makoto, and Ann are having fun with each other, just as another emphasis that Sonya's influence has not just made it that the girls enjoy pleasuring her, but they now seek pleasure with all of Sonya's slaves, including each other. Plus, it shows that while they are now Sonya's slaves, they still have this deep bond/relationship with each other, even though it is a more corrupt version of it.

Looking back at this, I really did have so much fun writing this, and it is still one of my favorite things I've ever written. And again, in terms of pure smut, I think it is still the hottest thing I've written. If you agree or disagree, I would appreciate to know what you think haha. Also, the thing I appreciate the most about writing this fic is that I hadn't liked Ann that much before writing this, but somehow, through the writing process, I learned to appreciate Ann a lot more as a character on top of realizing that she is super hot haha. As I got more of an appreciation for Ann, I got to in turn reflect that more and more in the fic while I was writing it.

Lmk what you think of this fic, or if there is anything regarding this fic and my writing process on it that you have any questions on!