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Heya. The next BoC chapter is getting there, but I hit a point I want to sleep on and return back to. I still want to write, though, and to keep on the topic of pokemon, so the Untitled Sylveon Project got a second chapter. Still not sure if I want to pick this up.

As with last time, romance between a pokemon and a human (both consenting and adults) is a central point. You've been warned. There is no explicit material in this chapter (or at all in the story yet)https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PJ1MKulauH4N9HHpcIjGZ0GB0PnCmEutLQztDSAP6wM/edit?usp=sharingEnjoy.

Comments

Pidge

The Realization(tm) had me giggling. When I realized who the three in the last bit were, though, I had to muffle my cackling to avoid waking the neighbors. Great chapter! I would love to read more, but if you're not feeling it, no pressure. I'm really enjoying the other writing you're doing as well!

Geemot

Horrifying. Thanks for the chapter!

Jericho Rising

Pretty good; mind I normally dont exactly read this kind of stuff. Helps that you made the sylveon feel humanized.

Jack Mortzheim

I still really like the concept and would love to read more, I just think the isekai part is unnessasary. It doesn't seem to add anything to Jared's charactor and I think it takes away from the reality of the story. One of the things I've liked about both this and Borne of Caution is how down to earth the stories are compared to most Pokemon fanfic. I like the real life problems they face like budgeting to take good care of multiple pokemon, dealing with the annoying laws that would pop up in a world with pokemon, and actually having a plan for what comes after the league. With Lee it's a core part of his story and charactor, with Jared (so far) it seems like a pointless add-on. Everything he's mentioned so far (things he knows that he shouldn't) could easily be explained by being a tech support guy who works for people who don't know how to really keep a file secret and who owns a literal living program to come accross things he shouldn't see. I just think that the reincaration trope makes him to much of a chosen one and reduces the slice of life enjoyment that is what I love about this and BOC.

cccmiller

Jared is not prepared for the trouble he's about to get in. Especially when it's double.

Nope

Devious, there will be so many shenanigans afoot with the Rocket Trio there!

Duke of Coffee

Wow... lol poor Jared didn't read the fine print. Anyway those three are TR Jessie, James and Meowth or new people entirely? Well now I wonder if Giovanni is getting him to be in TR payroll by subtle means. 😆 🤣

William M.

And now I'm even more engaged in this. It's hilarious, serious, and intriguing all at once.

Uscufknsucufkcye

I think this is great, but I don't see how the isaki part adds anything to it. It just feels tagged on like another AAA game hiting another marketing checkbox