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Floofy Blues

Eyo hell yeah! There might be a spelling mistake in the second panel. It says sahhire and not saphire

Maxx Suchowicki

In addition to the spelling error, I think the first speech bubble in the third panel could use different punctuation. Like = "Woah. Good, I could use the backup." instead of what it is currently. I think it flows better

AHislop

A glorious view of Bree

Maxx Suchowicki

also it should be "Gachan's powers", not "Gatchans powers."

GrimFellow

But it does say Gachan’s powers

Toni-Technaclaw

it would be funny and sexy of she keeps the bigger tits and ass after she turns back to normal. it'll remind her to not act so rash again.

GrimFellow

Then again, Bree was already pretty stacked before the conversion

Atzaru

First panel: There is an E missing in "feels". Last panel: It's You're instead of Your. :)

Alexis Ortiz

Low HP or not, if Ruby sees herself in a mirror, she's going hard with da WWE metal chair over Rifts perfect bone structure TEHEE 😋

GrimFellow

Imagine if Rift falls over from such a hit and then makes that New Super Mario Bros Dry Bones falling apart sound effect

Alexis Ortiz

I was thinking about da Mario Kart sound when yu step on a banana peel but luv yur idea even moar 😁

GrimFellow

Well, not to dismiss your suggestion, but I thought that my idea worked here, considering that Rift is a skeleton