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Tala slept well and woke early, the night and day passing in a blur. Though she felt some tension from the upcoming battle, she did her best to focus on what she could do, rather than what she couldn’t control.

She spent most of the day in meditation, sifting through Tali’s memories and experiences for things that she could learn. Though, she didn’t just sit quietly while she meditated.

Tala used the opportunity to familiarize herself with the Way of Flowing Death.

-Blood, Tala. It’s the Way of Flowing Blood.-

Oh, yeah. That makes more sense.

-…you already knew that. Why get it wrong on purpose?-

Way of Flowing Death sounds better.

-But Death doesn’t flow. Blood does.-

…fine. Way of Flowing Blood.

Thus, Tala spent the day refining her understanding of the fighting style, allowing Tali’s instincts and memories to guide her.

When it was time for the competition, what would most likely be a bloody battle to the death, Tala made her way to the battleground.

On the far side of the hold, a circle of short cliffs surrounded a lowland nearly two hundred yards across.

Down below the cliffs, the ground was level and covered in thick, well-established clover.

Good footing, springy. No obvious means for terrain advantage.

All the members of the House, in residence in Platoiri or visiting for this event, surrounded the arena on comfortable seating, each seat seemingly individualized to the member.

Servants swarmed around the cliff top, seeing to the needs of their masters.

Sanguis’s Eskau was greeting each guest, candidate, or potential Pillar as they arrived, and Tala gave the man a courteous nod. I can be respectful.

Pallaun, Sanguis’s Eskau, had returned around midnight. He had been delayed in his return, which is why he had missed the feast. If rumors that Tali had heard over the previous few days were correct, Pallaun had been sent to crush a minor house, which had almost succeeded in kidnapping one of Sanguis’s daughters, a girl who had just reached marriageable age.

The minor house had intended to force a marriage between her and their heir, thus gaining official entry into the House of Blood.

It had been a foolish attempt, though sound in principle.

One week earlier, mere hours after the failed kidnapping, Pallaun had entered their hold, breaking down the magical reinforced door and storming in, alone.

A minor house would not have an elite, but they would be far from helpless. Many minor houses had the ability to field an elite, but chose to spread those armaments out among their best warriors, rather than concentrating them.

It wouldn’t have mattered.

It seemed that Tali had cultivated some of the servants as sources of news, because one had approached Tala that morning to inform her that an empty minor hold had been added to the vault along with more than two dozen vestiges, though they’d used different terms for the armor and weaponry.

Pallaun had returned with spoils of conflict and no prisoners.

He’d used a vestige to lock down the door before spending nearly a week hunting down everyone who’d been in the hold: house members, servants, and even guests unlucky enough to be visiting at the time.

The hue-folk man stood just taller than Tala, his protian weapon worn as a knife on his belt. Aside from the belt, simple breaches, and sandals on his feet, he wore nothing else.

His head was clean shaven, and his obsidian eyes matched his skin so closely that he looked like nothing so much as a three-dimensional shadow. His skin so dark that it was hard to see the contours of his leanly muscled frame.

Tala could feel power radiating off of him, even though she couldn’t see any spell-lines or aura.

No one knew what rank he held, but his protian weapon was thousands of years old. House lore held that his family had wielded the weapon for generations, though no record could easily be found of it changing hands.

A smile broke the obsidian man’s face. “Tali, you will not fail today. This I know.”

As they had lived in the same hold for at least six months, Tali and Pallaun had sparred quite often.

Tali had never beaten the man.

Pallaun usually fought with as many handicaps as he could think of.

After one particularly infuriating day, Tali had collapsed to ground, weeping in frustration, and he had promised to never fight her blindfolded again.

It didn’t improve Tali’s chances, but it had been less humiliating.

Pallaun was a terror.

And likely the greatest threat to our ever escaping…

-Yeah… though, it is possible that he wouldn’t interfere, if he were to learn the truth.-

Or he would kill us on the spot.

-That is a possibility, yes.-

Thorn seemed to have been a bit behind Tala, and he grumbled a complaint while regarding the larger man. “What is this favoritism, Eskau Pallaun?”

Tala half turned to regard the dwarf, even as Pallaun responded.

