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Tala felt her mind straining as the battle continued. Her focus was split across the spheres, rod, shields, Flow, Terry, and a roving perspective attempting to keep a lookout for other copies of the prisoner.

It was excellent practice, and she was enjoying herself overall.

Even so, not everything was going as she’d have preferred. At least one copy of the prisoner had escaped Terry and Tala’s attempts to keep them all contained—partially because they had the higher priority of keeping them away from the breach in the cell—and so the two were expecting more copies to come rushing in from all directions at any time.

They were already dealing with an ever increasing number of copies just from those they couldn’t obliterate near at hand.

My unit would be very useful here… if not for the effect copying.

-Or, you know, the other unit that’s just outside?-

…I’ve got this.

-You can’t avoid new connections, new relationships Tala. It isn’t good. To be fair, now is hardly a good time to draw them in, but it is worth considering if needed.-

…I know, but I can keep any of them from getting hurt, at least this time. Without an ability to prevent the other unit from creating reality threads with the prisoner, they would be obliterated by her and Terry’s efforts against the woman. So, the best way to keep them from getting hurt, was to keep them away entirely.

They might have been able to work something out if they only had their own magics to deal with, but she wasn’t willing to withdraw either herself or have Terry allow such.

Honestly, Tala considered just letting them, as she could then send pulses of dissolution down that tunnel to obliterate them, making any escape attempt useless, especially now that she was maintaining the screen against the prisoner’s retaliation.

Still, she felt that it would be unwise to allow that ‘last line of defense’ to become their only line of defense.

That’s how prisoners escaped.

Unfortunately, it seemed that the cadence of the combat had changed, and there were now dozens of the woman all working to either distract the two invaders or get to the tunnel out of the cell.

Their physicality—while fragile—wasn’t weak;  they seemed capable of smashing through any barrier that Tala brought before them.

The Leshkin tower shields would have been obliterated ages ago except that Tala only used them to hamper, rather than truly block.

Even one of her tungsten spheres was somehow dented from where one of the copies had punched it.

It didn’t make sense to Tala, but for whatever reason, it didn’t seem that material could resist them.

Oh… that’s dumb. Tala had been watching closely as one punched a tree instead of Terry—the bird having flickered away—and she’d recognized the effect. She should, after all, it was one her husband used all the time.

The copies were taking the ‘equal and opposite’ force that was acting on their attack, and copying that back into their target, somehow able to target it more precisely.

No wonder this woman was feared. She could essentially take lethal damage and throw it back in your face before walking away unharmed, regardless of the form of the attack.

There had to be more as to why she was imprisoned, but Tala wasn’t in a place to figure out what might be ‘imprisoning’ worthy about the woman.

Besides, Terry was having fun… mostly.

The existence shield was hitting him oddly, and his movements were a bit more erratic, his attacks a bit less precise.

As soon as she noticed that and truly considered it, she understood. I’m somehow cutting off what his concept needs in order to function.

That was… really not good.

She immediately devoted a larger portion of her mind to Terry, her other points of view and defense being slowly forced back lest they be overrun.

She examined him very closely, watching for anything that any of her perceptions might—There!

A little lash of a reality thread tried to strike outward from him. Tala flexed her will, opening the way for it to pass.

A moment later, Terry’s movements smoothed out, and he trilled in triumph.

Of course! That’s how Terry’s concept works. Now I can perfectly replicate it.

-...If you wanted my attention, you could have just asked. Spouting utter nonsense isn’t required.-

Fine. How much longer?

-Twenty minutes at least. Things look to be getting hairy out there. Want to bring in the Defenders?-

No. They’d be overwhelmed unless Terry and I pulled back, and even then, they might be overrun. I can’t just block off the entrance either, because with the workers they have on hand and the ridiculousness of their power, they’d clear essentially anything I could put in their way with time to spare. Inform Master Grediv of the state of things and get back to it. Let me know if you need anything that I can give, or if anything would speed your progress.

-Done, and will do.- Alat fell back into silence, and Tala grit her teeth, diving back into the fray.

She’d already emptied close to half of her siege orbs, which was… a bit rusting insane if she were being honest.

