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Two wandering immortals, one in ragged white, the other in vivid blue, set out across the steppes, grumbling.

“I still think you could tow the folding boat behind the flying sword. Or maybe tie the swords to either side of the boat and carry it that way.” 

“Sure. You just tell me how to make the boat fly, or how to control two flying swords at the same time, and I’ll get right on that.” Liren couldn’t be bothered to even roll her eyes. “You didn’t mind it when we were on the same sword, but now that we have separate swords, flying swords are bad again.”

“They were always bad. There were just advantages to it.” Tian knew he wasn’t going to win this one, so he turned away with magisterial reserve and surveyed the grassland with his hands behind his back.

“Posing like that won’t convince anyone you won the argument.”

“It might!”

They sped over the swaying grass. The green rolled endlessly on. To the south was the Redstone Wastes, a hell of chaotic qi and poisonous dust, filled with gigantic, monstrous creatures. To the north was the Broadsky Kingdom, lush with rich land and boundless rivers. Between the extremes, was the steppes. A swath of grassland that spread out across the borders of the Kingdom and into the kingdoms beyond. Nobody, or at least nobody Tian spoke to, knew its boundaries. As far as the Kingdom was concerned, it was a place with a northern and southern border, but none to the east or west. The kingdom had borders. But the steppe had been here first, and everyone knew it would still be there when the kingdom fell. Human borders were simply irrelevant.

“I still can’t believe you terrified Han that way. It really wasn’t nice of you.” 

“Did I lie? Did I say anything that was even misleading?” Tian kept his hands behind his back, letting his white hair fly behind him. “I don’t know the mortal political situation, but the worse things get on the borders, the more rebellions there are, the more willing the emperor will be to compromise. What’s a few lives, so long as they aren’t his? Especially when those lives might be a danger to him. Hanshen could survive longer than I expect. Depending on how it happens, the Emperor might limit the damage to Hanshen’s family, friends and students. I wouldn’t bet on it. He’s not well known for his spine, and he will be looking to buy peace.”

Not mentioned was that the six foot tall, handsome, well read, swordsman irked Tian for reasons he was struggling to pin down. He knew his irritation was irrational, and that Han was actually a decent sort. It was what it was. He’d figure it out eventually. In the meantime, he would do his best as a teacher, and as the petty man he knew he could be.

“There had to be a better way to tell him all that.”

Tian’s irritation ticked up, but he kept it out of his voice. “Maybe”

His eyes were fixed on the horizon, so he didn’t see the speculative look Liren gave him, or her little smile.

They flew west for an hour, drinking in the immensity of the land. There was something hypnotic about it. The scope of the world you inhabited suddenly changed, from city streets and courtyards to an open vastness that stole your breath. As though the earth and the sky were two impossibly enormous hands, cradling you between them. The soft green grass below, and the aching blue sky above, with drifting strings of white clouds casting shadows on the earth. 

You could lose yourself in that sky. Tian smiled, then frowned and looked over at Liren. Her head was tilted downward, her hat blocking her view of the horizon. He sent his flying sword over next to her, and stretched out his hand. She took it. They didn’t say anything. There was nothing that needed saying. 

It wasn’t too long after that they found a fort. It was occupied by kingdom troops, but they couldn’t tell if it was Vermilion Bird Fortress or not. Tian immediately began scheming an infiltration, plotting the mortal’s zones of attention and how to slip through them. Liren gave him a moderately filthy look, and dove for the road. 

“You, Soldier. Is this Vermilion Bird Fort?”

“AAH! Immortal! Yes. Yes, Vermillion Bird Fort is two miles down the road from here.” The soldiers calmed their horses, who were not particularly happy about a flying flapping inexplicable thing coming at them from the sky. “Should we report to the commander that you are coming?”

“No need, we aren’t visiting. Where did you last see the Yuu?”

The soldiers exchanged looks. “Reporting to the Immortal, the Dutoa Tribe have pitched their Ger about fifteen miles west of the fort, and set out their herds.”

“You don’t sound very concerned about it.”

“We know the Dutoa, Immortal. That is a normal pasture ground for them, this time of year. They are… peaceful.” Liren snorted softly, but nodded. The red plumed soldier relaxed slightly. The horses didn’t. The wind was stirring Liren’s robes and fluttering her veil, things which did not inspire calm in horses. 