The dark man’s grin widened. “Is it favoritism to speak of the sunrise? Besides, have you even seen her today? She looks positively marvelous. Almost like me.”

Thorn glanced towards Tala, and then did a double-take.

Had he really not noticed?

-From the back, the difference is pretty hard to see. Now that you’re turned to be able to see him, though?-

Pallaun continued. “Though, in her case, she’s offset her perfection with…” he waved dismissively in her direction, "...gaudy manifestations of power.”

Thorn just stared. “How… what? You can’t possibly think that magical armor of any kind, let alone that blatant, will be permitted.”

Tala shrugged and smiled. “This magic is all mine. Even so, Revered Sanguis will be final arbiter of what is allowed.”

The full Eskau beamed, his too-white teeth flashing in the afternoon light, fake though it was. “You see? She is magnificent, more than a match for those set against her.”

Thorn glared, while seeming a bit more hesitant. “Some of us are unknown to you, great Pallaun.”

Pallaun’s smile quirked. “I would not be so sure of that, acerbic Thron.”

Did…did he just get Thorn’s name wrong? Was that on purpose?

-I have no idea.-

Tala was at a loss. It was kind of funny, but she didn’t understand what was going on, and she certainly wasn’t going to do anything that might be perceived as laughing at Pallaun.

The dwarf stiffened, his green skin becoming slightly translucent.

Is that like a human paling? Or reddening?

-Or both?-

Not helpful.

Thorn didn’t say another word as he hurried past, but Pallaun called after him. “Fight well, candidate to be my companion. Choose your path wisely. Today will be filled with weighty decisions.”

Thorn hesitated at that, glancing back. Then, he gave a slow nod, his gaze flicking to Tala for a brief moment.

Pallaun regarded Tala once more. “Go. You are delaying, young human. Do not shame me, or I will take a leg, and force you to hop about for your first year of official duty.”

Something deep within Tala, likely from Tali, screamed that it was neither idle threat nor joke.

Tala swallowed convulsively and bowed, lower this time. She pulled the proper wording for her response from Tali. “I will endeavor to bring honor to the House.”

Pallaun grunted, before turning to greet the next guest, a minor member of the House.

Tala did her best to not flee from the man, even as she hurried on her way.

She walked down the meandering path, which wove among the elevated seats, each positioned to get a good view of most of the arena below.

There would also be magical viewing devices that would allow closer viewing of the active engagements.

Not all arcane magical items were vestiges, and in many ways they seemed to be ahead of humanity in that field.

We should try to get our hands on schematics, if at all possible.

-Let’s call that our…third? Yes, our third priority.-

After escaping alive and taking as much as we can with us?

-Precisely.-

I knew I liked you. She considered for a moment longer. You know, as many vestiges as we’ve seen, I feel like there should be more.

-You know that not every Mage or fount can be made into a vestige. And not every vestige can be used for any given item. Indeed, only a few can have their capacity grown at all, which limits the number for high powered items even further.-

I know all that. Even so, they’ve been doing this for thousands of years. I’d have thought there’d be more. She couldn’t explain it beyond that.

-Maybe they degrade, or break?-

Could be, yeah. I suppose we’ll see.

Be-thric would not be speaking to her before the battle. Instead, he’d sent simple information her way, earlier that day.

Rel, Alop, and Girro were all diametrically opposed to her, either because of their masters, or their own prejudices. They may even surrender to her, in the hopes of being let into her service to undermine or kill her later.

Blu-dine, Ogi, and Thorn seemed to have no ill will specifically directed at her or Be-thric, and their masters shared that ambivalence. They weren’t friends or allies in any sense, but they wouldn’t be targeting her specifically.

Be-thric had also warned that the information might be incomplete or inaccurate. Apparently, the even split made him feel like things were not as they seemed.

Following what she knew from Tali, Tala finally came out from among the structured seating, and walked to the edge of the cliff.

Without hesitating, she stepped over the edge and dropped.

She fell for just more than a second, crouching upon impact to help absorb the landing.

The motion wasn’t necessary for Tala, not in the least, but it would have been required without her enhancements, and she didn’t want to give anything away.

Two others, the human-sized bearman, Ogi, and the Foxman, Alop, were already down in the pit, well-spaced from each other.

