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And now Mondo Mongol strikes! Having used his strategic wiles to lure our heroine into position, he activates the blast door, which comes down with incredible force!

Ho Jiminy! now Laser Lass is facing some real peril here. Not just naked, not simply unable to use her full power due to her surroundings, not merely unable to even fight properly due to the aforementioned nakedness, now she's about to be pulverized by a 30 ton steel door! They don't tell you about these days in superhero training.

By the way, I put way more work into the SHU KUNK in panel 2 than I probably should have, and I have no idea why. I mean, I'm happy with it, and I think it looks pretty good and all, but realistically I don't think anyone's here for the sound effects. 😊 

The other thing I may have lavished a little too much time on was the alliteration in the narrative boxes. I actually had to look up some words in a thesaurus and even then I couldn't come up with an "M" word for "down". I guess I could have cut my losses and started over with another letter, but even my frivolity has limits. 

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TouchtheSky

The sound effects are an extremely important part of the comic. Heavens to Betsy! Where would we be without such riveting sounds effects like this? I for one think we need an entire page of just sound effects.

legmuscle

You're right, thank you for setting me straight on the vital importance of sound effects 😄

Mattwiseuk

I, for one, welcome a dynamic "Shu-Kunk!"

Mattwiseuk

I even like the unprepossessing "doot". Less flashy, but just as effective.

MsKittyVicki

How dare he try to crush that Laser Lass Caboose!

legmuscle

The sound effects are actually a pretty fun, chill part of the process. By the time I get to them, I know the main work is done, so the pressure is off and I can just make some fun shapes and colour them in with bright colours. It's a good time 😃

legmuscle

Yes! What is this guy THINKING?

MsKittyVicki

Because he's secretly jealous of it and wants it to be flat like his!

Jürgen Bauermann

To be honest, the sound effects are more important than the superheroine costumes. 😊

memfic

the sound effects help to understand the action that is occurring. otherwise Laser Lass is staring upward for some unknown reason. and she'll be caught outside of the facility whilst naked

bio

Oh no, don't crush the lovely lady 😱 And I just wanted to mention that Laser Lass have been naked for as long as she has been clothed (she loses her last little bit of clothing on page 16) Of course I don't count the security jacket and the fact she was mostly naked since page 6 😝

legmuscle

Yes! It would be terrible if that were to happen. Caught outside naked, can you imagine?

legmuscle

Don't worry, she's got everything under control 😉 I think it's a personal record for earliest nudity in a story. Laser Lady stayed dressed for about 15 pages! 😆

legmuscle

Agreed! We have to have priorities, here 😄

memfic

well there is some full unaware nudity on page 1 of the Interview, but that's not a main character so.........