“Last question. Have you seen the reported Red Horse running around near the fort?”

The troopers exchanged a great deal of silent side-eye. The man Liren was interrogating looked awkward, but pointed south-west. “You don’t see it, exactly. It’s more like you catch something out of the corner of your eye, and some part of your brain says ‘Red horse.’ We are all troopers, Immortal. We know a horse when we see it, even if it’s only out of the corner of our eye and just for an instant.”

She nodded. The trooper looked relieved. The horses were relieved when Liren flew up, back into the endless blue. The soldiers exchanged looks, and carefully didn’t look up.

“Somehow, I can feel my brothers frowning. We are supposed to move unseen across the countryside. This lessens our domineering appearance.” Tian sniffed in disapproval. Liren just shook her head and ignored the commentary. 

“South-west. Past the ‘peaceful’ Dutoa tribe.”

“Yep. Let’s head over. Maybe we can get lucky, catch a stray shaman or something.”

“Sure. We can hover over them on our flying swords, robes flapping in the wind as our commanding words emerge from our veiled faces. Well. My veiled face. You are just going to have to be dainty at them. Maybe that intimidates shamans.”

“Dainty? Dainty?!” The two made their way slowly south west, bickering and raking the ground with their senses. 

“I’m seeing exactly zero ghosts or spirits. You?” Tian asked.

“If you can’t see ‘em, why would I be able to?”

“You always boast about how good your eyes are. Maybe they can see spirits.”

“It’s you! YOU always go on and on about how good my eyes are. And if I couldn’t see them in the Kingdom, why would I see them here? In fact, it sounded like most Yuu can’t see them either. Just the shamans. Which I would usually assume meant they were scammers but they obviously aren’t.”

Tian could vividly remember the Grand Shaman of the Giant Wolf Tribe, sighting down his arrows at him. Not sloppy, not arrogant, just the confidence born of long experience. Tian had assumed he was centuries old. Funny to think he was a mortal fast reaching the end of his life. 

“I remember feeling a thread of qi touching me while he was shooting arrows at me. I assumed it was part of his cultivation or some spell or something. What if it’s the spirits?”

“Those wolf things that sprung up from the teeth he scattered were physical enough to hurt, but ghostly enough to ignore any attacks that didn’t carry at least a little qi on them.” Liren rolled her shoulders. “We are probably overthinking this. Qi is the energy of the universe. Not strange that whatever “spirits” are, they are made of the same stuff.”

Tian grunted. “Makes sense.”

“Grandpa, any advice?”

You two are on the right track. Let’s see. First thing is that they are doing what the daoists are doing- trying to describe something so inhumanly vast, so utterly outside the mortal experience, that they have to rely on approximations and analogies to explain what they are seeing. So yes, the spirits are a real thing that really exist, but no, that doesn’t mean the Yuu cosmology is correct in all aspects.

“Well. That’s a relief, I guess. So the answer is to be using our senses to look for disturbances in the qi to try and find any hiding spirits or shamans?”

Forget finding the spirits, unless they are active, they are indistinguishable from the background qi. Even the shamans need to use special methods to wake them up. Invoke them, to use the technical language. The self activating ones are closer to ghosts. As for something like this red horse… I’d have to see it to give you more information. And it wouldn’t be cheap.

“I don’t suppose the perception spell could be upgraded to detect spirits?”

Not directly. Hmm.

Tian had the feeling Grandpa was stroking his beard. 

The ‘spirits’ are… and you don’t have good language for this, so just work with me here, please, are essentially merged into the world around you. Imagine… I don’t know, two thin pieces of rice paper with a black ink drawing on them. Say, a picture of a tree with a mountain in the background. Stack the two on top of each other and hold them up to the light- looks like one picture. Separate the papers, and it’s two pictures. That’s what the shaman are doing. The human spirits they are worried about is a little different, a green ink picture of someone glaring at you and reaching out from the paper to grab you. So, no, there isn’t a good way for you to detect them with your current spell. On the other hand, you are more sensitive than most to the flow of elements and qi, and we can lean into that. 

Tian felt the old ghost’s hand on his shoulder. This isn’t a new flow of energy to master, just a different way of looking at what you are seeing. Even with my improvements, this is a pretty trash spell, so we’ll just do our best with what we have.

