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Things are pretty normal for our protagnist Ethan. He's a second year university student living in a crappy studio apartment. He thinks that when he wakes up, his day will be like any other. That is, until someone very special walks into his life.


I would love feedback in the comments (that are clean) and if there are ways I could have improved or should improve for next time!

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Osaro

You have a very pleasant voice for narration it is very soothing. I would need to hear more of the story to know if it would be captivating.

Frostylurv

Idk if you've done more of these since but i hope this helps if you haven't. Leave a few seconds space between the title and the start of the story so that people can "settle in a bit" as it were. I think your cadence was a little fast in some parts compared to others but a pleasant experience overall none the less.