Well, this should be a good time to update them, then… and to create my gravity gun? She frowned. Was it really the time to experiment?

…Yes.

-Oh, Tala…- Alat didn’t spare any more than that.

Tala huffed a laugh, immediately forming a hollow, dangling beneath the sanctum relatively near her artificial lung.

She made it donut shaped and kept any air or other particulates out.

Then, she grabbed four of her backup tungsten spheres and willed them into the donut, immediately amplifying their gravity toward the center, even as she began moving them around in a circle.

She soon hit the limit of how fast she could physically force them to move within Kit.

It wasn’t very fast.

She could move them instantly to anywhere within Kit, but forcing physical speed onto them was something else entirely.

Thankfully, her gravity manipulation was amplifying much faster as a Paragon than it had even as a Refined.

The orbs quickly outpaced the speed that she could make them move ‘manually,’ and soon enough they were positively whipping around the donut.

She had to nudge them every so often when her ramp up of gravity was too fast or too slow for a smooth increase to the sphere’s speed. She also had to keep them from knocking into each other every so often.

This is… actually rather difficult.

She was technically splitting her mind at least twelve ways at the moment—that wasn’t counting Alat or any of the myriad things she was doing—and it was giving Tala a pounding headache.

She was a bit irritated with herself. She’d had the idea for this gravity cannon for more than a month now, but she’d never prioritized it, always assuming that she’d get to it ‘tomorrow.’

Isn’t that just the way of things.

Still, with her increased ramping up…

Then, as she realized something, she couldn’t help it; she started to laugh.

The prisoner was in the Refined power range. Tala had spent so much time fighting beings and creatures equal or higher than her on the power and magical weight scale, but this prisoner was the opposite.

The prisoner was a cloud of mosquitoes trying to drain a cow dry.

Alat burst out laughing, her work slowing momentarily. -I’m sorry. I’m sorry, but what? Did you just call yourself a cow?-

Tala glared, her own laughter cutting off. You’re kind of a jerk.

-And apparently, you’re kind of a cow.-

Get back to work.

-Yes, me. I always do as I wish.-

Jerk.

Alat refocused, but her chuckles still resonated within Tala’s head.

Tala, for her part, immediately added another split to her mind—despite the added pain—targeting one of the more problematic copies of the prisoner. That one seemed able to even occasionally dodge Terry—not that Terry had focused on her. She’d simply been able to shift away the two times he made slashing passes.

Tala glanced at her hand, seeing where the ‘crush’ rings had once resided. For the first time in years, she missed them.

Still, she had a perfect memory and knew the spellform intimately.

With a grin, she pulled on Mistress Cerna’s training and created a bit of freeform magic, adding in a crush ring to her natural magics. It was not a rapid process, and she’d driven the one copy to the ground through gravity amplification by the time it was complete—the prisoner unable to move—but Tala had done it.

It was like when she’d seen Rane draw a chalk line on a stone before cutting a new groove. It was in no way permanent, but it was there.

Power blazed through it, burning it away in an instant. She didn’t target the already immobilized copy, instead choosing one who was just jumping over one of her other copies, both trying to avoid the tungsten rod to get to the breach in the cell.

The upper copy blazed with Tala’s power before slamming downward, turning herself and the lower copy into paste in an instant.

Something about the twin deaths was different enough that the other copies froze for an instant, all looking around, trying to find what new opponent had done the killing.

They could seemingly feel that they had nowhere to return the effect to, no one to copy the destruction onto, and it ticked them off.

Terry let out a rolling, squawking trill that was much, much deeper than usual—he clearly utilized much of his hidden mass to get the desired effect—making it closer to an unholy roar than anything more traditionally birdlike.

The four tungsten balls were still speeding up, and she figured she’d be ready to use them before Alat was done with the cell, but until then, it was going to be an absolute slog.

Great for training though.

Alright. Let’s do this.

And so they did.

She was constantly spinning new crush spellforms while amplifying gravity on various copies. At the same time, Flow and her other tools were hampering and killing the clones all across the near part of the forest.

Whenever a few clones were close together—and she’d managed to recharge her breath weapon, and she could get a line of attack on them—she sent a carefully calibrated pulse of dissolution breath to wipe them out.