Tian smiled. “Same as ever. Grandpa, can you see spirits? Are you on that same sheet of paper?”

Grandpa Jun laughed. It’s not worth the effort. I am currently seeing the world on a level those little spirits can’t even imagine. You need to not mystify these mystic spirits too much. The spirit of a rock is, generally, “a rock.” A patch of grass is grass, a bird is a bird, and not an interesting bird either. Just a bird, doing bird things. Might be useful, probably isn’t. You know what? You can see it for yourself.

Tian landed on the grassland. It was shorter than he had expected. Perhaps it had been grazed recently, or the grass just didn’t grow that high. It barely covered his ankles, the blades remarkably tough and dense. He ran his fingers through it, marveling at its resilience. It didn’t rain much on the steppes, but it was still lush and green. He sent his senses into the earth, and found the roots stretched deeper than he was tall.

Tiny shoots of grass, with deep roots in the land. Thriving, where others exhausted themselves and died. They might not look like much by themselves, but they weren’t by themselves. They were here in their millions. 

It was a bit inspiring. Tian always thought of the cosmos tree when cultivating his vital energy, but this was good too. It was another expression of wood rooted in the earth. Not growing tall, but spreading widely. Immense vitality, with no external expression. All the really interesting things were happening inside and below the surface.

How very daoist. 

He laughed, and cast his senses wide, opening himself to the steppes and all they had to teach him.

Comments

Donmalurkin

Thanks for the chapter. Bit short though lol. Or maybe I just read it too fast because I liked it.

Veridescent

Honestly Tian's issue with Han would make sense as a aspect of internalized ideations of body still being a bit misplaced from the role models of his brothers in the convent. Fundamentally he grew up different to his brothers and his body was different to theirs for a long long time. He got closer to a "normal" appearance but his life has been defined by his differences and relative self reliance. He had similar proccesses of ideating the difference of how he is and how he may be expected to be with a given label with the Yin Man dynamic before. The misalignment of self vs a socialized goalpost that gives a ideal image of a given concept, can be a rather continual issue in many ways. Dissonance over reality and the ideal, especially if the ideal was taught rather uncritically core part of plenty of dysfunction. A important bit of cultivation I suppose in the same vein as the elders being able to acknowledge harm from their own misalignments with reality vs their socialized ideals. I am rather curious how similar in framing a place like the sacred land, a place of a bunch of embodied permutations of specific facets of the Dao would compare to spirits in the Steppe. On some level one could note they are very similar, accumulated aggregates for concepts. On another you could note the difference may come from alignment. The sacred land was aligned to specific cultivators while the steppe spirits are far broader and more "mundane" even if they are all expressing dynamics of the Dao. The selective pressure for perception may differ, broad synergisms works well for the steppe and the Yuu allowing them to specialize into different niches on broader levels helping to mitigate some aspects of scarcity. The sacred land allows those who already have a niche to further refine it to possibly leave and migrate elsewhere facilitating the cycle of teacher and disciple on the mountain.

Mad Max

Looks like the tea is gonna get new flavours of qi.

Teach

Great vibes chapter, thanks for posting

Schuh

Let's not mystify the mystics

Gardor

Whats the opposite of virtuous? Vile? I wonder if this plan is gonna have any ramifications on their virtue-score. They "know" the tribes are moving cuz of heretics, and their plan is to kill shamans until the shamans decide to fight/complain to those heretics. Theyre trying to be the "anvil" to the heretic's "hammer". I was very surprised this is what they decided to do, actually, it seems amoral at best.

Ariel Grubbs

It sounds amoral to you for them to seek out and destroy people acting as a catspaw for heretics?

Vainirion

“He sent his senses into the earth, and found the roots stretched deeper than he was tall.” Not that deep, then :>

Warby Picus

Google Prarie Grass Roots and check a picture. It's wild.

ioajfidsnmfomds77

I think the virtue score is heavily weighted towards good with this action. Think of all the cities and villages full of people who won’t be murdered or sold into slavery by conquering hordes of Mongols

