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5thRing

I greatly dislike facial piercing (and jewelry of any kind, really), but apart from that she looks pretty good. I dig punk/goth adjacent chicks.

Merlin

From what I have seen, nearly everyone likes goth girls in games and that includes me. I have no problem with the piercings either. I do have a problem with the word "chicks" 🐤 however as it refers a young version of a medium size bird that are primarily known for their eggs 😄.

Vajraastra

I like it. the piercings are not exaggerated although i would give her a little more goth look to contrast the brighter look of all the other girls and give her a little more curves for the same reason. to give her this touch that distinguishes her from the others.

Martz

She looks like trouble. I like trouble

Cyber

Body and style is fine. I'd go with LESS of the MOUTH piercings, maybe switch it to a tongue one (or 1 tongue + 1 on her upper right lip) insead of 3 mouth ones? to contrast the fact that she has eyebrow piercings in her top left side?) that you can work with for animations/story later? Also a little more dark eye liner under the eyes could be a good introduction to the character, and then depending on whether you use Serene or Hecate powers, you can make the eyes brighter or darker from there. I think a little lore building tidbit you can also do is add a tattoo on the right side of her neck (the side where her shirt is more open/wide) that's covered like maybe 80% by her neck collar. That might add a bit of mystery or trivia about her backstory, why she had some sort of a tattoo (whether just lore or plot related to the "goddesses") but covers up that art instead of showcasing it... it depends on her role in the story, if she's a mystery to watch out for, or if she's more like Annie with a dark past.

Cyber

yeah i was suggesting less piercings (mouth ones are a bit much, i'd never date someone irl with that many mouth piercings but i'd be tolerable of the eyebrow ones). Maybe some dark eye liner bottom of eyes, I was suggesting a tattoo on the right side of her neck (near her open shirt area) that she covers like 80% of it (or tries to) and that adds layers (literally) to her design but also metaphorically to "what is that tattoo, why have it only to go out of your way to hide it with a collar? Is it shame? is it regret? is it a mysterious giveaway easter egg related to the goddesses? Did she try to tattoo over an injury to hide it and failed, and now just uses the collar instead? So many different possibilities and she's yet to have uttered a word.