Terry was a dervish of taloned destruction.

There was genuine concern within Tala as she engaged the prisoners, not because she felt like she was going to be overwhelmed—to the contrary, she and Terry were steadily pushing their perimeter further and further back—but because she couldn’t imagine any Defender unit being able to do this.

Even her old unit would have been utterly reliant on her, and as a Refined? Yeah, that would not have been workable.

We will need to give a full accounting of this, even more than the report Alat already sent. Whoever services this next time… Well, how about I just survive and do it myself?

That was, of course, the most reasonable course of action. She’d still make a full report, but she was rather nicely positioned to counter this particular prisoner. So, she’d just do it again herself in a couple of millenia.

I can’t imagine how many died to get this one contained…

It was a sobering thought.

Unfortunately, she didn’t have too much time to simply think, as more and more copies were streaming in from elsewhere in the cell, slowing their outward push.

There was an army’s worth of them, it seemed. Well, no, it just seems that way because of how many I’m killing. They probably had kept their numbers down until the breach was discovered. They’re copying themselves into an army, sending them in a steady stream from all directions.

At this pace—as the number of incoming copies continued to swell—even with all her tools, Tala was going to be overwhelmed in the next few minutes, ten if she was lucky.

How’s it going?

-I’m getting better, and so is Kit, but we still need at least twenty minutes.-

That’s what you said last time I asked.

-Well, I was wrong then. I know better now.-

Tala growled, then frowned before a thoughtful look stole across her features. I have an idea.

-Oh! That could work. Yeah. It’ll add a bit of time, but that shouldn’t be an issue.-

Alat communicated with Terry, even as she closed the cell once more, locking some flaws into the seal for the moment. That would make them harder to fix, but Tala, Terry, and Alat would have a bit of time now.

With the cell closed, Tala felt a strain on her connection with her iron, only Terry’s presence within allowed her to keep her connection with everything that she was still using to keep the copies back.

A moment later, Alat opened the cell again, connecting the breach to a different location.

The hallway was slanted downward this time, the top of the exit a bit below the bottom of Tala’s side, and it was a good thing too as water flooded through the opening, filling up the space to that level.

Tala thought that she could have held the water back with pure authority, but it would have exhausted her in barely more than a minute—if her guess was right—and there was really no need.

In a distant, formerly forested part of the cell, Terry and Tala’s equipment kept defending the ‘breach,’ with Tala continuing her magical support as well.

Alat and Kit worked to execute the repair that they’d just made a bit more difficult than necessary.

Still, Tala was quite proud of the deception.

Nearly exactly ten minutes after they’d moved the breach, Tala had to pull Terry out, simply withdrawing him to Kit—which was only possible because of how closely the soul-merged voidling had drawn alongside the cell—and pulling out her iron spikes and equipment as well. Though, the equipment had to leave through small portals, necessitating their withdrawal a bit earlier than Terry’s, just to be safe.

The last thing she wanted was to somehow allow one of the copies into her sanctum.

An instant later, the copies overran the whole area in which the breach had been, their numbers truly staggering in those last moments.

Each of Tala’s dissolution breaths had obliterated hundreds, but it hadn’t been enough.

Her gravity accelerated tungsten had finally gotten to what she thought was sufficient speed, and she’d broken the gravity bindings one after another, snapping open portals in a direct line with where they would go.

The results were… staggering.

There was a staccato of sonic concussions as each tore outward along a different trajectory.

The air itself seemed to tear open with fire, very akin to her dissolution breath, but somehow with a different quality to the heat.

There was an afterimage-like effect of superheated air in perfectly straight lines from the now closed portals to the edge of the cell, sometimes more than a mile away. At the edge of the small reality, the now somewhat liquified tungsten made another series of concussive explosions, shredding everything near at hand.

As to the copies that were between the portals and the edge of the cell?

They were blown apart.

