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Brightshore Ch4 Pg1 WIP (Patreon)

Published:
2023-05-25 17:55:26
Imported:
2026-06
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Starting up Chapter 4 with a trip to Mr. Byland office.  Hope you still enjoy seeing my work process as this is the rough draft for the page. ^^

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Stan Verox

She literally got caught in a barrier trap the other day, witnessed her friend go through bimbofication, and still says she would still like to work for Byland. Hmmmmm.

PolkaToonZ

Wow, 1 page in, and we're already set up for another change~! I like the establishing shot of panel 1 with Byland's name plate peeking out a bit, and the POV shot you did with him holding the book in panel 5. https://imgur.com/a/83VtzbS Intentional or not, I like the way you lead the eye from one panel to the other(the link shows what I mean), via the word bubbles and certain focal points. It really makes things easier to read.

Peelbird777

So did chapter 3 end on a cliffhanger then

Emmitt Cleveland

Oh crap! Candy is in trouble now. I think it’s finally time to see if she’s been a spy or sleeper agent like some people theorized.

Your Servant is Your Master

Wait a minute. A previously omnipresent fashion accessory seems to be missing. I wonder if that's significant in any way... Also, is it my imagination, or are there a couple of things that appear to be less endowed than they were the last time we saw them? Is that top doing a fantastic job of hiding magical mischief, or...... Nonono, that can't be it. After all, Byland mentioned the 'event from the other night', and no one has said anything to suggest that there are any other events that he could possibly be referring to other than our crew's attempted break-in from the end of chapter 2, right? *whew* What a relief. For a second there I thought I'd stumbled onto something important, but I guess I was just jumping at bimbos, er, shadows... yeah. That's what I meant.