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Hi everyone,

This video is coming along nicely now and I think it is reasonable to assume that I'll be able to release it by the end of this month.

While you wait, here are 3 chapters I completed recently that occur early on in the video. I hope you enjoy them.

The first chapter (about the author David Tame) may seem a little random if you didn't watch the storyboard about Confucius and ancient China that I posted on Patreon recently. But even if you haven't seen that, I'm sure you'll be able to fill in the missing gaps yourself anyway.

Please let me know what you think!

Yours,

Martin

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Elitism Section 02

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Anonymous

I think the Pistols on Grundy's show might be one of my favourite things ever. The ridiculous fear of anything novel is always hilarious, whether that was pushback against Elvis, punk, hip-hop, dance music. "I think most of these groups would be improved by sudden death" - how can you not laugh at that? Also love that a guy who titled pieces things like "Leck mich im Arsch" is held as the highest of the canonical saints of western musical tradition. Old Mozo's got more in common with Steve Jones, really.

Anonymous

Critique: I think you can tighten up the edit at about 2:05-2:10ish (the timeline scrolling back to 1976). I'd show that animation while you're saying "oh no, the working class, [animation begins] woOoOoh~~", instead of after like it is in the above clip. I think it would make this transition flow a bit smoother without losing the pace. That being said, I haven't seen this in context, so maybe a small pause feels right there in the context of the whole video, if there's been no other breathing room until then. It just took me out of the narrative flow for a brief moment while watching. Looking forward to the rest of the video as always, though!