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Early Bird: Minding Her Manor, Ch. 01 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-11-26 20:29:41
Edited:
2023-05-13 17:11:57
Imported:
2026-06
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In which five best friends meet up at a supposedly haunted manor and get caught up flirting and playing with each other a little. After all, they're all alone here, right? Right?

Hello, my lovelies! So, um, that one Bonus Pairing, so long overdue? Here's why. It's another series, and the first chapter is actually a little light on the action. Oops. I'm really excited for this, though. It's got some characters I really enjoy writing, and there's so many options for the series. Hopefully it won't go too long!

What's more, this story marks a return to form in the sense that it's an open-ended "from a hat" series--these five girls could run into anything, really. It's a haunted house! Major "areas" I have in mind for the manor are the greenhouse, the kitchens, the wine cellar, the nursery, the doll room, the dressing room, the bathchamber, the cramped attic, the library, and, of course, the cozy sitting room. Suggestions are welcome!

As a warning, this series may get a little dark, but I promise the potential Bad Ends don't mean these girls are assured a bad ending!

A big regret I have is not using this chapter more to foreshadow those areas I just mentioned. That's a staple of the haunted house genre, and I totally goofed it. There's even multiple scenes where characters explore the place, and I only foreshadowed one room! If I ever rewrite this series, you better believe I'll fix that.

NaNoWriMo has kept me impossibly busy this month--busy enough that the November BP Poll may not make it out until the very last minute. That being said, I'm doing really well with work in general!

Next Time: The girls play a fun little game of talking to ghosts, but what happens when the ghosts start talking back? Is Lapis safe wearing that visor?

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Sothe Dain

Oh I'm so happy to see my little idea bear such fruit! I can't wait to dig into this further! Absolutely worth the wait. If you're looking for ideas you can't go wrong with spooky dolls, maybe a voodoo doll house? Evil puppets? Lonely mannequins that want to play dress up? There's plenty of possibilities.

hellenberg

Wow. Now this! This is incredibly hot. Love Olivine's private encounter with Laleli. Love the cute interactions. Absolutely love where this thing is going. If I could add multiple likes, I would.

gigglinggoblin

Aww, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was so much fun to write.

Chris

When you say that suggestions are open, do you mean, in general or for this specific setting? Things a haunted manor might have…

Titan7

Oh, this is a very hot and sexy start to a series. Love haunted Sexy Filled Mansions. I am looking forward to reading what happens next. As for suggestions for the girls to encounters 1) Lamia or Coil Fiends 2) Sexy Big Butt Succubus Maids - using their Butts and various tools 3) Sexy Mimics that drag the girls into their lair to be F**** 4) Haunted Furniture that bounds the girls face down and they F*** 5) Sexy Lady Ghosts I could go on and on but I stop here. Looking forward to reading your future content.

Chris

Hmmm, ok I’m just gonna throw some stuff out there, I hope you find something useful. My first thought, when they were discussing the design of the ‘veil’ was that it was ancient Sci-Fi or even near modern (to us) technology. For the haunted mansion theme theirs always the ole ‘possessed by the dolls’ trope, or perhaps something with a carousel. When (in this chapter) you had one of the characters staring off into the setting sun and talking about its beauty, I was picturing something with stained glass art. Perhaps if used as a domed room in a room of mirror and a spinning dome or floor to create a natural kaleidoscope (note to self use this in future D&D game). I personally enjoy the concepts of a sentient book or painting where some gets brainwashed by the book (reading or it talking to them) and lured and then trapped inside of the painting, maybe something with mischievous pixies or satyrs, but this suggestion might be to classic fantasy for what you’re going for here (sorry I know I ramble).

Chris

Oh one more, I’ve always thought to write a story about women finding a bunch of costumes in various rooms, like one finds a maid uniform and another find “the mistresses gown” and when they put the outfits on they slowly start to become possessed by the roles of the costumes. I’ve seen this trope used a few times in media but it might be a nice fit here.

Zanni

Hmm if you’re still looking for suggestions I cannot help shaking the idea of a firefly/lightning bug sort of lure. Like a creature, insectoid or not, that lures in travelers with an attractive flashing rump for a little fun.