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This chapter ballooned into something huge so I'm splitting it up into an interlude and a full chapter that I am currently still editing. Here is the interlude. It's a little short, but it's something to read while I fix up the full chapter into something presentable.

Borne of Caution Act 2 - Interlude 5 is ready HELP EDIT: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uMsSXYRIng-LrjxeqhJaprma5gT04dFb/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=116303056270228689575&rtpof=true&sd=true READ ONLY: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1omrKh3ep688J_wKTdDmeCz61d6GBmKrp3TxykbZPxHY/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Phoenix Bugg

Yes!!! Fuggman I missed you today is a much better day now. Love the interlude can't wait for the chapter happy holidays!

WirelessGrapes

Oh my god Shinx is so fucking adorable

Streetwise

Dude, I was not prepared for those feelings. Two very different perspectives, but Holy man those were tear worthy

Alejandro Talavera

I'm sitting here at work trying to hide my sniffles and tears. Thank you for this update

Rémi C.

Unexpectedly bittersweet interlude. For both of them. It's still so interesting to discover more about them !

Zyikic

How dare you start cutting these onions while I'm in a meeting. Great update

Leander

I‘m crying

BelligerentGnu

Jesus, Fuggmann, I was not ready for two consecutive heart-punches.

Waluigi

YESSSSS this is what I live for! These internal ruminations of each pokemon are perfect to flesh out the… vibe as a whole of this story. These interludes are perfect!

Aimee Hebert

Sniff sniff 😢 I’m not crying 😿

That Guy Kye

Amazing Vibe, both from Slyveon as well as Shinx. Thanks Fugg!

Morgan

Damned onion ninjas at it again!

Dnaps

Is it just me or is Shinx like intuitively good at counting and memorization? Like photography memory good?

Haschen

Yup, will be interesting to see the applications of that as she grows up

Haschen

Kinda wish we got one from Octillery too, it seems like the memorial was the first thing to pierce through his facade

S. Nutter

Hit me right in the feels, AGAIN.

Joeylumbley

The child understands Papa’s pain if only slightly

Straven

That was darn adorable of the little one. Painful with the other but clear and easily understandable.

Rorandes

I am convinced you are making it your job to make us cry. Just kidding. Nice chapter, I can’t wait for the other half!

V

Wonderful character development for both Sylveon and Shinx. Looking forward to seeing more of Corvi and Octillery's thoughts too.

Maltec

"Its a terrible day for rain."

Lark Sol

Thanks, this was a great chapter.

PXRB

🥲

Daulton Young

It was a good, sentimental chapter covering the perspectives of the different members on the team.

mikalman216

Awwwww man you made me cry

Rhett Sellers

same. some tear jerker moments in there for sure