SECOND BONUS STRIP FOR MAY 2024 - DOROTHY (Patreon)
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This is actually an unused strip that would've ran on May 15! I had Joyce and Joe walk off down the hallway in one strip, and only Joyce arrived back at her dorm room in the following strip, and figured I needed a little narrative buffer so as to cover for Joe's disappearance. And so I wrote this internal monologue from Dorothy walking down the hallway to meet Walky.
And my wife read it and said THAT'S WEIRD AND I DON'T LIKE IT! Well, fine. It doesn't actually add anything to the narrative itself, so I just yanked it out and scooted all the subsequent strips forward a day. And no readers really remarked on Joe's disappearance between strips, so it was all good, I guess.
but here's the strip now anyway, as a bonus strip
4/24 second bonus strip: https://www.patreon.com/posts/second-bonus-for-103904244
6/24 second bonus strip: https://www.patreon.com/posts/second-bonus-for-107639682