When she landed, they regarded her, then shifted, spacing themselves out once more, so that they were not too near one another or Tala.

Even as they moved, they were staring at her, shock evident on their animalistic features.

Tala grinned back at them but didn’t comment. She knew how she looked.

She was a black canvas, a perfect backdrop behind the spell-forms carved into reality itself by her magics.

She thrummed with power. Her aura would be hidden as well, increasing the eeriness to anyone who looked at her with mage-sight or the equivalent.

If the whispers Tala was picking up from the crowd looking down at them were any indication, many of the House members had just that.

That’s right, look upon the soon to be victor.

-Ah, yes. Pride is always the best way to ensure victory.-

Hey, in this case, pride came after the fall.

Alat groaned.

Get it? Because I just dropped off that short cliff?

-Of course I get it, Tala. I saw the pun form in your mind, then I had to hear you project it at me, and now I have the memory forever ingrained within us.-

Tala chuckled to herself and shook her head.

The other candidates gave her odd looks and continued to keep their distance.

That’s right. The human girl is crazy. Let someone else deal with her.

Over the next few minutes, the other candidates arrived, one by one.

As each dropped into the pit, the others shifted to stay as far away from each other as possible.

Tala decided to not be stubborn unnecessarily, moving when appropriate. I mean, we’re about to kill each other, so there’s no call to be rude.

-You’re all sorts of fun today.-

You know it.

As things shook out, Tala had Blu-dine and Ogi flanking her. The blue skinned woman and lanky bearman regarded her warily but maintained even spacing.

Without fanfare or obvious magics, Sanguis was suddenly floating above the center of the arena. “Greetings, House of Blood.”

There was a great sound of shuffling and rustling of cloth as everyone turned to regard the Pillar.

“We know why we are here. Potential Pillars, take your places behind your candidates, up on the cliff.”

Tala saw all the potential Pillars take their places.

“No outside interference will be acceptable, from the potential Pillars or other watchers.” Sanguis spun in a slow circle, sweeping his hard-eyed gaze over the crowd.

That done, he looked down at those in the pit.

“The cliff walls are impervious to anything you are capable of but keep your magics contained. I’d hate for one of the bystanders to be killed.”

He could just keep magics from passing in or out of the pit, right? Why the threats and warnings?

“I will now inspect each of you for external magics.”

Tala had left Kit back in her room for this exact reason. Instead, she had a simple leather pouch with a dozen small river rocks.

Sanguis floated down in front of Thorn. The shorter candidate was just off to the left of being most directly in front of Tala. If Tala was at the ‘6’ position of a clock, Thorn would have been at the ‘10’ location, or near enough.

Sanguis took only a moment, inspecting the dwarf with his magics, before nodding and moving on.

When he stopped in front of Tala, she felt magic forced around her iron paint with seeming ease, and her entire being was scanned by power nearly three whole tiers more dense and powerful than her own half-step Refined magic.

-That’s not a real ranking.-

Until you give me a better option, I’m using it.

Sanguis nodded once, then moved on.

Once he’d inspected each candidate, he returned to his position, hovering in the center of the arena.

“I have found no breach of the rules.”

Tala swept her competition with her mage-sight one last time and noticed something interesting. Each and every one of them seemed to be building up power within their protian weapons spell-forms.

They’re getting ready to transform as soon as possible.

Derag, standing just behind the opponent  who was almost directly opposite Tala, raised his voice. “I have an objection.”

What now?

Girro, Derag’s candidate, just smirked, his eyes fixed on Tala.

Sanguis shook his head slightly before turning to address Derag. “What is your objection?”

The slender, red-skinned man gestured towards Tala. “The human is clearly coated in magics. Her clothing is magical, and her weapon is magical and not a protian weapon. More over, she doesn’t even look human. She’s coated in something.”

“Those are observations, not objections.” Sanguis’s tone was clipped and precise. His voice came out even more harshly than his characteristic growl.

Derag blinked back at the Pillar. “How is any of that allowed?”

“Those are her own magics, as was prescribed by the rules set forth. She is soul bound to the weapon and her garments, the coating on her skin is not magical, nor a weapon, so is not forbidden, and the magic you see around her is also from herself.”

Derag paled slightly, his skin tone moving slightly towards pink.