More accurately—as Tala’s enhanced perception and threefold sight gave her incredible detail and minute insight—they each had a hole blown clean through them, the parts of their body that had been in the hole forced out and back, laden with so much heat and force, that the copies were blown apart, the bones and other hard bits becoming shrapnel that shredded those around them as the debris expanded in a vertical ring perpendicular to the tungsten’s flight—though it was biased backward making the zones of destruction more like cones than flat planes.

This was as obliterating to the vegetation as it was to the other copies.

Speaking of which, to call what remained of the near area a ‘forest’ was no longer accurate. To be generous, one could call it a wasteland clearing in the middle of a bedragged forest.

Regardless, as the shock of her final salvo faded, and the copies finally noticed the absence of the breach, Tala was able to see them raging, crying, and consoling each other as they tried to deal with the wounded or scrabbled at the ground where the breach had been.

In this case, ‘deal with the wounded’ was simple, quick execution. Even those with only minor wounds were summarily killed.

Efficient, I suppose? Dark, though.

As curious as she was about what would happen next, she didn’t want to risk discovery, so Tala withdrew her bloodstar clouds after that point.

Ideally, the prisoner would think that the cell was already resealed, and the myriad copies would believe that their unexpected chance was over.

Thus, Tala no longer had any battles to fight. So, she kept a close watch around the underwater breach until, finally, Alat signalled that they were done.

-See? Underwater is better.-

…Well, you might have been right, there is a good chance that if this was the first point of connection, it would have been noticed.

-I guess we’ll never know.-

I suppose not. Still, excellent work.

-You too.-

With a grin of triumph, and an effort of authority and will, Tala forced the water back and out of the tunnel, and Alat worked with Kit to twist, fold, tie, freeze, or otherwise manipulate reality to seal the cell once more.

And that was that.

Tala brought Terry back out to her shoulder, opening a small portal for him to flicker through, and he trilled contentedly before hunkering down and closing his eyes.

She stood before the block of obsidian, which was the physical component of the cell’s anchor.

She was exhausted, and as such, she didn’t actually return her threefold sight to her location for a few breaths. At the moment that she did, however, she saw the leader of the Defender unit standing at the entrance to the atrium, mouth agape and building fire in her eyes.

Well… that’s unideal timing.

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Comments

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter!

Alexander Dupree

Thanks! She’s got a fun conversation coming up!

UnderwhelmingBird

Humanity should make reality scissors part of everyday kit so they can snip those pesky reality threads. If they had, then Tala wouldn't have been put in a position to look like an ass. Clearly not her fault!

TheBotler

Tyftc and great work!

Stephanie Washburn

Hmm. I wonder whether that fire is admiration or anger?

Reed M

i think likely anger cuz like she just kind of disregarded the entire defender unit which is made up of experienced refined who are likely all way older than tala, and it probably also seemed kinda show-off-y

CherMi

I'm actually feeling secondhand social anxiety from this

benjamin s endicott

Not sure what the issue is, here. If a similar situation had come up with her own group (i.e., their paragon had determined a particular threat was beyond the team's capabilities, and handled it for them), they'd have accepted the decision of their superior and left it at that - not thrown a temper tantrum at not being included. It also stretches belief that nobody on the team recognizes her - mundanes in other cities know who Tala is, from the defender video restaurants, but people who've decided to step up and take on the role themselves are less knowledgeable of those they'll be working with?

Adurna

Please remember that her group was very chill and had some amazing people. Generally, having your mission sniped would feel like you are not trusted.

AntiClimax she her

Because she was an ass. She really should have communicated with the defender team, let them know what the danger was, what her plan was, and what the council decided. The defender team should have been informed and on standby in case Tala ended up needing help containing, and without repositioning the entrance she might have. It was inconsiderate and unnecessarily risked the mission. I understand why she did it, and she was probably right to not risk them with this prisoner, but she was wrong to not include them in the decision making process. There was a chance one or more of them had skills or utilities that would have been helpful, and assuming they were a green team, they'd have benefitted from the experience.

