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DT chapter may take more time. I have obligations this weekend. Please enjoy.Borne of Caution Act 2: Ch 24 is ready

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Hazel Collections

Getting all emotional at work reading this chapter

Jericho Rising

Same here. Feels like new beginnings. As if we've finally moved on from everything holding Lee back. Every worry accounted for, every problem being worked towards fixing. The journey and everything in the past is finally resolved. It's now time to look to the future.

Phoenix Bugg

The Onion Ninjas are here again.... Great chapter Fuggman!

Signal

The poem/eulogy goes hard.

MrPerson0

Man, that ending got me. That was a great chapter!

BelligerentGnu

Oh man, goosebumps. I need Sylveon and especially Octillery's perspectives so badly.

V

Yup, I teared up.

Waluigi

Oh man I hope we get the Pokémon’s perspectives on that ending. I have so many thoughts about what they are thinking, especially Octillery and Sylveon. Damn.

Memoryofgold

Wow that was a beautiful chapter, I got a bit teary eyed there. Also, thank you for using 'bemused' properly lol

Cynocephali

Astoundingly beautiful chapter here. Good job!

PXRB

Sobbing rn

Kendelle Trotter

Completely unrelated to the chapter, but thinking on it, hyperbeam doesn't seem quite as restricted in this setting and the power is still absolutely devastating. Sylveon with that would be terrifying. Other strong moves would be Calm Mind, Hypervoice, Fake Tears, Reflect/Lightscreen, and once she levels up enough she gets Psych-Up too.

Guilherme Paschoaletto

I think Lee did consider (in a previous chapter) Hyper Beam (specially if he could get a copy from Ty), and also that he would ask Zinnia's Altaria to teach Hyper Voice

Kendelle Trotter

I don't recall but I believe you. And yeah Sylveon would be the ultimate candidate for those moves. A pixilated hyperbeam will be guaranteed to take out at least one target

CM

Thanks for the chapter! I know others have already said it, but I too would love to see Octillery's and Sylveon's perspective from thia chapter.