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andrew rousseau

Damn trigger aint playin, also ngl half expect her to wanna stick around and try to get in on the crew after that show of loyalty to triggers crew

br2nd66

she saw triggers inner beast. considering every time, it's been mentioned I get the feeling of a dragon or a wyvern. she saw a very protective apex predator that would end her in less than a heartbeat.

Duke of Coffee

Knew it, the Skunk shows up as a crew member.

wretched Cat

I have a feeling he just bombarded her with all the memories of the war.

DorMaelStrum

Woo. Someone just stared into the abyss that is trigger, and blinked. Awesome read, thank you for the story again!

clagann

I love the trope of mind reader meets sentient rage and is immediately horrified

Vitruvius

">DISTANCE: 12.7_METERS" exactly 500 inches

cccmiller

Am I the only one who read 'purple furred skunk' and thought Fifi La Fume? Because that's now my mental image for this character.

Ally LeDoux

I think Lars has a familial connection to a psychic; perhaps an abuelita or a sister? The ethics of this are obviously personal to him, and he seems like his loyalties are tied very closely to his family. Interested to see how his connection unfolds. Also, I understand his purpose in the narrative but Jesus effing Christ, Eli is by FAR the most unlikeable character in any of your stories I've ever read. He's becoming so insufferable that I regret him getting as much screen time as he does. Remaining hopeful he'll have SOME kind of redemptive story arc, because we're approaching the threshold where even the most Tragic Backstory would not change my opinion of him.

Motanium

I actually like Eli because he is an unrepentant salty racist asshole, makes for an interesting crew dynamic.

Ally LeDoux

Yeah, different strokes and all that. Again I understand he's written specifically to be unpalatable, but I hate him. I also know that a lot of people probably don't share my opinion, but it doesn't really change anything.

Tyson Bailey

Sooooo, Mink or Skunk, which will be split first? Bets, please.

SINNEP

Mink, skunk pissed Tigger off

Tyson Bailey

I think skunk, she seems to be more aggressive.

wretched Cat

I know we are all rooting for the mink, but I'm also holding out hope for Jodie the coyote, she reminds me of another mechanic.