Disclancer

This chapter felt abit off in terms of Tala's power scaling. It was really cool to see her pull of free form magic, but she seems to have lost sight of the versatility of her general gravity manipulation inscriptions, I'd have thought she should be able to replecate crush as a general working of that inscription at this point and have had other breakthroughs in general manipulation of gravity. Don't get me wrong the accelerator is awesome and some proper paragon level projection of power, but its more a case of smart application than increasing skill or power.

nugitoBambino

really? I thought it was on point for Tala's magic ability. Don't get me wrong - if Tala had the ability to apply a field of gravitational force covering a space then that would have been a more efficient tactic here. But in the early books, Tala explicitly stated that she doesn't really 'understand' enough for a magical working the field effects of gravity, compared to her foundational magical thought of "two things attract" (or some close reworking of the wording there). She certainly could try to add a change to allow her to work with gravity as a field instead of manipulating the gravitational constant between two things (which is how I normally interpret her magic from a physical point). Still, that would need a dedicated arc / few chapters of new training to justify imo.

nugitoBambino

Yeah the issue here, to me, is that she didn't communicate with them. Strategically, her actions are fully justified, and she even got the ok from "command" (i.e. the council that was assigning the mission to re-close the cell). but she never took the fairly basic step to inform them this cell was too dangerous for them due to the particular magics in play, which she did to everyone else. She did everything right but communicate effectively, which I would say is quite rude.

nugitoBambino

whoo! gravity cannon coming online is awesome! tftc!

benjamin s endicott

Sure, she *could* have explained the situation to them. But would that have been the right call? They've already been portrayed as confrontational - getting pissy about not being able to *see* what a higher ranked mage is doing, and deciding they must be doing literally nothing? How many times did this exact scene play out with her own group? And they always respected the fact that paragons (and higher) can do things that are simply outside of their comprehension. Let's not forget that she is responsible not only for closing the cell, but doing so with the least number of casualties possible. If she can't trust the defenders to listen to her in a lethal situation - one in which she genuinely believes they cannot assist - why involve them? The chain of command was followed, and the council agreed with her assessment - this group was not capable of dealing with this particular threat. But there's going to be some sort of argument here, because that's where the plot was headed. Tala was even explicitly told not to transport the team, despite none of them having their own means, to further conceal her capabilities from them. Think about that, for a moment. These cells have been ramping up, they need dealt with as quickly as possible, and their group has to *walk* for undisclosed reasons, when they could have flown there in a fraction of the time? It makes no sense.

benjamin s endicott

It was explicitly stated that none of them recognized Tala, or know how quickly she rose through the ranks - they have no way to know how old she is. They also showed zero initiative in investigating the aperture with her, only wandering in after she'd completed the task. It's not really showing off, if you have no audience... But I agree, it's definitely anger.

UnderwhelmingBird

Muahaha I've caused a smidge of chaos! Jokes aside, whether or not it was the right move for her to make, she did end up doing it in a way that is inherently a dick move. The cell teams are certainly highly qualified, and they were mentally committed to doing the assignment, which is gonna put a lotta mental stress when Tala wasn't really communicating her intentions. She was like a single instrument playing off-key in an orchestra grating at the minds of people who needed to be in the zone. Then wraps up the cell before anyone has a chance to realize what's really happening. As if calling out the entire orchestra only to send them back as they've just unpacked. Bad metaphor usage, but meh. Anyhow. Sure, yes, they absolutely would have died. And they probably would have been a bit pissy about the situation if they were involved in the decision making process. But all Tala did was kick the can a little further down the road while all-but-assuring the worst possible reaction. There's a difference between straining a relationship and burning bridges. In the end though? 100% Tala, definitely. Not only is she having trouble w/ the emotional weight of forming ties to another group that may die, she's just pretty shit at interpersonal skills in general, haha. She's a sweetheart and an amazing fighter but so horribly inept at interacting with people. I love the fire in all the comments

Dino

I went back and double checked to clarify - the council did not approve her handling this by herself. They approved her general understanding of the prisoner and her basic approach. Her deciding to try alone was based on the fact that she could back out easily - closing the cell is effectively instant and easy, and that she couldn't protect the defender unit from powers of this type very well. On first read I thought she was being impulsive and sensitive about losing more people but I think she actually thought this through reasonably well, though of course other things could have gone wrong and this could have been much worse.

Barry P

I was just wondering the other day if Tala had permanently moved on from her original gravity magics...