The Iron Reef- Pages 31 and 32 (ink'd) (Patreon)

And also a little tweaked, as well: I ended up adding another panel to page 32 because I felt like the flow wasn't quite as smooth as I would have liked, and added some onomatopoeia here and there, because I like spelling the word, and I try to use it as often as possible.

I think the final result has a bit better readability at this point, but uh, if anyone disagrees, it's probably too late.

I'm again still looking for feedback for next month's IR content: I've only got one page to go, and I don't see a future where I stretch out the last 2 panels to two entire pages; so in light of that, should I leap right into the cover for Issue 2, or do a back page flavour pic/pinup for some random Iron Reef Main Character(s)?

Lemme know in the comments below, or I will continue to ask.