Second Comic! Queens' Corruption Chapter 1 (Patreon)

This is the parody of an anime Highschool DXD. I'm quite satisfied with the two main heroines, Akeno and Grayfia (Black Hair and Silver Hair) But I'm a bit iffy about Rias. (Red Hair) What do you think? And for other text colours, I apologise for those who don't know the series. But they are the other characters in the series that could be recognised if you know, my computer crashes too much that I didn't bother putting them in.