Girro, down in the pit, glared even more fiercely at Tala.

Well, that bit of intel was correct, at least.

Sanguis pivoted in the air once more. “Unless there are any other objections?”

There was silence from the crowd.

“Good. Oh. One final thing, candidates. No power will be allowed to filter in during the battle. You have only what is in there with you.”

All the candidate’s eyes widened, except Tala’s; she grinned.

“Begin.”

Four things happened at once.

First, six protian weapons transformed, almost in unison, though they took radically different forms, and Flow whipped sideways into Tala’s right hand, transforming into a sword.

Second, two of the candidates dropped to one knee, speaking clearly for all to hear: “I surrender to…” Blu-dine surrendered to Alop and Girro. Alop surrendered to Girro.

So, those three have no cause to fight, and the hierarchy is established, regardless of if any of them are slain…Great.

Third, all the other candidates, even those who were moving to kneel and surrender, threw their aura’s outward, trying to scoop up and draw in as much power as possible. As a result, the area was suddenly utterly bereft of power, each candidate sucking up as much as they could in an instant.

Fourth, and finally, Tala attempted a lock on every other candidate. Five failed. One stuck.

CRUSH. Tala threw five cycles of crush at the target, slamming Blu-dine down into the clover with more than a thousand times regular gravity, even as she finished surrendering.

The blue woman didn’t have breath left to scream as she popped like a dropped melon.

One.  She immediately began dumping power into a target-less gravity augmentation for three of the stones in her pouch. She connected as many, large void-channels as she could to each increase, letting her gaze sweep the already chaotic arena.

Tala watched Thorn bring a flanged, pole-mace down towards Girro, even as the dwarf lunged for the red man.

But she didn’t have attention to spare. She spun to the side, barely moving out of the way of a spear thrust from Ogi. It was an insanely long spear, at nearly four times the man’s height, but it was still a spear.

Tala put her back towards her downed opponent, trusting in her mirrored perspective to warn her if anyone came at her from behind.

Her bloodstar moved into position, two drops orbited her head to provide Alat with a 360° perspective, another drop moved to hover near the back of her skull, while the bar lifted to float behind her neck, the ball coming to its place in front of her sternum.

All that happened in an instant, before Ogi’s spear morphed into a bladed chain, jerking sideways to try to wrap around her.

Tala dropped below the sweeping strike, even while her rod and ball moved to deflect and trap the chain.

Right, that was my guard position, not Tali’s.

While the tungsten was engaging the bear-man’s protian weapon, Tala flung Flow forward, flicking her wrist at the last moment to send the blade whirling across the short distance.

Ogi gestured upward, and vines shot up with precise timing, catching Flow’s handle and keeping it from hitting him.

Oh… So, there is some terrain advantage after all.

-MOVE!-

Tala jumped upward from her ducking crouch, just as a scythe on the end of a long chain whipped through the space she’d just been in.

-They aren’t pursuing you, they just took a shot at your back.-

Ogi’s weapon changed again, as he jerked it backwards, and the blade at the end of the chain sliced against her back as it passed.

Power blossomed from the weapon, clashing with her magical defenses.

It didn’t get through, but it did knock her back downward, just as another pulse of magic from the bear-man caused vines to shoot up and snag her ankles.

Well, that’s irritating.

Tala expanded her aura and broke Ogi’s hold on the vines. That didn’t cause them to release, but it did weaken them enough that she pulled out of them with ease.

She pulled Flow back to her hand and continued to dump power into the targetless gravity augmentation on three of the stones in her pouch.

This is going to be a bit of a slog.

-Did you expect to win, instantly?-

No, but it would have been nice.

Tala narrowed her eyes and charged.

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Comments

Steffen

Thank you for the chapter!

Hibou Ronchon

Well, I don't get the hate. I like it :) A change of pace/tone is not a bad thing.

Alex LeBlanc

You've got "idol threats," over "idle threats".

ImBaroqe

Why couldn’t Tali fight here? Since so many people have seen her fight and can easily find something is amiss. In the heat of battle she can hardly focus on acting like Tali would

Stuart Anderson

Why on earth is Tala fighting and not Tali? Tali has trained every day for this surely she’s better prepared.

Matt S.