Gardor

...yes? Murdering random shamans to get access to the heretics forcing them seems amoral AT BEST. Remember, "catspaws" are definitionally unknowing or unwilling. They dont even really have nationalism to hide behind; they only loosely identify as members of the Broadsky Kingdom. The shaman arent the people they need to protect Han from. I just think killing people is bad. Sometimes necessary, but always bad. There are some people who deserve to be summarily executed, and slavers are high up on that list, but it gets murky (for me) when we're talking about random people who happen to live in a culture that practices slavery. And not to split hairs, but there ARE different types of slavery; a lot of my instinctive hatred for slavery comes from American chattle slavery. Thats a relatively new phenomenon, thats not what slavery was for the vast majority of human existence. And if im gonna start subdividing atrocities, somewhere on that same spectrum is a culture that makes 70 year olds work to get health care and then still go into crippling medical debt. Is it ok to murder people who practice indentured servitude? What if its society as a whole that makes you work, is it ok to wipe it from the map? I have rambled on for some time, most of this isnt useful. Do you...disagree? Somehow i doubt you think its straight up immoral...

Vainirion

I did, actually, and I agree ^^ Loved our medium-sized king comparing the roots’ length to himself, tho

Jevil

they're punishing slavers, attacking only the attack force and not the civillians, and combatting the heretics hold on the kingdom, i don't think it'll be that bad for their virtue score. and the opposite of virtuous is sinful.

Gardor

They're not killing them BECAUSE they're slavers, thats just a lucky coincidence. And Tian had a speech recently about how Broadsky Kingdom practices slavery in everything but name, so thats clearly not their motivation behind it. They're also gonna kill the equivalent of earthly realm shamans, which isnt great either. And the plan is to do it for generations. Who knows the knock on effect thats gonna have for the tribes, they're suddenly gonna be without protectors. If there really are angry spirits wandering the steppes, a lot of "civilians" are gonna die. And i dont know what you mean by combatting the heretics hold on the kingdom. The shamans arent really part of the broadsky kingdom i dont think, and its pretty twisted logic to say "killing these people was a good thing cuz now the heretics can't control them". I dont think i went far enough in my original post, calling it amoral isnt enough, this is a straight up villainous plan. People defending it, ask yourselves: why are the shaman Tian and Liren's enemies? Lets talk batman. Im not some moral absolutist, i think batman should have killed the Joker a long time ago, it would have spared the world a lot of suffering. What I DONT think is that batman should kill every henchman between him and the joker.

Forrest Venable

The opposite of "virtue" is "vice", ergo the opposite of "virtuous" is "vicious"

Tsukune08

Interesting thought process but perhaps a bit overly simplified? I don't think a single instance will correct the underlying feeling. Certainly such an expression would help in solidifying his own insecurities. However, it is likely this remains a theme perhaps through the human realm as it is directly correlated with the Dao as mentioned earlier how can any person give up everything and still remain virtuous or without a heart demon without accepting everything of themselves? It's possible that such an issue will not creep up in the sense that Liren does not seem likely to make him jealous intentionally so it will take some time for him to accept and process such emotions on the correct level.

Ariel Grubbs

If someone is actively engaged in looting, plundering and enslaving innocent civilians then it isn't immoral to kill them. Even if the shamans are just protecting the Yuu mortals who are doing those things then it isn't immoral to kill them. If you do those things or enable other people to do those things then you open yourself up to lethal reprisals. As for your argument that the horrible things the shamans are doing isn't really the motivation for Tian and Liren to kill them, I think you're underselling the effect that their reprehensible actions are having on our MC's mental calculus. As for the shamans not being responsible for their actions because they're being used by the heretics, that's a dehumanizing argument. They have agency, they aren't stupid, they aren't helpless dupes being manipulated unknowingly, they are choosing to align themselves with objectively evil people.

Steve Armstrong

Real prairie grasses do have roots that go 8 to 10 feet deep, but they primarily use the top 10 inches for drawing water, and even during severe drought don't pull from further down than 30 or so inches. Their big advantage in a grassland is actually that they can grow back much easier after a fire. Shrubs and small trees lose a lot more of their growth when they burn.

Golden monkey

Its a war, they made a less bad choice out of all the terrible options. They aren't experienced or knowledgeable so they don't know what to do. They aren't superheros who think murder is wrong they've killed a crap ton. They aren't justifying what they're doing every option they thought they had was bad but they still had to make a choice. Ig you can get mad at the author but i don't know how realistically he can drive the plot in a way that satisfies you specifically. They don't really have anyone to rely on and there is a deadline so they don't have all the time in the world to come up with a perfect plan.

Asheric

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