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(also amber's line in the first panel was rewritten to have a better conversational flow)

(final strip above)

I thought Amber's line in the final panel cannibalized the strip that follows too much.  Ethan needs to come into his accusation clean.  That's about all.  I rewrote like a dozen other final panels to replace it, but didn't save any of them except the one that actually ran.  

One bit I do remember is deciding at one point to keep Amber's "alarmingly cute" phrase with Ethan suggesting in return "alarmingly cute or acutely alarming????" which lasted, like, 2 seconds, but well

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Bagge

I really like this version too. Either way, Ethan's conversation skills are admirable

Angelo B.

Yeah, the original seems to have it's own flavor and I like it.

Davide V.

I kinda prefer the discarded one :) Anyway it's always great to see these "behind the scenes".