Yeah, this does seem very strange given all the internal dialogue with Alat about how acting exactly like Tali in public events is super duper important.

Biomass

Because as long as she wins it doesn't matter. Bethric can't then immediately get rid of her or out her because her continued existence is required for him to maintain any power he gains. And because the memory rebuild takes a long time he can't even wipe her and start again because he wouldn't be able to explain her absence. The moment she wins she is in a mutually assured destruction situation with her kidnapper.

BRUNO ASTUR

For one, I believe that it is to give Tala, and not Tali, agency during the fight. For two, I believe it is to let her captor see that there is something wrong and start to worry about his future.

twentytoo

are all the furries "evil" in this world?

Stuart Anderson

Oh I get the out of story reasons, and I think your right. But in story I find it borderline idiotic to not even consider it. Tala has the right to make the choice of course, I just would have liked a very brief consideration of it.

BRUNO ASTUR

She had already decided to fight instead of Tali. She never, once, considered letting Tali fight. And I understand the desire to take her destiny in her hands and not in the doll/slave of her captor.

J.L.Mullins

I think a furry is someone who dresses like an animal? So...there are none? [Not an expert by any means.]

fennek

I had a strange thought: this is the wildest setup for the shortest tournament arc I've ever seen :D

J.L.Mullins

🤣 That's pretty funny. Though, I think Salvos' tournament arc was quicker: "Wait, I can't kill the other competitors and gain experience? Hard pass." 😉

Robin Richards

An empty minor hold in armory you say? It's a vestige artifact and I'm not sure if you can extract the vestige and then use the remains to merge with another artifact, but I really hope you can. I bet even a minor hold would give Kit a big volume increase and possibly some additional functions too. I think that Tala should have explicitly decided to fight herself instead of Tali rather than just doing so without forewarning. Without that warning it just throws you out of immersion a little. I really want to know what Sanguis and Be-Thric's relationship is. I'm sure Sanguis could have nitpicked Tala to death precluded her weapon and armor and iron paint, instead he appears to be giving both Tala and Be-Thric a fair shot in the competition. Be-Thric found a loophole that let him continue to try for the the Pillar position, but Sanguis appears to be willing to let him without putting any obvious roadblocks in the way. Sanguis seems to be happy to get Be-Thric as a pillar even if he has to live with a human Eskau to get him. I wonder why that is.

Hajakuja

Ok, I don’t normally comment but I feel like I have to say that I’m liking these chapters quite a bit. I don’t understand the hate but also I’ve read other stories that went in a direction that I didn’t like and I dropped them, quietly, without making a fuss like a lot of people seem to be doing. Of course constructive criticism is good but come on, most of the ‘criticism’ during this arc is just whining. Keep up the good work J. L. Mullins

rbot

Does Alat have archive access from there? Maybe she can get latest research and other minds working on espionage and escape ideas? Also, I love the idea of Tala integrating the iron and gold collars into her skin and inscriptions and gaining some independence for an all-out long-term survival arc without access to iron paint or inscriptionists. I can just imagine the incredulous looks upon her return when she just starts eating gold coins after fights to get her crush rings back

Matt H

I'll try to give a real response here, although I can obviously only speak for myself. First, you're correct that even if people are disappointed and are going to drop the story they should try to be polite about it and not needlessly rude and antagonistic. As for where the "hate" comes from it's pretty simple for me: mind-control and enslavement are hard passes for me. If a story goes that route I immediately lose interest in it, plain and simple. I believe there are other ways to make an MC experience hardship and do world building without resorting to either of those topics (unless the story was already dark to begin with, e.g. Worm). If they are temporary things I might try to skim the chapters to get a high level view and then continue with the story. But of the last three stories I did that with I still ended up dropping two after a while and my interest in the third one is dwindling as well. And like I said before, I don't think it's right to start being rude to the author and other readers, but I DO understand where some of that emotion comes from. It's disappointing and frustrating for a story that I've loved, looked forward to, and have supported take a much darker tone and cross some of my personal lines. And there's not much constructive criticism I can give from my perspective other than saying "Don't do this" which I can imagine can be seen as whining. I'm glad others are still enjoying the story and I wish the author well with the story, but, sadly, it's no longer something for me.

