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Brightshore Ch4 Pg10 WIP (Patreon)

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2023-07-27 20:11:19
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2026-06
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Today I have the draft work for page 10 of Chapter 4 I hope you like meeting back up with team Bernice.

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SlayerEndX13 | Suplexception

Bern’s got the right idea — she should hide the book in her cleavage for safekeeping. :3

Fluffy

I can’t wait for mor! All the girls are so cute!

SIM Roo

Hoping Chelsea’s temptation is too much and she is the one who ends up reading the book, inadvertently changing Bernice :P

PenHeart3

Great, now they need to find a way to reverse the effects. Doing a quick attuning to the book should help after an examination. D&D logic.

Clownlover321

I definitely agree with Bernice, something doesn't sit right. :3 :P

Alexis Ortiz

Bernice expression totaly says it all "man, this case looked manageable 3 chapters ago" TEHEE XD

RedeemerofDark

I almost thought she actually fell for that. I'm very glad that the detective of all people wasn't so gullible xD I mean "under" and "a desk" isn't particularly subtle xD

Linewalkr

Would love to see Star reading the book and go "Hey Bernice, there's a chapter about you in here. It says..." And Bernice goes "NO WAIT!!" lolz

PolkaToonZ

Fantastic panelling as usual, Kobi! The flow of the panels still seem good so far, especially with how you did the last one. I like the choice of making Candy already leaving on the top left side in that way, not only because it shows time passing already in this panel, and that it being there then leads the eye towards Starr and what she says next, but it also gives you space in the first place to have Star and Chels posing with their cute "boobs-over-head bit" lol. You're getting better and better at this page flow stuff, bud! Keep it up!