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Prince Aziz Hunt

The way you implemented EVERY aspect of feedback and did such a good job incorporating the narration as insight *mwah*, incredible. I love every second. From how sexy their bodies were. To how how each stroke was a pulse hitting the spot. To the sound effects. To how the sexual attraction and tension was palpable. To getting to hear his thoughts and playing out a fantasy we all wish we could have. Keep it up man. This is my favorite of your work so far. I can't wait to see Andre take some dick. Your art style is also really improving. The way you illustrated the light on their skin on some of the pages was impeccable.

owza

I was nervous about the narration, but I've since found that it is a great way to "add meat" onto the bones of a story. Hopefully, I don't overuse it. Then about the art style, I'd say compared to the previous comic, I fell off. I think the reason is that 12 pages are less intimidating and I can spend more drawing time without rushing(leading to better art). With this comic. I rushed some of the pages. I'll cement this with the next comic and you'll see. But compared to the my first comics, I definitely see improvements. Thank you so much for the feedback❤️‍🔥😁

Matthew Conley

Amazing, I love the storyline and details. You have amazing work and I cant wait to see what's next.

owza

Thank you❤️‍🔥😭 I'm also excited and nervous to show y'all what's next

Babarinde Odus

OK I'm only slightly late for this one lol. Great stuff as usual ❤️😘👍🏾 thought you said 42 pages, though not to worry this did not disappoint. I thought they would kiss at the end. Hot stuff!

owza

Thank you. And don't worry. The remainder is coming out soon❤️‍🔥😁

Deonte Dunston

My goodness! The stories keep getting better and better 🤤

owza

Bro, you were quiet for so long that I thought you didn't like this one😅I'm glad you liked it ❤️‍🔥