LeJordon

I think it's been pretty clear throughout this story that mind control and enslavement have occurred throughout human history in regards to the arcane species. Especially if you take into account that the first mage human beings were enslaved and turned into fonts before breaking from arcane control and founding their own cities. Now we are just experiencing it first hand through Tala's perspective. Your "frustrating for a story that I've loved, looked forward to, and have supported take a much darker tone and cross some of my personal lines" doesn't really make sense to me since this whole world has dark elements woven throughout it's history. If you couldn't pick up on that in the over 200 chapters you read maybe you should work on your reading comprehension, but that's just my opinion lol

Robin Richards

She has archive access to Tala's personal storage but not full access to the entire Archive. I'm not sure how that interacts with data Tala uploads and then gives access to Holly or the Bandfast City Lord etc. It's plausible that if someone is monitoring Tala's files that there could be some sort of collaboration between Tala and say Holly or Jevin or Noelle to solve some technical issues like the collar. There are lots of potential options for Tala's progression over and above whatever she has already received. The dasganachs, remnants of protian weapons, the minor hold. Terry's progression. Whatever she ends up with I'm looking forward to it.

Robert

Fan of the arch I was hesitant during the first chapter cause it disrupted the sweet sweet dopamine but I'm digging it. Criticism - kit hasn't been addressed as far as I remember, is she getting fed? Is she acting out as the consumer and eating fonts and minor arms? In later drafts accentuate the non human characters more in simple but 'showy' ways. Breathes moving feathers in frantic cascades of color when flustered, only to smooth out into a sea of evergreen forests as they calmed. Tinkling bells of his skin resonating with the swirling winds as he cocked his head, eyebrow raised, a chime of tin and FAAFO. Giving a couple paragraphs of painted characters followed by slowly honing in on what you want the reader to remember them for or opine about them is a tried and true method. Feathers that reflect light becomes a second body language that you the writer can use to emote/trope/foreshadow etc. And one can make it as simply as fire light shimming off shivering feathers 'creating cascading waves on the cave wall's', or 'turning falling snow into stars,' or 'moving eyes in the darkness of the trees surrounding them'. Much love for the writing, can't wait to read more.

Melting Sky

Perhaps the single most important advice any creator should take to heart is the tried and true adage that the best way to please no one is to try and please everyone. There is no surer path to mediocrity. Although there will always be a very vocal minority that screeches bloody murder any time a protagonist encounters any sort of significant obstacle or setback that they can't immediately and effortlessly overcome there is a reason that conflict is considered a crucial element in 95% of the story types that exist.

Robin Richards

The very first chapter has someone manipulating Tala's mind, it's subtle and its importance only becomes apparent later in the story but it is there. I don't think anyone who's read the 200+ chapters is likely to have failed to comprehend the underlying darkness of Tala's world. I think they just prefer it not to be centered in the way that capturing and enslaving Tala does. I disagree and since J.L. Mullins has not been going on a GRRM style rampage to prove that no character is safe even after being captured my expectation is that she will ultimately survive and even thrive and I'm happy to enjoy the journey to get there.

George Hicken

Isn’t Tali a better fighter though? I seem to remember mention of substantial improvements- we see a bit of it in Tala having flawed posture when she first takes over. I can see why Tala wouldn’t be able to take a back seat in the fight even if that gave her better odds and she could have jumped in if Tali was losing. Was hoping Alat would bring up the option to have it shot down. Or that she’d have spent the night trying to adsorb Tali’s improvements rather than meditating.

George Hicken

Then have Alat bring it up, and Tala shoot it down. To not acknowledge the option at all is awkward for readers.

john smith

Technically there's like, 2-3 types and they're all called the same thing which is confusing. There's the ones who wear the suits (I personally call them yiffers) there's the ones who find anthro morphic characters attractive, ala maid Marian in Robbin hood or Lola bunny ect. And then there's a third type I cant remember well enough to describe. Some people also call anthro characters furries but that's rather debatable. It depends on what kind the OP actually meant.

AgentFransis

Pallaun is Mr. Popo isn't he? He went to establish the pecking order.

Robin Richards

She had full read access to the whole archive but could only write to her personal storage (ch 199). While outside the city she could not write to a shared document. Her max range was almost 1000 miles but her connection would be spotty over the last 100 or so.